Novel A World of Monsters. Need feedback.

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    In a world where death dances naked, a monster struggles to survive. Strung along by the events with no control, the creature must cope. Reincarnated, for a purpose that it does not know, while it's every step is watched by Beings that it dared not know.
    Reborn, but as a mere pest, it dances to the melodies unknown.
    Tl;dr: A universe is shattered by forces unknown. Someone from this universe is reincarnated as a monster.
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    A world of Monsters, follows a monster and humans in a system word, with a Buddhist/Hindu philosophy. The System is especially influenced by this philosophy.

    Things I can promise, in the story:
    1. No human form seeking
    2. Monsters will behave like monsters while humans will behave like humans.
    3. Evolutions.
    4. No harem.
    5. Grimdark
    6. Well defined characters [In my opinion at least XD]
    7. No OPness.
    If any of these things catch your attention, give this story a chance. I would recommend that you read the story up to chapter 8, which is ideal, but reading up to chapter 6 would give you a clear idea as well.
    Click here to read.
    WARNING

    Not for trauma survivors.
    The human part of the story is a commentary on human nature.
    You have been warned.​
     
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