Discussion Freestyle Haiku Competition

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  1. addictiontofiction

    addictiontofiction Active Member

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    Eezy Peezy, this post is about writing haikus.
    the haikus can be about whatever you want. For example, about the latest novel you read, life, romance, school, upcoming holiday season, politics, weather, etc etc.
    For those that don't know what haikus are, they are Japanese style poetry that consists of 17 syllables total. 5 syllables for the first line, 7 syllables for the second line, and 5 syllables for the last line. The distribution of words on each line doesn't necessarily matter.
    So be creative, be funny, punny, serious, wacky, and most importantly, be you.
    I just ask that if you write about the novel you read, be it the one you're currently reading or ones that you've read before, please write a little description so lay people (people who haven't read the novel you wrote about) can understand what you mean in situations where you reference stuff from what you read.
    Lastly, this is a post to test your creativity and have fun with words. It's okay if your post isn't the conventional haiku, i.e you thought your poem has 17 syllables but it's actually 18 or even 19. As long as it's good and gets like, that's more important.
    The person with the most like will be hailed as "The Haiku Hermit" after a month or so.

    So, what all that being said, let the competition begin.

    Haiku competition,
    who shall be the winner
    only time will tell
     
  2. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally has harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    A loli a day,
    keeps the tentacles at bay,
    given consent des~
     
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    nick1mname Nick is not my name but it can be.

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    Valhalla Saga!
    What a great novel it is,
    Heda is best girl.
     
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  4. addictiontofiction

    addictiontofiction Active Member

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    as the seasons change
    and the days pass
    i sit at my desk, writing haikus
     
  5. GameMaster

    GameMaster Well-Known Member

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    i have a cat
    it just scratch my leg
    fuck my cat
     
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  6. Diabeetus

    Diabeetus [NUFs cutest Panda][Pandesu~][BootyFul][Hungry]

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    I’m panda the wise
    You see my ass dont tell lies
    Still shaking for rice :3
     
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  7. addictiontofiction

    addictiontofiction Active Member

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    i have a dog
    all it does is bark
    so i move to the synagogue
     
  8. AkGold

    AkGold 1202BU

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    Six in the morning
    Another day without sleep
    3 reports to go
     
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    hammyhamham God Grade Quality

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    You've been glazed and sliced
    I caress you with my lips
    Fifthy shades of Ham
     
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  10. kuroAnsatsu

    kuroAnsatsu 『Itching For Something』

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    Setra Well-Known Member

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    My phone is dying
    Download is still ongoing
    Fuck me, phone is dead
     
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  12. addictiontofiction

    addictiontofiction Active Member

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    Three finals, three more days to go,
    one unprepared student
    what is sleep?
     
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  13. fuzor100

    fuzor100 《Gokai Red Behind the Brick!》

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    Haiku a day
    make my brain fry
    i want to cry
     
  14. Okuri Ookami

    Okuri Ookami 'Chi Chi Chi' calls the Sparrow

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    A living prestige!
    A heart warmed through blood
    Heavens reward
    Bashful face alight
    The injustice of a long life
    Peaks seek justice
    Wrongfully accused!!!
    rains of acid and plagues a day
    A will Eternal
    What's a bra or two
    To plant a seed of 50
    To grow only one
    Grasp the heavens Dao
    Slaughter the enemy snatch the Dao
    Escape unscathed
    (A Will Eternal)


    A card a Prey
    Swords and Guns a light
    A Slayers paradise
    (Monster Paradise)

    The Strongest is clever
    Golden giant sours in clouds
    Spears thrown and Swords drawn
    (Super God Gene)

    Womb of blood and gore
    Ashen faces wither drained of hate
    Sorrow remains a victor
    Slaughter the highest
    rivers of blood to quench thirst
    Healthy man turned lame
    (God of Slaughter)

    I tried my best ok......... I'm not great with creativity!
     
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  15. addictiontofiction

    addictiontofiction Active Member

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    there's a song
    it's stuck in my head
    endless repetition all day long
     
  16. igiveup

    igiveup A nice guy, 2 good for modern landwhales.

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    i follow my lust,
    but it take me somewhere strange,
    too late too return.

    I want too trust you,
    but you are human like me,
    I do not trust me.
     
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  17. Nimroth

    Nimroth TKA Fanboy

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    Readers of drama,
    is dramatic and silly.
    I watch with popcorn.
     
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  18. addictiontofiction

    addictiontofiction Active Member

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    your poem is very
    philosophical and deep
    i like it a lot
     
  19. AkGold

    AkGold 1202BU

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    Final tomorrow
    How am I going to pass
    What is calculus?
     
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  20. Trent

    Trent ☕ Ursine Tea Zealot ☕

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    Enter N.U.F.
    Click on Novel General
    What competition!?
     
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