Blue Phoenix

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  1. Tinalynge

    Tinalynge Well-Known Member

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    Chapter 38: Right Hand Man

    Written by Tinalynge

    Edited by Acumen & ONI_Ghost

    Seventh and final guaranteed chapter of the week



    This chapter is the debut of my new editor ONI_Ghost. He is an awesome person who tries to teach me the English comma rules. Let us hope that nothing happens and that he is able to stay with us a long time in the future!



    Blue Phoenix
     
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    Reright Someone who tried to keep it simple but failed

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    I'm abourd your story now :)
     
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    She has not updated her story here for a while.
     
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    Lachiel Paradise Lost

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    I feel like your novel is such It's really good~ So keep up the work I like it.
     
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    little king Ruler of Sloth [Neko-form]

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    Yey! \( •̀ω•́ )/
     
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    Ldyrdy Snowfallsdown

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    thanks for the new chap! amazing... *drolls*
     
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    Chapter 86: Shui Wu
    Chapter 87: Asking for Assistance
    Chapter 88: Fire
    Chapter 89: Frozen Brigade
    Chapter 90: It Begins
    Chapter 91: Battlefield

    New chapters for those interested. There is a link here to a discussion about the turn the story has taken.

    I apologize to those who feel that the story is going the wrong way, though this is my very first attempt at writing so do bear with me. Apart from that, I cannot answer any questions as me doing so could be considered spoilerish and I somewhat dislike spoilers.
     
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    little king Ruler of Sloth [Neko-form]

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    Im expecting baby-snakes in the future...or not... JK
     
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    One of the best novels I have ever read :)
     
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    little king Ruler of Sloth [Neko-form]

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    I second that but still need polishing...hope it stays great
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    I still dont get it with the trojan horse stuff tho...
     
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