Discussion Forsaken Hero LN

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  1. Darkaeluz

    Darkaeluz 『Whosays25 Onii-chan』, 『He who gave up on Love』

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    So, I'm starting to read the Forsaken Hero LN that Ziru's translating, I remember reading th WN when he was first starting it and enjoying it even as he translated the disastrous 4th part, wich also brought one of the best character developments I've read, where the second heroine became so good that obershadowed the first one, though I don't remember much and hope that the LN refreshes my memory, do you guys have any thoughts regarding this story? what did you like of the WN and what do you wish to be changed on the LN?
     
  2. Mighty Action X

    Mighty Action X Mighty and Invincible

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    What I remembered the most of this Novel is how much of a sociopaths all the characters are.
     
  3. 0000000

    0000000 I B SMILING!

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    Please let the author enhance the gory bits in the revenge. And please let him alter a bit on the part where the girls did the trial. I like it how the second girl(?) became quite a useful person yes, but IIRC there are a few parts in the scene made me cringe. No complains on the art, if the illustrator is not previously a H artist, he/she can go and try to do a H work, probably vanilla.
     
  4. Jed333

    Jed333 Well-Known Member

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    I just finished Re-reading the WN a few weeks ago right before I noticed the new LN XD. My biggest prob with the novel is mostly how the first girl fell head over heels so quick and so easily just didnt seem reasonable. Honestly my biggest hope for a change between LN and WN is that if someone does betray it is someone different since I really started to like Sajima during the trials for Tamaki/
     
  5. hatoyin97

    hatoyin97 «Frigid Heart Petrification Manual»

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    Japanese novels make little sense and there are no logic so yeah...
     
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    Vamps31 Well-Known Member

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    The hero is not killed by the mc ??
     
  7. Kuroihagane

    Kuroihagane Investi-gathor

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    it's a little regrettable that the demon girl is changed into MILF in the LN
     
  8. Fluffums

    Fluffums 【R-18 Researcher】【Seeker of Moe】

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    I don't remember much of the WN, just the trial part where I dropped it because I found it disgusting how spoiler spoiler spoiler anyway, it was so bad that even I, someone who regularly reads japanese R-18 webnovels, found it unrealistic and misogynistic.
     
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    zivoy Well-Known Member

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    This novel sound really similar to The Dungen Seeker
     
  10. nafiMn

    nafiMn Active Member

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    This novel is way too generic, really reminds me of Arifureta.
    MC Mocked by popular students > Transported and Mocked for low status > enter dungeon start fighting > Betrayal by Classmate/s > Left for Dead > Becomes immeasurably strong