Adventurers Guild Adventurer's Guild - Main Tavern

OOC: Yeah... since both of my family are quite dispersed, it's disturbing... often, at the third one, I got ignore >.<
But used to it tho.

OOC: Umu.

OOC: That's... completely true~

 

OOC
It's a bit, not difficult, but It takes more time to 'read' what you have typed up here.

 

((*pat pat pat*))

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((*pat pa- Oh, damn... Reached my Pat Limit....

*summons @AliceShiki*
Can you spare some?))

 

OOC: *gasps*
*eyes shines*
Did you also reach your hug limit ?!
*glomps*

 

OOC: MS Word is Microsoft Word. I mean, writing them first in MS Word and then copy them to here. Because if you do use them, go check Gramarly. Why, you ask? Because, if I may be honest with you, you have lots of spelling and grammar mistake. As in, lots, my man. But I do compliment you on trying to make a proper story. It takes determination to make one, ya know? Good for ya~

As for your character, if I may say, it's too complicated. As I read them (yeah, I read ALL of the stories you wrote there), it turned convoluted really quick. And it looks like you try to put a lot of things from everywhere and crammed it into your character, without any definite (or even vague) direction. It's like a mix of everything without anything in the core.

Sorry if I sounded rude and too blunt. But I had to say it because I can at least see your passion in writing it. It will be a shame if your character will turn into something that you don't expect because of that. If I may suggest, try making a simple character. Most of the character in AG start really simple and then they get developed as they interact with many things (fellow member, events, items, etc). But that's just my opinion. Sorry if I'm being rude or anything.

OOC: Sorry, but, yeah. I agree with ya.

 

((Not yet!

You are already hugged...))

 

OOC: I am already hugged...? *tilts head*
*doesn't know what's all is it about*
But I want from you !

 

/ That's where the problem! Contradictory.. If i keep thing strike, i just cant, or rather, i always cant, huh... My mind was like, always deviated from first thought
It is somehow an habit that made by like thinking this is then suddenly think of is that lead to that that seem to be it while able to be connected to somehow, well, i accept complain or critic?(?)... I mean, my name is already..? So, you are not rude ._.)a... Or rather

 

OOC: Thank you for being open minded. Well, my suggestion still remains. I mean, the more I see your character, the more confused I am. And it might even contradict with some of the magic system of the other player. And don't ask me to explain them. They're vast and varied. LOL~

 

OOC

Hmmmm
I think @shad12ow uses LOL way too much
I doubt a person can laugh out loud to non-funny text

What are you hiding?!

 

OOC: A lot of things, actually. Heck, maybe something I don't even realize I've been hiding. Hahaha~

 

/ @shad12ow in the first place, interact and being corrected is easier to become better, i think, i mean, interaction like role play will be remembered, even if i forgot that, and

Which part? I mean, i think i already explain... Oh my writing is bad, no, i mean, it is said that "every system will have difference in different world" because of native, or perhaps, the user himself, after all it is mind flux, a thing that continously being send and resonance with each other and receive feedback, so, if user have strong idea of system, it possible to change...?
Oh by the way, i'm not open minded, i just like... Why tell other to stop complain about you if you just dont stop complaining everything?, well, conflicted

 

OOC
*copies Grand-Aunty *



*finds his hidden Doll *

 

OOC; Well, up to you then. I'll ask @AliceShiki to read your registration first and let her give her opinion. I guess I'm just worried that the way your magic system work will clash with some of the other member in here. Hey, it's a story idea nevertheless.

 

OOC: Q.Q Still a Doll?!

 

((Okay, 3 summons in a row, I better stop procrastinating on checking AG and actually look at it and... Oh, brb, gonna take a look at it.))

 

/somehow i feel confused for whatsoever reason, dunno, oh well, whatever i guess?/

 

(("Omae wa mou shindeiru.." means "You're already dead..." so I just changed a bit the words...

Not a Nani?! answer...
))

 

OOC: *coughs blood*
Sorry, I didn't understand... >.>
Well, now I do...
Orz.

 

((Alright, finished reading it and got the gost of what you're talking about by backtracking a bit.

I don't think there is any problem with his registration! It's a bit hard to read, but his idea is pretty solid! \(^^)/))

((Shadow was just a bit worried I think? But I didn't see any problems with your registration overall.))