Blue Phoenix

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by Tinalynge, Nov 19, 2015.

  1. Tinalynge

    Tinalynge Well-Known Member

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    Animester Silent whisper

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    I will read your fanfic in gravity website later......^.^
     
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    Chapter 28: Confrontation

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    Written by Tinalynge

    Edited by Acumen & Lantas

    Third guaranteed chapter of the week.

    Now we are halfway with the daily updates. I'd love to hear opinions on this vs the previous twice a week.
     
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    I read it, yeah, but kinda antagonizing to know that Lan Feng cannot hide his aura and mc start to have people who wanna kill him..
     
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    Chapter 30: Dancing Qi Pillar

    Written by Tinalynge

    Edited by: Acumen & Lantas

    Fifth guaranteed chapter of the week!

    Early release today due to real life knocking on my door.
     
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    Ldyrdy Snowfallsdown

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    Thanks... This is delicious! Good luck with real life too..
     
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    ibekaya RARE SPECIES !!! DANGEROUS CREATURES !!!

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    Count me in
     
  9. Ai chan

    Ai chan Queen of Yuri, Devourer of Traps, Thrusted Witch

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    Hi, I like the cover art. Who's the artist?
     
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    @Ai chan It is a commission that has been created by Gikat on Deviantart :)

    Chapter 31: The Tournament Begins!
    Written by: Tinalynge
    Edited by: Acumen, Zen & Lantas
    Sixth and final guaranteed chapter of the week.
    I have decided to continue using the current system of releases. I feel like it is much more manageable to write this sized chapters and it makes it easier for the editors as well.
    Should you feel like this somehow makes the quality drop, please call me out on it!
     
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    Tinalynge Well-Known Member

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    is there any loli in this novel???
     
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    I am afraid not, although the MC is still only a ten year old boy.
     
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    Chapter 34: An Unlikely Opponent

    Written by Tinalynge

    Edited by Acumen, Zen & Lantas

    Yesterday I came across an awesome sidestory for BP that is written by Foxheart. I was really flabbergasted while reading it, it is very good! If you have the time and enjoy my story I’d definitely suggest that you try reading this one as well, it is worth the time :D
     
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    Animester Silent whisper

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    @Tinalynge can you please give order about strength levels....?I forgot the order....
     
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    Of course :) You can find a glossary here
    But the strength levels are as following:

    Strength Rankings and skills

    Student – Lower Dantian
    Disciple – Lower Dantian
    Practitioner – Lower Dantian

    Master – Middle Dantian
    Grand Master – Middle Dantian
    Duke – Middle Dantian

    King – Upper Dantian
    Emperor – Upper Dantian
    Saint – Upper Dantian

    God – I will not explain this one yet as it has some effect on the story.

    Each rank has an additional nine stars within the rank.
    Lower Dantian is essence gathering and refining Qi – used for Martial Art skills
    Middle Dantian is spiritual energy used for spiritual attacks (magic) and elemental affinity.
    Upper Dantian is a force called Wu Wei. It will be described later on.

    Martial Art Skills
    Martial art skills are divided into ten ranks equal to the strength rankings, but unlike stars they are divided into low, middle or high rank, such as the Martial Art Skill Velocity Flow that Hui Yue gains in chapter five. That is a High King ranked martial art skill.

    Spiritual energy attacks skills are split into elemental affinity. A better description will be provided upon reaching a point in the story where spiritual energy plays a larger role. It is impossible to know the cultivators elemental affinity before unlucky the middle dantian.
     
  17. CDLevit

    CDLevit Aspiring water; spark of cynicism; Em&es explorer.

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    ... I'm at the prologue, i've taught that Hui Yue doesn't know what love means when I've had read this paragraph: then, when I saw that you've saied 10 years.. I've read again that paragraph... But the prologue says he is in university..ok, i've found my answer in the first chapter. I must ask: will he be stuck with that 'sappy love'?
     
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    To answer this question I will need to make a spoiler. I would love to answer the question but read at your own discretion

    It will be a bit sappy at the start, but he will slowly emerge from those feelings. That being said, she is still his biggest love and it will play quite a part during the story.

    Hui Yue will be quite keen on resurrecting Li Fen. At the start he wishes to spend time together with her once more, but slowly he realizes that she already has a good life after he dies(or so he expects). He still wishes to resurrect her because he feels as if he has something unfinished. He feels as if he need to confess to her to be able to move on from her.
     
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    CDLevit Aspiring water; spark of cynicism; Em&es explorer.

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    Ok, i've had read your spoiler, thank you. I'll continue reading it but not now, after the first impression fades more. Thank you for answering.
     
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