Discussion An island where criminal activity grants you special abilities!

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Become a Gomorrah?

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  1. Zheya

    Zheya Well-Known Member

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    A social experiment by the secret committee in order to establish world peace forever.
    There is an island of paradise for the lost; hidden from the eyes of the common person.
    Indeed, named after the Biblical Sodom. Sodom is the nest of the Gomorrah.
    Their crime is their power, these who the Gomorrah are.
    Greater their crime, greater their right to steal, kill, and violate in Sodom.
    Would be willing to become a criminal in return for having superpowers?
    Who knows? You may become royalty or live a life freer than most outside Sodom.
    Choose your destiny; die as sheep or die as wolves?
     
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  2. otaku31

    otaku31 Well-Known Member

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    Bro, your island smells gay. :blobpeek:
     
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  3. Zheya

    Zheya Well-Known Member

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    I understood that reference. Fret not, the island is divided into nine regions. Each region has their own district for men and women. There is no stopping from going to one region to the next, but make sure you know your rights to steal, kill, and violate.
     
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  4. Kalto

    Kalto [ Somewhat meticulous ]

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    I want superpowers not be a criminal, I think I will pass :hmm:
     
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  5. Anra7777

    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    It’s not like there weren’t women in the original cities. That didn’t stop the entire population of men from being male rapists. Which is why the cities got destroyed.
     
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    reagents 11 disaster personified

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    And then they called their island Australia....
     
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    VesperNyan Well-Known Member

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    Im going to steal every toilet paper on the island

    -500 Karma
     
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  9. Wujigege

    Wujigege *Christian*Great Love Immortal Venerable*Comedian

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    There is an action British TV series called The Misfits that kind of has something similar
     
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    Nightow1 Well-Known Member

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    Bah, that is thinking small. You should get Covid 19, go there and sneeze in public places *and make others collect the toilet paper*! lol.
     
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    Zheya Well-Known Member

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    This is why I made this island. Normally you develop some special power, and by some cases, you start doing bad things. You either get caught or not, and if you get caught, you end in up in prison, yeah? I was thinking instead of powers, then crime; why not crime, then powers? Makes sense, yeah?
    I know and its where sodomy got its name from. Still doesn't change anything, whether the rapists in this Sodom are homosexual or not. Doesn't even matter if there are homosexuals, because this Sodom will definitely attract different types of rapists from all around the world. The Gomorrah will attract only the vilest of the vile around the world. Whether they die serving time or die a Gomorrah, the world becomes cleaner by the minute. Given the wickedness of the island's "natives".
    I have worse concerns about that place. Yeah, those freaking insects and them carnivorous plants! Like what the flying Venus flytrap is happening there? Eek!
    You will certainly become a fine Gomorrah of theft in Sodom. Steal all the shit you can find in Sodom!
     
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    I don't understand the plot. An island where the criminals are thrown in? Are there also innocent or only criminals?
    If there are only criminals, it's not appealing. Beautiful women would just do everything to avoid being thrown there, knowing what would be of their fate.
    Also, what's the goal? Create eternal peace, but how?
    If you leave it to the author to create the plot based on what you've given, it's a bit thin. Nothing to be interested over.
    If you want anarchy, zombie apocalypse stories are better for that. Since, it's true that the greatest felons in the apocalypse are usually those who live better life, they get rid of social rules the fastest.
     
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    I dont know but its something about getting deadly diseases that makes people want to go to the airport. Same thing happened with Ebola and swine flu. Gotta spread that "good stuff" around. I wouldnt even be surprised because people will always be assholes.
     
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    To be fair to them, some of them don't know or underestimate their illness while others might be "fleeing" to countries with better healthcare to get treated (we call this "medical tourism") and another significant majority is just executing responsibilities that require them to fly. Very rare is the person who goes "Hey, I'm sick! Lets spread this around!". Most of the people that fly while sick have already planned their flights for even before they were sick, they're often just carrying out a plan made a long time back even after conditions change.
     
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  15. Evil Granger

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    What crime?
    I'll never do such thing
    [​IMG]
     
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    userunfriendly A Wild Userunfriendly Appears!

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    Given this demonstration of knowledge of Brit television, and your previous post on Brit soccer, obviously you are...

    French!!!:ROFLMAO:
     
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  17. Wujigege

    Wujigege *Christian*Great Love Immortal Venerable*Comedian

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    I don't get your point but i know nothing about British television.
    I just know that lots of criminals had super powers in the show.
    Kind of like monster of the week but with criminals instead
     
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    imK Artful Dodger

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    This sounds like a debut CYOA from a novice author's first upload to Lot's Cave.
     
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  19. MadraRua

    MadraRua :: ˓(ᑊᘩᑊ⁎) :: Divorcee

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    You know your making it sound like dying as a sheep is baaaad.

    Fun facts about sheep. And show their awesomeness.

    1. They have rectangular pupils that give them 360 vision. Nothing escapes them. Not even the wolf.

    2. They're gay for life. Approximately 10 % of male sheep seek sex exclusively with other male sheep! Loyalty 101.

    3. Sheep are famously friendly- Sheep wag their tails like dogs, they know their names, and they form strong bonds with other sheep, goats, and with people.

    [​IMG]
     
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    Being a Caucasian guy, if I had a Caucasian sheep, I would name him/her "Whitey".