Beta Reader 7k words?

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  1. Jakeel94

    Jakeel94 Member

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    Hello

    Is there anyone interested in Beta reading and giving feedback on the first two chapters of my work in progress?

    It's a isekai novel so if that's your thing let me know
     
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    Kutaifa Well-Known Member

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    I'll read it
     
  3. Yaenshall

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    What other genres is it, besides isekai?
    I’m not very smart and I don’t do very well with analyzing characters/worldbuilding, so what kind of feedback would you be looking for?
     
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    Bored_Nick Active Member

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    I'll read it, but can't promise a long term commitment.
     
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    qwerty1 Well-Known Member

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    I'll read, but what sort of criticism are you looking for?
     
  6. Jakeel94

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    I'm going for dark fantasy, Its honestly just the start I'm not looking for an in depth break down.

    A simple good start suffices for me
     
  7. Jakeel94

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    Is it possible to send a direct message on here lol?
     
  8. Yaenshall

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    Uh, I think so? You choose the message/convo button and then @ the user of whoever you want to converse with? I think lol.
     
  9. SecretDragon2

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  10. Negiomi

    Negiomi 『Oddity』

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    I'll read ^^
     
  11. Feng Tian

    Feng Tian Well-Known Member

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    I wouldn't mind helping out either. I specialize in worldbuilding. Then again... I dropped novels of the likes of Monarch of Evernight and rated them 2 stars because the author decided to fuck world consistency for some cheap plot points. So expect nothing but a semi constructive roast.
     
  12. Ral

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    I'd love to take a look, if you still need help.