Discussion Do you think the writing of Shield Hero is bad?

Discussion in 'Novel Discussion' started by Skyreader, Jan 23, 2019.

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Is it?

Poll closed Jan 30, 2019.
  1. Yes

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  2. No

    46.7%
  3. No, its mediocre

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  1. Skyreader

    Skyreader Well-Known Member

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    I can't count how much I scratched due to character behaving irrationally (almost everyone beside MC). How the fk they can be that stupid.

    First, how they can just accept Naofumi rape accusation while he is also being robbed of his possession. That's not how rapist usually works.

    Second, how the fk the kingdom denied Naofumi of using rank up service when they know their survival depends on heroes ability to fend off waves. The previous chapter even established Naofumi as the best when it comes to fighting against the waves.

    Rant over

    Btw I'm only reading up to chapter 20 manga at the moment
     
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  2. Fr0stb1te

    Fr0stb1te (Prowler of the night)

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    Why is there only two options?
     
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  3. madness-

    madness- The Wanderer

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    :cookie:it's still too early to judge try to read more
     
  4. Aletx

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    Whether it is good or bad, that's entirely your opinion.

    However...if you think those writing in early chapters are bad... then later chapter ones will drive you nuts (if you have read the WN)
     
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  5. Dat_Karma

    Dat_Karma Still Here

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  6. Skyreader

    Skyreader Well-Known Member

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    Do you need more?
     
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  7. Goblin Sleuth

    Goblin Sleuth Well-Known Member

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    The previous shield hero was a proponent for demi human rights, the king, pope, other high ranking officials are all fucking human supremacist shitheads. So they are actively going out of their way to suppress the protagonist.
     
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  8. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    Not just the previous shield, hmm I mean the Shield Hero was the sole hero of the DemiHumans since the beginning before their land connected to another ones where the other heroes exist
     
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    After the manga finishing the LN it already end
     
  10. Skyreader

    Skyreader Well-Known Member

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    Surprise, I actually have read the novel (web) until several chapter past turtle subjugation, but it's been a very long time since (2 or 3 years maybe). And as I remember, the latter arc was very bad imo.

    Now I read manga to reread it again
     
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  11. Kingloli229

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    I would rather just say the characters themselves are just dumb. Myne betrayed Naofumi only because he was the shield hero and nobody likes the shield hero other than demi-humans. That is dumb because she and the king screwed over one of their saviors just because he was the shield hero. The other hero are also dumb because they can't think for themselves or that something is right.
     
  12. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally had harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    untrue simply because any chick can point at a dude and say rape desu

    if you don't believe it just look up how many false accusation cases actually succeed desu
     
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    Although in the beginning it seems he is treated poorly because the shield is useless, its really all about racism and bigotry. Just imagine if a black man in the early 1900s was accused of rape down south. I'm not saying its good writing, but its a bit more justifiable than many other books I've seen.
     
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    That kingdom he was summoned to have a religion centered around the Three Heroes while the Shield Hero is the patron of their enemy, the Demihuman kingdom, hence even at that start they never even planned to summon him.
     
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  15. Skyreader

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    I mean, its almost impossible for one to rape somebody then get all his gear and money stolen right after.
    Him getting robbed of all his possession should raise the flag that there is something wrong

    Why would they do that if they need the hero to fend off the waves?
    It's like shooting own leg.
     
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  16. Milanin

    Milanin [Reader] [???] [Freeloader]

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    You should have been around when the WN was being translated by @yoraikun.
    You would have been much further.
    You would know the following:
    The things that the heroes believe makes the public that's around them believe it too.
    Any truth or untruth, any feelings towards a person will be unified with the heroes.
    So, if someone manages to bring a hero to their side, like that Witch did the spear hero...
    That pretty much cements it on it being the truth.
     
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    Yes, unfortunately the authorities at the scene are the something wrong. It is a rigged trial, and the other heroes are not given all the info, plus are likely being deceived by their party members.
    The do not know him, and the accuser, as a cute innocent looking girl, has more cred. Plus why would the soldiers let him get dressed.

    Though the forced duel after their first wave is a much bigger failure point for the 3 idiots.
     
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  18. Skyreader

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    @Milanin yeah, I have heard about yoraikun

    Could you elaborate a little bit more? I don't get what you're trying to say
     
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    I've read as much of the manga as I could and then the novels and summaries (mostly because I was losing interest in it) and I have to be honest. The story in general is extremely poorly written. The plot just gets boring after a certain point. Honestly it wasn't extremely interesting in the beginning but everything is handled in such a half-hearted, immature manner that when I found out it was getting an anime my first thought was "Why?"
     
  20. Frozen ink

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    well being a princess oughta give you that kinda authority desu