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Discussion in 'General Chat' started by qzty, Jan 7, 2016.

  1. Darkaeluz

    Darkaeluz 『Whosays25 Onii-chan』, 『He who gave up on Love』

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    @qzty I just thought of another power, "Dimensional Ruling" the User can travel between alternate dimensions, an empty one is given to him to rule and in every other dimension he travels he's granted ruling power over 3 of it's physical laws at random, it can be from gravity laws, thermodynamics law and so on (there's a ton and a lot of them could be useless), if you use it, give it to anyone except hayyan LOL
     
  2. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    @Darkaeluz, no matter how you look at it, that power is just too OP. The feelings of the story would change if he put that.
    Not to mention, being super strong is boring.
     
  3. Darkaeluz

    Darkaeluz 『Whosays25 Onii-chan』, 『He who gave up on Love』

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    imagine it being in the hands of a super lazy character, that doesn't fight and uses it in really "interesting" ways
     
  4. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    Like Saitama?
     
  5. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Oh? A new chapter?
    Good work Panda
     
  6. Darkaeluz

    Darkaeluz 『Whosays25 Onii-chan』, 『He who gave up on Love』

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    Nah, someone reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallyyy lazy to care for the world
     
  7. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    Leigie from Daraku no Ou?
     
  8. Darkaeluz

    Darkaeluz 『Whosays25 Onii-chan』, 『He who gave up on Love』

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    like that, but is an otaku so he doesn't sleep all day
     
  9. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    I give up. ...no wait, it sounded like the worst-piece-of trash-character I read in... meh, no way.
     
  10. Darkaeluz

    Darkaeluz 『Whosays25 Onii-chan』, 『He who gave up on Love』

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    That's the charm, and it would get better if it's a she, and use her as comic relief
     
  11. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    Now I really give up. I can't even imagine it. Good luck. Perhaps it will really be funny.
     
  12. qzty

    qzty From normal-fag to F5-er Jack of Spades

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    Can you point the places I am trying to improve my grammar.
     
  13. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    ? I thought that I already bolded and colored them red? Well, I'm kinda switching between mobile and computer, so it'll take a while.
     
  14. Nimbus

    Nimbus Vagantem Numen, Lord of Riddles

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    Not grammar but this One thinketh the word thou art tried to writest is "swallowed".
     
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  15. neoshadow

    neoshadow Lurker Sect Leader

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    *golf-claps* for thine spoony-bard.
     
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    Nimbus Vagantem Numen, Lord of Riddles

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    Failed to see what warranted the reaction.
     
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    neoshadow Lurker Sect Leader

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    Your prose was good and made me laugh.
     
  18. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    :censored:
     
  19. fluffymigs

    fluffymigs Balthazzar's Husband/Owner

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    Have to find time to read it XD
     
  20. qzty

    qzty From normal-fag to F5-er Jack of Spades

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    Impostor!!
    @Satan
    All Hail @Satan