Better than the Matrix!

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  1. taylorkoleDOTcom

    taylorkoleDOTcom Member

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    I received my first review from a stranger. He praised my novel Virtual heaven and ended by saying it was better than the Matrix.

    I'm still excited 15 hours later. It had been online for 12 days without any response Beyond one co-worker. I was beginning to worry I had penned the only bad story involving virtual reality.

    If you enjoy sci-fi please give virtual Heaven a chance. You can read for free at on my website. The link is on my author page (or by following my name)
     
    taylorkoleDOTcom, Dec 15, 2017
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    Zerak Well-Known Member

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    Add link here please.
     
    Zerak, Dec 15, 2017
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  3. Jigoku Shounen

    Jigoku Shounen An Envoy From Hell

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    Ehh........My friend, no one know about you, beside the ones that know about you. So just put link to your novel here, or people will still not know about you.:blobokhand:
     
    Jigoku Shounen, Dec 15, 2017
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    Qvintex Well-Known Member

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    You need to work on the summary first. Read it and now i feel like i know entire story :D whats the point in the story if everything is narrated in the summary? ^.^
     
    Qvintex, Dec 15, 2017
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    Qvintex Well-Known Member

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    His name is the link lol
     
    Qvintex, Dec 15, 2017
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    DJdragone Commander of Food/Gav's Right hand Bun/leg lord

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    Just noticed that lmao
     
    DJdragone, Dec 15, 2017
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  7. Lswarmruler

    Lswarmruler 『Anya, The Cutest Esper Loli』《Spy x Family Manga》

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    I dont think u are allowed to recommend ur own novel here tho..
     
    Lswarmruler, Dec 15, 2017
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  8. DesuDiem

    DesuDiem Surviving College

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    Maybe as a trilogy. But not better than the first movie.
     
    DesuDiem, Dec 15, 2017
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    elengee Daoist Ninefaps

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    Truly not giving face! :blob_coughblood:

    P.s. stranger danger. OP got baited into BL.
     
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  10. juniorjawz

    juniorjawz Well-Known Member

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    wrong
     
    juniorjawz, Dec 15, 2017
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  11. SoulZer0

    SoulZer0 Heaven Refining

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    Why the fuck not.
     
    SoulZer0, Dec 15, 2017
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    Ayy Lysultima did so much advertisement for his invijible panda, why can't this man too?
     
    Deleted member 41274, Dec 15, 2017
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  13. Lswarmruler

    Lswarmruler 『Anya, The Cutest Esper Loli』《Spy x Family Manga》

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    Im pretty sure what i said was true last time when i read: https://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/forum-rules.29321/

    But the rules has been changed recently... and lysultima did get banned for spamming for some time ago...
     
    Lswarmruler, Dec 15, 2017
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    juniorjawz Well-Known Member

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    Then Ill add another one.

    Know Blob Translations?
     
    juniorjawz, Dec 15, 2017
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    WTF!!
     
    Alexa94, Dec 15, 2017
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  16. SoulZer0

    SoulZer0 Heaven Refining

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    Why I'm not surprised
     
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