Forgotten Title 2 male, gets a slave each from that worlds godess/god.

I read a novel and now I can't remember the name at all. What i remember is that 2 male, and they both died on earth. The MC got a slave and the other dude too from the other worlds god, the world they transferd into was "dead" their was not much living things. I don't remeamber alot more but both of them got somekind of card that they choulde get points. The way they choulde get thise points was by setting a feeling that the wanted to make the slave feel (one time set) the MC wanted to get the slave to smile and the other dude wanted the his slave to lick his boots, I think.

Pls have murcy on my english, I'm not good at anything execpet reading.
And btw this is my first post on this forum pls take care of me <3.

 

Is that a original work?

 

I'm not sure but their was a whole volum.

 

I think it should be
Charging Magic With a Smile~ Infinite Magic Power After Being Reincarnated Into a Different World

 

http://www.novelupdates.com/series/...er-being-reincarnated-into-a-different-world/

 

Yes! Tanks to all of ya! <3

 

No problem, glad we could help.

 

I don't like to do the grammar nazi (because I'm not good enough in english to do it) but this burned my eyes: not choulde but should

 

Sorry, :'(

 

Btw, hachidori (the site hosting the novel) haven't updated for a month right? Is the translator ok? Last post saying he/she was sick or something.... Any new news?

 

It's not too bad to burn someone's eyes. It's still readable as far as I can see.

 

It's a good novel so far,hope it keeps getting updated

 

Yes it's readable, it's just that this one was, I don't know, too obvious ?

 

Wait what? I think i saw a BL genre >.>

 

XD

 

Ehh still better than a lot people you should see mine when I try to write in another language

 

English is weird with all of its rules but unless they are pointed out you won't ever know and I am not pointing them out to be rude because I don't like grammar perfectionists outside of teachers and professors. I think you understand English enough to recognize some of the problems if you see them.

"transferred" needs 2 r's
"remember" does not have an a
"a lot" is a big one people get wrong, it is always 2 words.
"some" kind is 2 words
"these" is the word I believe you wanted in this instance as it is for multiple objects, "this" is singular
"mercy" is spelled with an e
"except" is the correct spelling and means does not include. "accept" sounds almost the same and means to agree.

 

The novel was terrible
I couldn't help but wonder if it was written by middle school student high on hormones
For a world that have a race whose purpose is to be a slave it deserve to perish ( I mean come on they could have been created to be servant of gods or etc)
Leaving my opinion aside I do find the "summon to another world to rebuild it" theme interesting but that world should should still perish

 

This is a true Grammar Nazi !