Novel A Side character create his story in Martial World (Chapter 1 - Chapter 118)

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  1. Spnagi

    Spnagi Well-Known Member

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    Hello, this novel that I write has been in my brain for a long time, i had up to now the laziness of writing, i could not finish the story, when I wrote the first version of this story, it was very bad.
    Ah sorry, I meant the first chapters of the stories and sorry for the spelling, if there are mistakes in writing.
    MY TRAP
    Synopsis:


    In the country of Cai

    4 years ago, Li ming lost his cultivation, and reputation, becomes the clown of the
    town, one day when he gets bullies, Li ming drops the pendant from his grand father,
    he awakes his martial Spirit and restores his cultivation.

    In stormy weather, Li ming fight the henchman of top outer-disciple,
    the latter fall on the floor. When a soul fall from the sky, take his body and
    Yang Ling open his eyes.

    Random Young Master: you dare to betray me
    Yang ling : i don't have interest in men
    Random Young Master : you sister

    Crowd :the bride stealer is here
    Yang ling :she came to me herself

    Protagonist :you have changed
    Yang ling : I'm transmigrator

    Yang ling : Master i fall love with you
    Master : Kid i have the same age as you grandma

    Genre :Absent Parents, Artifacts, beautiful female lead, betrayal, character growth
    contracts, Death of loved ones, Elves,Fairies, Friendship,Hard-working protagonist
    Heavenly Tribulation, Loli, Male Protagonist, Martial spirits, Personality Changes,
    Previous Life Talent, Revenge, Romantic subplot, Special Abilities, Student-Teacher Relationship, Teamwork, Time Skip, Transplanted Memories, Weak to Strong

    Table of Contents

    • Arc 1 Realm of the Dead
    Glossary
    Prologue
    Chapter 1 Yellow Springs
    Chapter 2 The Mysterious being
    Chapter 3 Yuan chuang escape
    Chapter 4 Fall from the Bridge

    • Arc 2 Bad Reputation
    Chapter 5 Li Ming
    Chapter 6 The other Yang ling
    Chapter 7 Not the protagonist but a waste
    Chapter 8 Expelled from the clan
    Chapitre 9 Critical situation
    Chapter 10 Revenge of Mortals
    Chapter 11 "You are all regretting it ! All of 6you ! "

    Arc 3 Fight to live
    Chapter 12 The unnamed forest
    Chapter 13 Categories of demonic beasts
    Chapter 14 Giant Ape
    Chapter 15 Friend Betrayal
    Chapter 16 Meeting Half-elf
    Chapter 17 Remember my name kid, I am Xia kuan yin !
    Chapter 18 In the face of absolute strength
    Chapter 19 Spoiler
    Chapter 20 Burning fist
    Chapter 21 Survive the fight
    Chapter 22 Meeting Xia liwei Whisper
    Chapter 23 " The first seed of chaos "
    Chapter 24 Ice princess xue bing
    Chapter 25 An old man
    Chapter 26 IMPOSSIBLE
    Chapter 27 Baoiga's powder
    Chapter 28 The Cuscu Vampire Vine
    Chapter 29 Dragon's tail Hit the earth
    Chapter 30 Li ming battling Yang xiong
    Chapter 31 Mid-grade Spirit stone
    Chapter 31.5 Special chapter
    Chapter 32 Li ming's Martial spirit
    Chapter 33 The danger is approaching
    Chapter 34 Beginning of the calamity
    Chapitre 35 Beginning of the Calamity part 2
    Chapter 36 Yang ling and Li ming Breakthrough
    Chapter 37 They called me Pandora
    Chapter 38 Minako
    Chapter 39 Time dilation
    Author's note
    Chapter 40 Demonic Root monster
    Chapter 41 You are ... Brother Sun peng
    Chapter 42 Li xiu's despair
    Chapter 43 Chang yun the inner disciple
    Chapter 44 The Return of Xia kuan yin
    Chapter 45 Xia kuan yin teach Yang ling
    Chapter 46 Li ming save Yang ling
    Chapter 47 Kill Yang xiong
    Chapter 48 Before the final battle in the forest (part 1)
    Chapter 49 Before the final battle in the forest (part 2)
    Chapter 50 Before the final battle in the forest (part 3 )
    Chapter 51 Incantation Pandora's box
    Bonus chapter 51.5
    Chapter 52 Final battle in the forest
    Chapter 53 Final battle in the forest (part 2)
    Chapter 54 Final battle in the forest (part 3 )
    Chapter 55 Final battle in the forest (part 4) Ice princess ?
    Chapter 56 Final battle in the forest (part 5) Don't tell she is the female lead ?
    Chapter 57 Final battle in the forest (part 6) Last form of the Cuscu vampire vine
    Chapter 58 Final battile in the forest End ?
    Chapter 59 Final battle in the forest (Big mistake ?)
    Chapter 60 Final battle in the forest near the end
    Chapter 61 Final battle in the forest near the end part 2 (???)
    Chapter 62 Zhi mei lan appearance
    Chapter 63 Final battle in the forest True end "Kill Mei hua !"
    Chapter 64 Afterward
    Chapter 65 afterward 2
    Chapter 66 End of this arc

    Arc 4 Road to the four season sect
    Chapter 67 Pandora's weakness
    Chapter 68 the horrible Chang yun and the unlucky Li xiu
    Chapter 69 Yang ling awaken
    Chapter 70The person with the flute seduces Xue bing and yang ling have to train
    Chapter 71 -18 Su yue
    Chapter 71.5 Bonus chapter III
    Chapter 72 (-18) Su yue part 2 End
    Chapter 73 “Challenge the Oath! The side character and the witch (Part 1) !”
    Chapter 74 "Challenge the Oath! The side character and the witch (Part 2)!"
    Chapter 75 "Challenge the Oath ! The side character and the witch (Part 3)(best part ?)
    Chapter 76 “Challenge the Oath! The side character and the witch (Part 4) ”
    Chaper 77 "Challenge the Oath ! The side character and the witch (end)
    Chapter 78 Pandora I order you to
    Chapter 79 Appearance of the legendary ...]
    Chapter 80 Beginning of the Persephone's tears project.
    Chapter 81 One strike
    Chapter 82 The Ultimate Strategy ?
    Chapter 83 This person is coming
    Chapter 84 Dream
    Chapter 85 I'm not the only one who can stop you
    Chapter 86 Pandora so you were really...
    Chapter 87 Xue bing fight Xia kuan yin (part 1)
    Chapter 88 Xue bing fight Xia kuan yin (part 2)
    Chapter 89 Xue bing fight Xia kuan yin end and Chang yun appear
    Chapter 90 Green-scaled snakes and Zhi mei lan wiggling her hair
    Chapter 91 The Elf in danger
    Chapter 92 The Elf in danger part 2
    Chapter 93 The Elf in danger part end
    Chapter 94 Killing Green-scaled snakes
    Chapter 95 Breakthrough to the Late 3 Qi layer
    Chapter 96 Pandora's wish
    Chapter 97 Tang Fushang
    Chapter 98 idiot !
    Chapter 99 "Hell's melody!"
    Chapter 100 "Familiar box "
    Chapter 101 Fight Su yue part 1
    Chapter 102 Fight Su yue part 2
    Chapter 103 Fight Su yue part 3
    Chapter 104 Fight Su yue part 4
    Chapter 105 Fight Su yue (Final )
    Chapter 106 The calm before the storm
    Chapter 107 Short meeting Xia li wei meet Xia kuan yin
    Chapter 108 no title
    Chapter 109 Influencing a person's thoughts
    Chapter 110 Li xiu, Lick my shoes !
    Chapter 111 Luck begin to turn
    Chapter 112 Luck begin to turn part 2
    Chapter 113 Luck begin to turn part 3
    Champter 114 Luck begin to turn Final
    Chapter 115 Short battle
    Chapter 116 Abandoned in the middle of a fight by the Spirit of his sword Zhi mei lan.
    Chapter 117 Death of two Brother Bai and Hei
    Chapter 118 Death of two Brother and Hei Finale

















     
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    Prologue

    The time he opened his eyes, he look at the lighted road, confused by the situation,
    went around in circles.

    "Where i am ?" thought the young man lost here.

    Observing the surroundings, torrents of lights arrived at the same place as him.
    By looking more closely, these lights were people like him.
    He try to remembers what had happened, some memory was starting to come back to him.

    This morning, he woke up as always, enter the bathroom,
    has breakfast with his parents, before going to class, someone ordinary,
    he was a high school student in first year,short hair, oval face with brown eye,
    nice and good looking, and have a hobby, read light novels.

    Qin mei was one of the 3 most beautiful high school girl, blonde hair in a ponytail,
    wealthy, cheerful, smart from the Qin family, attracted by Qin Mei since the first time,
    he saw, wanted to become her boyfriend.

    "After today everything will be different!"
    That's what he said to himself.

    A beautiful girl was standing, next to stair, her eyes fixed on her screen, her
    little white hands were flashing messages on her screen.
    The girl was Qin mei, Yang ling was nervous and shaking his heart was about to explode.
    He took his courage with both hands and approached step by step towards her.

    "Qin mei, this afternoon, do you want to go out for a drink? "
    The girl looked up and looked at him and sighed slightly.

    "I'm sorry Yang ling, i am already Tai jie's girlfriend, i hope we can be still friend."

    After hearing this sentence, the heart of
    Yang ling broke into a thousand pieces.he felt cold.

    "ha hah aha haha a."
    Further on, a small crowd had watched everything that had happened
    and began to laugh loudly, one fell to the ground, squeezing his belly.

    Tai jie is a 2nd year high school student, son of a famous doctor, his mother is also
    a senior manager in a renowned shop, dark hair, sharp eyes, good facial face, popular
    with girls he is gifted at football,.

    "Mei'er, you waited for me, come on, I'll take you to the cinema, I finished the training today"
    A handsome man had just arrived by car, walked to them.
    Qin Mei's face gave a radiant smile and and put her little white hands around his arm.

    "okay, let's go" said the beautiful girl

    Qin mei went to the car and entered, Tai jie finally noticed the suitor,

    "you can forget Qin mei, she is my girlfriend, learn how to get dressed first !"

    "Just give me some time and I will beat you"

    "Don't get false hope, Qin mei look down on you, she is the same world as me after all."

    "This..is..not..the..truth, right ?"

    Tai jie began to smirk and return to his car,
    Yang ling was frozen like a statue, in the car while she watch Hai tie,
    her gaze crossed those of Yang ling for instant a look of disdain appear Inside.

    Her eyes, like a noble in front of a commoner. for the first time, he saw her true emotions. Her personality outside is just a facade, make his heart cold.

    Tai jie started the engine and drove the car towards the city center,
    someone approaches Yang ling and pat him on the shoulder. A student from the same class

    "you're not the only one to be rejected by her, you are probably the 156 person"

    "yeah...you right."

    "i know you pain, man."

    The student talk a little and leave him alone something change inside Yang ling, his way
    of thinking changed, he was sad and angry.

    "I already see that situation in light novel, i did not know that it could really
    be this way in real life, if i was is in a light novel, i will her make regret it, but my skill is inferior to her, forget it, i am coming back home."

    Yang ling took out his cell phone and looks at lights novels again.

    "I know this, just look a this novel, in the beginning, the protagonist was
    betraying by his fiance but after she regretting when he became strong."

    When he started to come in and cross the sidewalk, his eyes in the book.

    "This story is also good, this skill samsara cycle allow to ..."

    Next to the pedestrian crossing, the light had turned yellow,a truck has just turned and rush to all speed, noticing Yang ling, he tried to brakehearing a motor noise approaching, in
    shock, he felt that his body was paralyzed, everything had happened so quickly, he
    tried to dodge but too late, the truck hit him.

    "What..a..stupid life, where..i didn't..do..anything."
    Blood flowed from his mouth,

    "Hey young man, hold out!"says the driver

    "It fine,..just tell my..family,..i'm sorry!"

    He was having more and more trouble breathing, the fear of death devoured him,
    when his consciousness was slowly fading.

    "In my next life, i wish go to a martial world, I would be awesome there"
    people in the neighborhood were gathering, it was his last thinking before he died,
    his memories had just ended, looking at the lighted road again.

    "I see I'm dead, sorry father, mother, your son is dead. I hope we will meet again in another life, now I wonder what will wait for me, Let's go!"

    Said the young man to himself bravely.

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    Yeah, I can't delete all the important parts for this long prologue.
    But I'll arrange it after the prologue.

    edit :my English is bad can you tell what is "Caps" ?
     
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    Caps lock.
    Before proper English grammar, please pay more attention to punctuation. Example, when you should use space, capital letter, comma sign, ect. Mistake in grammar is ok since not everyone is native speaker. Mistake in punctuation just signify that you are too lazy in writing since every language use it.
     
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    Ok thank.
     
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    Chapter 1 Yellow Springs

    Yang ling walked for a few hours in this dark place. Going right behind him. Around purple fogs were floating in the air. White lights were all around him a few meters.

    "What phenomenon strange was it?" think the young man.

    His body was also surrounded by a similar glow.
    He deduces that it was also souls all like him. Cautiously approached the voices, without making any noise. Yang ling could hear voices.

    "Where it is? It's scary here, Mom! Dad! Where are you? "

    This voice belonged seemed to belong to a child frightened by the events.
    Quickly another voice heard him and she took her in her arms.

    "Do not cry little, big sister is here."

    Says one other soul with the appearance of a lady past twenty years

    "Am I in the other world? "says a silhouette having the appearance of an old man.

    While they were all wondering questions. In another place, a few meters Yang ling hidden in the surrounding area saw, others souls took advantage of harass the weakest so they listen to their orders.
    One of them were called Yuan chuang.

    "Waste, you all go, explore the horizons in our place, my brothers and me need to rest." Said arrogantly the Chef of bandit.

    "Don't joke with me, what can you do? We are all dead, will you threaten me with death if I do not obey you ?" Says a a teenager in a provocative way.

    The ferocious Yuan chuang begin to laugh hard, he was ruthless in his previous life, killed a lot of villagers and play with woman, but he was known for his martial skill, but during a party with his brothers, a cultivator from famous sect killed them.

    When the other bandits noticed the chef laughing, they began to take a few steps away.
    They know that when their leader laughed that way that means he is very angry.

    "Devouring wave." Said the chief.

    An invisible energy entered his body, the young teenager who felt like fangs devour his soul.
    The Teenager fell to the ground, Yuan chuang crushing his foot on him.

    "I don't like the ways you talk to me, yes, you right we are all dead, but I can still torture you. " The chief looked at the other silhouettes.

    "You will all listen to me or you will suffer the same fate."

    Said the chief, the others were scared watching the teenager suffer.
    A moment later the bandits finally left,

    ""So that's it, the power of a martial artist ! This is scary. I was lucky, he did not notice me."

    Yang ling out of hiding and approached the other group, cold sweats descended from his back.
    In the dark, Shadows were approach the two groups.
    Souls had regrouped to take a break, Yang ling sneaked among them,

    One of them continues to explore and noticed a long road, accompanied by a river yellow in the distance.
    The groups came back to prevent others.

    "Yellow Spring!" Answered the old man.

    By describing what the silhouette was coming duty had just seen.

    "Yellow spring?" Everyone wondered and turned to him.

    "The Legend say that, it is a river that's find in the world of the dead ,
    the whole river was colored like gold covered by the aura of death, walk
    at the end of the Yellow Spring, to cross the bridge of purification and
    drink the Five Flavored Tea of Forgetfulness of old Lady Meng, and reincarnate."

    After a long stir, the souls calmed down to listen to the story of the old man.
    Hope seemed to revive in their hearts. They gathered around him to hear more,

    "If you can not cross the bridge you will be judged for your crimes."

    Most people have a clear conscience while others
    Some others felt guilty, a small part of them had kill people for bad reasons.

    Later, the old man began to talk about other things.
    Near here, Yang ling heard everything the old man said

    "This legend is strange, is it really that simple? Something was wrong !"

    The image of bandits resided in his head. When he saw those who lowered their heads.
    Coming from the fog, when they stayed a moment, to think about all that.

    Suddenly, spears pierce through some of them. Souls cried with suffering. During that the others fled.
    Mysterious beings coming to launch attack were concealed by the darkness of the area.
    Panicked by what had just happened everyone started running in
    all directions.

    But very quickly, they all fled to the same place, noticing that only the way to the bridge was free,
    Yang ling was one of the last to run, and could not help but tell himself.

    "They are more than us, why don't they chase us?"
     
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    Chapter 2 The Mysterious being

    The spears pierced souls, like a needle bursting a balloon.

    Despite the fog, Yang ling heard several sounds of metals, accompany the cries of despair.

    The young man, despite what he thought in his head preferred to run, as if his life depended on it. A current of air passing for a moment, dissipated for a short time the fog, to identify the shadows. The sounds of metals heard, were their metal armor covering their bodies. what are they ?

    He had also confirmed two hypotheses,

    If souls could not die, they could be tortured or disintegrated, in the latter case the soul was reduced to nothing, with no possibility of reincarnation.

    The only way would be to go back to the past to save it, but even then, the world in which the soul would be annihilated would not necessarily change, it would only travel from one time line to another. At least that's what he'd watched in anime.

    "I was wrong from the beginning, souls can die, spears disintegrate their lives."

    All the survivors will eventually find themselves in a crossroads, the other roads being sealed, those who possessed black armor equipped with spears.

    Strangely enough, they were strong enough and quick to kill them all,
    but they were spared for a reason that escaped them. Only some were chosen specifically to be captured or exterminated.
    These supernatural entities seemed to lead them to one direction.

    The old man, the young woman in her twenties and the little girl were also next to him.
    The glow that surrounded him seemed to have diminished a little, also happened to others.
    Even if Yang ling felt neither thirst nor hunger, for a soul, he must apparently rest.

    He bothered to sit down,
    Yang ling began to think the reason why they were spared when he heard a cry.

    "AAArrrrggggh A Monster!" Shouted, the woman in her twenties, she hid behind a muscular man
    with blond hair.

    "What is it ?" Say another soul.

    They could see a mysterious being holding a big sword about 100 cm long,
    his blade seemed to be 80 cm long, his face hidden by a helmet.
    Resembling those of the Middle ages, hole pierced, for the view, a plate covering the face.
    His aura gave off an aggression, giving the impression of destroying everything at the slightest misstep.
    His gaze was fixed on a muscular man with a wild look,

    Yuan Chuang, the leader of the bandits looked bad, his soul was about to go out.
    He seemed to have fought.
    The landscape behind them gave rise to a bridge in height.
     
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    Chapter 3 Yuan chuang escapes

    Yuan chuang's current envelope was missing parts of his soul,

    After leaving with his men and the other souls of his group.

    They saw a bridge, having also heard of the reincarnation of souls.
    He wanted him and his men to live a second life, they took a break after a moment

    When warriors with black armor and spears rushed on them.

    All were caught, some were spared, having the right to cross, while others were chained departing in another direction.
    Yuan Chuan manages to escape by taking a hostage to a crossroads.

    He abandoned all his companions to escape, finally feeling safe on a deserted road.
    On the way, perceiving the bridge, he got rid of his hostage, kicked him and finally arrived at a crossroads.

    His heart filled with pride, feeling no remorse, he was soon to know a new life, to know one more the joys of power, wealth and women.

    Nothing seemed to stop him, walking towards his destination, on a rocky ground, the bridge seemed to be high, what he expected was worse.

    A being armed with a large sword, a body covered with armor similar to other warriors, his aura was much more terrifying than theirs.
    Being on the point of dying out, he was very angry with a mysterious being, rushed straight at him, turned to the side and kicked him hard.


    The mysterious being remained on the spot, completely ignoring it, the kick landing on the shoulder, his expression did not change a moment, no scratch could be seen on his armor.


    "If I had a sword, i show you what I'm made of ! "

    The mysterious being opened his eyes and with a gesture of his hand, far in the sky, a sword appeared in the hands of the bandit. Yuan chuan was surprised by this gesture, he accepted this gift as if nothing had happened.

    "HAHA poor stupid, the power of my attack will be 3 times higher all the time, let me finish you to thank you."


    "Devouring wave!"



    An invisible energy began to vibrate in the air. Yuan chuan was full of pride at the time, his technique seemed much more powerful than when he was alive, the energy unleashed in the air, getting ready to enter the body of his enemy when it dissipated in dust.


    "You are ... a DEMON" Shouted the leader, the despair seemed to invade him, he began to run to escape.


    The mysterious being did not bother to answer him.
    Yuan Chuang began to run as if chased by a monster, desperate, he saw a group and walked towards them, a smile appeared on his face.
     
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    Chapter 4: Fall from the Bridge

    The bandit thinking of using the same tactics as the last time,
    Yang ling noticed that Yuan Chuang was getting closer and closer, he turned to scream.


    "Get away from him, back off!" Souls scattered around.


    Hardly had he come out his words than hands grip his soul, he put his sword on his neck and turned to the warrior armed saber.

    "I'm the one who's ordering now, you're going to let me cross this bridge and it's not going to happen to this kid."

    Yuan chuang overwhelmed with confidence, while Yang ling felt that his heart would explode with fear.

    The young man had seen how much the bandit's technique was far more terrifying than the first he felt, according to the sound, release a terrifying energy.

    Yang ling hoped that the warrior was going to do something to get him out of this bad situation. It did not take him long.

    The warriors in black armor reappeared with chains, at their sight, the disappeared cynistrous being, standing at once beside the bandit.

    He pulled his hair in a split second and threw it violently near them. The others chained him and like a sack of potatoes, Yuan Chuang was imprisoned.

    The mysterious being turned his head towards Yang ling and the others and pointed his finger at the bridge, he began to walk towards his companions and they disappeared into the fire.

    Yang ling had just been saved, if a soul could cry tears of joy, he would do it without hesitation, Not wanting to finish his life this way, he wanted to reincarnate, not to end up in dust.

    After this little session of emotions, the old woman, the young woman and the little girls finally came back with the rest of the crowd.


    Taking back those emotions, Yang ling could calmly think, his journey to a new life was much harder than the old man had said. He knew it was not going to be so easy, on those who had left half, had been caught.

    Yang Ling had develloped another theory about it, he had noticed that only those who were bad were imprisoned like Yuan Chuang.

    A few moments later, although the young man was comforted, all the crowd wanted to hurry up, and they arrived near the goal.

    The little girl, the old man and the young woman and the rest of the crowd left to cross the bridge.

    Yang ling knew the aspects of humans, some were indifferent to others, as long as nothing happens to them. He knew it because he the same. He eventually joins them.

    Yang ling was about to cross when a dark brown ball dodged.
    The dark brown was a Messenger, He left in the opposite direction of the bridge.


    "Nobody will notice me!" Think the brown ball, he accidentally used a martial skill on a rotten board and arrived quickly on the other side of the bridge.


    "Messenger! Prohibition to go through there, last warning."
    Yelled one of the guardians of the kingdom of the dead.

    Yang ling stopped running and started walking.

    " I will finally leave here, drink the famous tea of Grandma Meng's forgetfulness, be judged and leave to reincarnate."

    As he was about to cross, he walked on the rotten plank, which collapsed under his weight and his soul fell off the bridge.
    During his fall, his gaze towards the bridge. Yang ling screamed.

    "I do not know you, but I curse you Messenger !"
    On the other side of the bridge, the messenger carrying a message think differently.

    "It's not my fault, it's you who walked on it!"

    All the souls around the accident. The guardians of death approached and stopped the rest of the people.

    "Call someone to repair the bridge and also send a report to Judge Zhuanlun that."
     
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    Author's Comment: If you read my novel by chance, you will see another Yang ling in this chapter, you understand why in the next chapter! But I think you already know it!

    Chapter 5 Li Ming


    Country of Cai, Town of Xie, on a Platform.


    "Pa!"


    "I already told you ! Yang ling, a strong heart and harkworking can surpass the talent of someone."
    Li Ming looked at him confidently.


    "Do not lie to yourself! Li ming!, Your lighting spirit vein is the bane of my water spirit vein, of course my defeat is only a matter of time."


    The wounds were so serious that the meridians were on the brink of rupture.

    "Didn't you say you with my cultivation of 2 Qi layers, it will be a piece of cake to take care of me, even with your cultivation to 3 Qi layers, you lost during our fight."


    Yang ling did not say anything, because , 4 years ago Li ming was still at 2 years ago, now he was still at 2 Qi layer.


    "You can still smile Li ming, let's tell you a secret, Xie Wuhui heard about the beauty of your sister or maybe your cousin, i wonder who will fall into his hands ?

    He lost this fight but he tries to frigthing him because of his arrogance.

    "BASTARD, who do talk about?" Cried Li Ming


    "HAHAHA Li Ming, I wonder who? Do you want me to talk? In your dream."


    "TELL Me, if not, I will cry your meridians!"


    "LI MING, YOU DARE !"


    "You want to see if i dare!"

    A lightning skill appear like a whip, attaching itself like a snake sending him an electric dump.


    "AArrggh!"


    The cries of Yang ling were heard among the crowd.

    The crowd on the square erupted and speak.

    "No ways Li ming has restore his talent !"

    "It can't be ? Eveyone look Li ming is at 2 Peak Qi Layer !"

    Yang family watched the fight too. One of his cousin squeezed his fist.

    "Yang ling, the reputation of Yang is lost because of you ! You realm is higher than trash, how can you lose !"

    One of the servants left at the beginning of the fight came back with a man who seemed to be 40 years old.

    He used his cultivation of True profound realm to press Li ming on his knees.


    "A senior tries to bully me during a fight between juniors" Li ming replied sarcastically.

    "Can you give me face ?" Say the old man with Killing intent.

    "No, as long as he did not give up or he did not leave the platform, he must continue to fight !"


    "I giv ..."



    "BAAMM !"



    Lightning struck half of his body screaming his meridians.


    "LI MING, YOUR DARE!"


    Yang's uncle became furious, he did not care about his nephew, but Li Ming slay his face, he tried to regain his dignity.

    "I, Yang bao will teach you a lesson"

    With a wave of the hand, clawed fingers, appeared heading towards Li Ming, she dissipated into contact with another energy.

    An elder intervened.

    "Yang Bao, Li Ming and Yang ling agree to fight today without anyone intervening.
    He also didn't kill Yang ling, this is already good" Say the Elder.

    Yang ling finally lost consciousness.

    "He can get lost!" Li Ming kicked Yang ling out of the Platform. He was transported to his clan

    Because he didn't try to kill him in the past, the young teenager did not try either.


    "It's not over Li Ming," said Yang Bao.


    "The Yang clan is really impressive, first, when i was weak, they bullied me, but now when they junior lost, they call a Senior at True profound realm to kill me.


    Yang Bao muttered a few words and returned with they servants to their clans.

    "I will remember this ! Yang bao, when my cultivation breakthough at true profound realm, I only need 2 year to will kill you! The pendant around my neck, boost my training." Think Li Ming.

    Li Ming thanked the elder and hurried off to his home.

    What Yang ling had said had worried him. The crowd dispersed.


    One month later, Yang ling was still in coma. While the weather still seemed fierce, a soul fell from the sky like a meteor.
     
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    Chapter 6 :The other Yang ling

    A soul accidentally landed on a mansion, cross the walls and enter a room.

    A young man was unconscious on a wood bed, this person was the third young master of the Yang clan, in the town of xie.
    Yang ling was still in a coma. When the soul in question entered his body.



    "STUPID Messenger ! I will avenge myself the next time I meet you!" Cursed the soul.



    Another figure appeared, a little further from him.


    "Who are you ? ... what do you do in my body!" Answered a threatening voice


    The two souls see each other, when one of the two took the initiative to speak.



    "My name is Yang ling, you're going to believe me but I'm just from the realm of the dead, when i fell here..."

    "Liar! I am the real Yang ling ! You imposter, you are probably a evil spirit, came to take hold of my body die!"




    An apparent soul in a sorry state, seeming out of touch with reality, but very aggressive.

    Yang ling feels danger and dodges backing away. The soul in front of him came to try to bite him
    "you're completely crazy, you do not even try to listen to my story and you try to kill me !"

    Yang ling was rather a pacifist, but the soul was in front of him was trying to kill for no reason, Yang was very angry, his eyes became cold, showing no mercy.

    He struck him with all his strength. It was disloyal on his part, but he deserved it.


    The soul exploded into a thousand fragments. Outside the body begins to tremble , a maid was cleaning the room and noticed the body moving, she warned others servants.

    Yang Ling felt that he was beginning to take control of this place.

    The residues of the other Yang ling merged with him, becoming a part of him, to be able to live again, shake his emotions. He smile and close his eyes.
    While on a bed his fingers started to move, then from the eyelids opened in a room.


    "Third young master, you finally woke up."



    "Yes..." Yang ling had just woken up, when the young man heard old voice, he was not yet used to his new body, which seems to be coming out of a hospital.

    Nobody in the room know that their previous master had just replaced. An old servant taking his pulse, a moment after he sighed and leave.



    "Rest for a moment, third master, and after go to see your uncle, the Elder want to talk about something."



    The servants came out of the room, they sneering at him. Watching their reaction,
    Yang ling did not understand on the spot. For the moment, he try to understand this world.


    "It feel good to be alive, this body seems to have recovered from wounds, i wonder what is this place ?


    Observing his surroundings, he was lying on a bed in old room with some medecine on a wooden table.


    "Forget it ! I'll have plenty of time to know."


    Yang ling began to become familiar with his body and got up from the bed, the decorations in the room vaguely reminded him of something.


    "I have already seen this situation somewhere, I remember in my previous life, in novel a young man or young girl wakes up in martial world, take the body of someone."


    "Could I be the protagonist ?"


    He became excited by this idea and begin to laugh.


    "HAHHHA ! Beautiful girls, wealth and power in the near future all that will belong to me."


    When suddenly unfamiliar memories flowed into his mind.
     
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    Chapter 7 Not the protagonist but a waste

    While fragments of memories enter his memory, he laid his hand on wall to stabilize his body,
    he discover much of the story of the other Yang ling.

    He made discover his way of fighting, his relationships, his clothes.
    Apparently his predecessor was a side character a stepping stone for the protagonist.

    He had a cultivation at 3 Qi layer, lazy, arrogant and harass girls.
    Wearing the same name as him with a different meaning. He was also a stooge of Xie wu hui, a top outer disciple just like others.


    "Damn it!"


    He hit the wall with a fist. Yang ling understood that he was not the protagonist, he was only an unimportant person in this world.

    He is a person that people will forget in a few years. The protagonist of this world was apparently Li Ming, his talent only begins to awaken.


    "My dream is broken, what am I going to do, I did not think my predecessor was just a good thing, not only was he weak, but in addition, half of his meridians are crippled for the moment!"


    He collapsed on the ground and lay on his back, looking at the ceiling, the depression invaded him,


    "What am I going to do ..."


    "For a few days all the locals are going to make fun of me, whereas it is the other who bears my name
    who lost the duel against Li ming, if only he had not provoked it, in his place, I would have..."

    "I would have..I would hav..."

    "I would..."

    "I."

    Yang ling realized something, he sat on the floor. what he had just said to enlighten him


    "I SEE !"

    "I should have thought it over, I'm Yang ling from another world,
    Yang ling who lived here is a thing of the past, he's just a part of me, with the knowledge of my world,
    I will control my destiny. "

    While he was thinking about it. A servant landed without warning by opening the door


    "Third master, your uncle and the patriach are waiting for you, hurry up!"


    The servant seemed to have no respect for him. And went to have announced his message.


    "According to my recollection, this servant has only cultivation at 3 Qi cultivation stage.I wonder what makes him so arrogant."


    He left the room and began to cross the halls, admiring the surroundings.
    Yang ling met servants, some lowered their heads to avoid looking at him, others mocked him.
    A teenager of a big size. with an arrogant air sneered at him, had his back resting against the entrance to a large room.



    "Yang ling, you're the most useless person I've ever seen, not only have you failed to defeat Li Ming, but you're in a coma for a month. you still have not awakened your Martial spirit.

    Our clan does not need anyone like you! It's not because your parents are dead that you can allow yourself anything. The clan has decided on your punishment. "


    For a brief moment, Yang ling felt rancor and jealousy towards this person. He came to suspect the residue of his other soul.


    "Come on hurry up !"


    Yang ling tried to ignore him and entered the building. He heard noises of sneers.
     
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    Chapter 8 Expelled from the clan

    Important members of the clan and elders were sitting in the great hall.


    They all looked down on him. Yang bao and the partriach were both in a foul mood, while the elders looked extremely disappointed.


    "Oh the waste is finally awaken?"


    "I heard that half of his meridians were crippled."


    "Elders did not want to use their precious medicines, I would have done the same."


    "Yang ling was never used for anything anyway.".


    "Silence!"


    Shouted the Patriarch, he heard a moment before the silence settled in the room before speaking.


    "Yang ling, last month, you lost to Li ming, the clown of the town." Do you recognize your mistakes? "


    All eyes in the room turned to him. Despite this tension, Yang ling calmly replied.


    "Partriach, I admit to losing to Li ming, but a victory or a defeat and quite normal in a life. I did not bet the good of the clan like Yang zhun.


    "Insolent, how can you compare yourself to Yang zhun! My son is already at level 6 middle Qi layer and Yang zhun has been defrauded by an old shameless man."

    Yang zhun's father got up from his chair.


    "Why am I the only one to have such bad treatment in this case Second Uncle?"

    Yang ling replied in a questioning manner.


    "Insolent ! Kneel !" Yang zhun's father exerted his pressure.


    Under such an aura, could not resist and got on his knees. Anger invaded little by little the heart of Yang ling.

    This atmosphere gave the same impression as that of his previous life.
    He hates this situation or we look down on him.


    "Yang ling, just like Li ming for years, you have not made much progress in your cultivation, your defeat against him, we made the laughing stock of this city.
    That's why the clan decided to exclude you from the clan. "

    His uncle replied indifferently. He closed his eyes, completely ignoring his nephew.


    This situation seemed more and more disadvantageous for him, not only had he lost all his heir rights but also the right to go to the Yang book pavilion. Yang ling was thinking about a solution. When a male voice sounded in the room.


    "Father, second uncle, Let me take care of him !"


    Everyone present turned their heads to him, admiring him, known to be the clan 's hope.


    "Hu'er, you're here! Since you insist, i let you handle that ! you're my grandson after all ! "

    Yang hu, the best talent of Yang Ling clan, his fighting style was extremely fierce, proud of his name, his techniques were related to tigers. His cultivation was at the 9th late Qi layer. He was also successful with girls.


    "I take care of the failure and return to the sect."

    "You're right, you've been there for two week, taking care of others in the family. It is important to spend time for yourself !"

    "Thank grand father, after return to sect, i will try to breakthrough to origin realm. My level will not be far from Xie wuhui."

    "Wonderful ! hu'er, a little more and the Xie clan and we can match them.
    Your father is still seclusion, we must still endure their arrogance for 2 months.

    "In the meantime I will take care of one of their dogs, right Yang ling?"

    Yang ling was still on the ground while he heard all their conversations. When
    Yang hu took Yang ling by the hair with one hand and
    throw him out.

    "I'm not the other Yang ling why did I pay for him !"
    Yang ling thought suffering from pain. His body fell to the ground.

    "Take your stuff and leave from here !"

    Yang ling despite his wounds, got up and went to his room to leave as soon as possible from here.

    When his figure disappeared from his sight, he called for two servants.

    "Kill him when he comes out of the city, we don't need trash like him !"
     
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    Chapter longer than usual, I tried to be short, but I was carried away by the story, the draft of this chapter was rotten, but by rewriting it, adding details and removing other details I did not think it was going to give a better result than I thought at first.

    I was told that my story was a bit like a martial world, but it's different except for the title and Li Ming, which looks a little too much like Lin Ming, it was unintentional.


    Chapitre 9 Critical situation


    Yang ling was able to find his room thanks to the memory of his predecessor.
    When he entered the room, he discovered a simple wooden bed, whirling underneath.


    He was surprised to find nothing, according to his recollection, weapons and spirits stones should be below. All they had left was spare clothes.


    Yang ling heard sneers outside his room. His unbearable laughter humiliate him terribly.
    Taking the time to think, the faces of the servants do not stop to return to him in memory.


    Their expressions of the servants were not normal, the disdain could be seen on their faces. When he had just woken up from his body, the young man could observe that their behavior was abnormal.
    He ended up understanding what had happened.




    "THEY DARE TO DO THIS ME ! "




    Analyzing the situation, Yang ling realized that while his predecessor was in a coma, the servants had profited to steal him. This room was empty.




    "They'll pay me, I'm still too weak for now, but I swear to avenge!"




    He took his spare clothes, he finally came out of the house of the clan.
    The guards in charge of guarding the main gate of the clan sneered at seeing him.


    Yang ling endured their disdain. His heart was on the edge of the bearable, but he had to continue to endure. words came back to him.


    "He was weak!"



    No matter how much he learned from his previous life with such a bad start, he could not use it.


    A messenger arrived next to a guard, who immediately came out of the building, a message in his hands, took a moment to catch his breath and announced loudly.


    "Yang ling, a descendant of the family
    Yang is officially excluded from the clan, for the following acts.


    - having harassed women
    - abuse of his authority
    - offend his superiors.


    From this day, he has nothing to do with the Yang clan. "


    As soon as the announcement was over,

    Yang Ling walked into a dark alley. To try to be forgotten for some time.
    Without spirit stones, he could not do anything, the young man was running out of solution. The thing that remained to him was some spare clothes and health, despite the beating received at his home.


    The expulsion was a new explosive answered from the moment it is announced
    It spread quickly in the city. Passersby quickly began to speak.


    Discussion and noises echoed in the streets
    After a few hours, the whole city knew about it. In a popular restaurant in the city


    "Hey, did you hear what just happened? About the Yang clan!"


    "You must talk about Yang ling, he got kicked out of his clan, a shabby man."


    "The Yang clan has always wanted to preserve their honor, the fact that Yang ling loses Li ming to attract their anger."


    "I heard that half of his meridians were crippled!"


    "Good for him, he kept causing problems in restaurants."


    "Heum! It was a pervert, he did not stop trying to touch my buttocks!"

    Answered a charming waitress.


    "Sister, you have a nice body, no wonder!"


    "Do you want me to slap you left cheek or you right cheek?"


    "Please forgive me sister, I'm already old! "While I think about Li ming last month, I saw with my own eyes that he broke Xie Qian Xu's arm. "


    "WHHAATT ?"


    Some customers around him turned to him.


    "How is this possible? Liar!"Everyone started to ignore him.


    "I assure you! Xie qian xu and servants went to the Li clan, kidnap his sister, doing a whole bummer when Li Ming came out fighting them, knocked them down, his tough fight against Xie Qian Xu was really impressive With a cultivation of 3 middle Qi Layer, he set it back.


    People around him were not convinced by his story, Xie qian xu was a cultivcator at 5 early Qi layer. How could someone surpass 2 cultivation levels. And another question, how Li ming could progress so fast.


    In the back of a corner, hidden by a straw hat, a man was eating his meal, it was Li Ming, he began to smile from the corner of his mouth.


    "I should thank Yang ling, I would never have had the time to prepare myself against Xie qian xu, my cousin was in seclusion accompanied by elders, so it's not she.


    When Yang Ling started talking about kidnapping I felt completely upset, but thanks to you senior, I realized that Xie wuhui wanted to kidnap my sister.


    The pendant began to shine for a moment.


    Meanwhile, elsewhere in a dark, deserted alley. Yang ling was gaining strength.
    In the end of the day, he had just sold his old-clothes for 2 spirit stones, a misery.


    Being a well-known person, the seller took the opportunity to anchor him, but Yang ling had no choice. As he was getting ready for a waterlogged meal. Some hostile auras approached him.
     
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    Chapter 10 Revenge of mortals

    They had a murderous aura. Their appearances seemed familiar to him when fists hit his face.

    Yang ling's cheeks swelled. Stun by avalanches of blows, he did not have time to see their faces and screamed with pain.

    While the fists put him on the ground. He then felt kicks in his back.
    Half an hour later.


    "It's time to pay Yang ling, you've been harassing us for years !"


    "I had a hard time finding myself a fiance because of you !"


    "You ruined my luck, you remember the blond man, he married another girl, because you kissed me in front of his mother !"


    "You are the one who left without paying for my restaurant !"


    They were all mortals without cultivation, but in his current state his body could not resist them.



    He finally remembered them. They were victims that the other Yang ling had harassed during his past.

    Letting himself be hit without defense to atone for the actions of his predecessor. He suffered pain.
    The cries of pain attracted a crowd, recognizing the young man, known for his bad reputation. They sneered at his misfortune before rallying at their friends and their families.


    When the sun slowly began to set, the young women took a break to catch their breath, with those who remained by force, Yang ling looked straight into their eyes.


    "Sorry for everything !"


    They looked at the young man apologize, it seemed different from their memories, the young women gave them a few kick, before talking to each other. No longer wanting to waste time on this and Yang ling being disinherited.


    "We're leaving now!"


    "I hope I can not see you here anymore"

    They concluded that he understood the lesson. They all went home, accompanied by their families who were waiting for them next door.


    From afar, the two servants charged to kill Yang ling, sneered at his misfortune and discussed how to kill him.


    "We should have got rid of vermin like him from the beginning, maybe I should get rid of it right now!"


    "Do not be so impatient, do not forget what the young master says, we have to wait for him to come out of this city, and if you kill him in the city, everyone will start to suspect our clan."


    "He already offend many people in this town, no one will notice it."


    "Do not be so stupid, they hate him but not to the point of killing him, wait a few more hours, he is already close to despair.


    Yang ling was on the ground, he did not seem to have any strength, his face and body were suffering everywhere. He began to crawl down the aisle and sank a little deeper.


    Until his shadow disappears from the driveway. He fainted from his exhaustion.
    At sunset, at the end of a dark, deserted alley, a young man woke up abruptly with pain. He analyzed his situation, holding his shoulder.


    "What do I do now ?"


    "With what happened this afternoon, I did not think people were so resentful of Yang ling, Oouch!"


    A nap had appeased his wounds. Even if it still hurt, he had to endure his pain.


    "My wish is to become a cultivator and enjoy my new life, let's think for a moment, my injuries are not fatal, even if I suffer.


    The problem is my meridans, half of them are crippled for the moment, while my other meridians are not yet awake.


    Everything in its time ! I must first take care of my wounds. "


    He changed his clothes before leaving the driveway.
     
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    Chapter 11 "You are all regretting it ! All of you ! "



    While crossing the market, Yang ling could still feel the eyes of the inhabitants
    who watched him.

    Some recognized him and made fun of him behind his back.
    The young man glanced around, he took the time to analyze the quality of the products placed.

    Identifying treasures and pills would surely serve him well in the future.

    The currency in this world was distinguished between two categories, the spirits stones was the common currency for cultivators, it allowed to buy the treasures or pills to become an immortal.

    The other category more commonly used by mortals was used to buy the everyday objects of everyday life. Houses, tools, territories, jewelry

    Having walked around the market. Yang Ling stopped at a booth, hoping to find pills to heal his wounds. He stooped to take a closer look at the items placed. His eyes turned first to the left.


    "Qi condensation pill 15 spirit stone."


    "Copper sword 50 copper coins."


    "Iron sword 70 silver."


    "..."

    Pills of inferior qualities and sword for the beginners, as well as several useless objects for him.

    He turned his head to the right of the counter,


    "Origin pill 500 spirit stone."


    "Poison pill 200 spirit stone"


    "Aphrodisiac pill 250 spirit stone"


    "Qi recovery pill 30 spirit stone."


    "..."
    Despair seemed to invade, the old Yang ling could put his expenses. But in his case, he could not even afford a basic pill.

    All he had left was 10 spirit stone.
    Even the secondary characters in the novels were not as unlucky as him. Footsteps advanced in his direction.


    "Push yourself, do not stay planted there, you do not see that you're embarrassing, the failure!"


    A short-haired young man was wearing a uniform, clinging to his belt, the Clan Yang ling emblem attached to his belt. Yang ku, the 4th young master of the Yang clan, is 1 year younger than him, with a cultivation of 5 Qi Layer. He spent most of his time reading and enriching his knowledge.


    "Seller, I would like 5 Qi recovery pill !"


    The seller took the spirits stones and gave him the pills. The 4th young master, avoided Yang ling keeping his distance. Normally, he would never go into this kind of market, but being short of money after buying an internal martial arts. Examinations were approaching, sects would soon recruit disciples.

    He decided to take a ride when, he saw the failure of the family, planted in front of a stand, wounded in the face, observed pills, an idea came to his mind.

    He decided to push him further into misery to satisfy his personal ego.


    After receiving his pills, Yang ku turned in his direction, snickering at him before leaving. Yang ling tried to contain his rage, he understood his strategy, this humiliation was unbearable.

    Since he had just woken up, all the people of this city did not stop humiliating him again and again.
    He was exhausted, he could not stand this situation.


    "You are all regretting it ! All of you ! "


    Yang ling filled with hate finally left this city in excess of rage.
    Two servants hidden among the crowd continue to hunt him down.


    "Brother, he's finally gone out of town!" I could not wait any longer. "


    "Same thing, I too am getting fed up with it, let's kill it as soon as it is far enough away from the city."


    "A forest is on this road to the east, to reach other cities, it is forced to take this direction. From the nightfall, let's take action."


    "When someone find his corpse, rumors say he was killed by bandits."