Am I correct in assuming this has no direct translation? JP

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  1. Gandire Alea

    Gandire Alea [Wicked Awesome Translator]

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    Geira rushes forward at the girl's staggering. Her pastel pink hair flutters about as she catches the smaller girl by her shoulders.

    I am guessing it would involve a lot of sentence restructuring. Here is my attempt

    ゲイラはシャナの[よろよろ/ふらふら]のために前方に駆けつけた。青白いもも色髪がひらひらと同時に他の小さな少女の肩を捉えた。
     
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    Marvin The Man who realize love

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    Geira rush forward to rub shana's flower petals, flowerr bloomed and secreted liquid as soon as geira touch shana's shoulder

    Just a joke
     
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    It seems good to me. Would you use パステル instead of 青白い?
     
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    Gandire Alea [Wicked Awesome Translator]

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    hmm, thx~
     
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