Novel Better than one

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  1. LordZaika

    LordZaika Member

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    Hello, I'm writing a story called "Better Than one", you can also read this story at [Better than One]

    Synopsis

    Are two heads better than one?

    For Kevin, who is sharing a body of a two-headed ogre, the answer is a resounding no. Hell no. That's because the other head is a former human princess. Whether through sorcery or subterfuge, neither had any choice in the matter. They are quite literally stuck with each other and need to survive in a world of monsters.


    Genre: LitRPG, Fantasy, Adventure
    [Isekai] [LitRPG] [Kingdom / Army-building] [Two-headed Monster Evolve] [No Harem]

    Table of Contents: [Chapter 1][Chapter 2][Chapter 3][Chapter 4][Chapter 5]
     
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    The loner Well-Known Member

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    Wow.. this is a hell of long advertisement... I had read till second paragraph.. and when I realized how long it's, I don't think I can bear to continue reading..

    Sorry! But I think it would be better if you just put the interesting part to induce curiosity..
     
  3. oblueknighto

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    Nice story. Read it on ScribbleHub.
     
  4. Sherrynity

    Sherrynity I see no God up there… other than the chaotic void

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    Maybe you should put them inside the spoiler tag? It's quite hard to scroll down for the comments. It will also makes it easier to see your reader's response. :blobokhand:

    Following you on RRL.
     
  5. Sherrynity

    Sherrynity I see no God up there… other than the chaotic void

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    Dude, those are full chapters. What kind of advertisement you were talking about…?
     
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    Omnicast Well-Known Member

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    Hey you're here! Good luck snagging more readers! Good story fyi guys. :cookie:

    Psst you can change their icon again... any time now. :aww:
     
  7. BigBadBoi

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    The loner Well-Known Member

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    Well, he has his novel posted on royalroad and he tried to rope in readers by putting it on NUF.... Cmiiw, but doesn't it count as advertising? am I being too serious or were you just being sarcastic? :blobconfused:
     
  9. Sherrynity

    Sherrynity I see no God up there… other than the chaotic void

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    Nah, I didn't understand your comment and was just wondering which “advertisement” you meant. :blobsweat_2:
     
  10. Tony

    Tony Well-Known Member Staff Member

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    Locked by OP's request.
     
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