Novel God's Island (Chapter 13 is out)

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  1. J-Mitch

    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    God's Island has finally come to Novel Updates!!

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    Author: J-Mitch
    hosted by Jfantasybooks

    Synopsis:

    Makron is a servant. He is bound to an oath with a powerful master that has not been seen or heard from in thousands of years. Though he is a servant, he holds the potential to depose kings and distort political fields. Even with such power, within the cesspit of the king's court, Makron remains neutral. And for that neutrality, to replace him with an alley, everyone wants him dead!

    In a world fraught with demons and beasts, creatures and abstracts, and roaming immortals, Makron struggles not to drown in the enemies that seem to come for him.

    Genre:

    Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Martial Arts, Politics, Ranking System, Romance, Thriller

    Website:

    https://Fantasy-Books.live

    Schedule:

    The days are not set. 1-2 Chapters per week.

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    List of Chapters:
    Chapter 1: The First
    Chapter 2: The Contract
    Chapter 3: Painting of a Princess
    Chapter 4: The Chancellor's Face
    Chapter 5: Impossible!
    Chapter 6: The Second
    Chapter 7:Trapped
    Chapter 8: The Scroll
    Chapter 9: What did you do?
    Chapter 10: Friend from the Capital
    Chapter 11: Severing the First Tie
    Chapter 12: The Flying Kick
    Chapter 13: Voices
     
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  2. Gentlemens laugh

    Gentlemens laugh Well-Known Member

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    Is this a xianxia?
     
  3. J-Mitch

    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    No. It may have some favorable elements like a xianxia, but its not one; it will have no ties to Chinese culture.
     
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    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    If you have any feedback, like suggestions to make the story better or what made you not like it, please comment!!

    I write these stories, including The Abandoned, in order to get better at writing these stories.

    I want to eventually put out a story that everyone loves. :D
     
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    pkhyber Well-Known Member

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    There is no story that can make everyone happy.
    Just write what, how you want.So that it will make you happy. As for story it seems like noblesse which I would love to read.
     
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  6. J-Mitch

    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    Noblesse, huh. I personally like that one. Its been a wile since I kept on it though.

    Hopefully this story has some traits in there that you find to you liking.
     
  7. UnknownSaint171

    UnknownSaint171 To Something Sounds Cooler

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    This is really interesting I like it but what happened to the master exactly? Don't really get that part. Will he like come back and save him since people are after him?
    The reason I said that is because you guys mentioned Noblesse too ^.^. Haha
    As much as I love Noblesse I wish the author was a bit more hidden on where he got his "ideas" from. Omg he even steals the character design sometimes Lol
     
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    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    lol, I am the author.

    No knows what happened to The First Master. He just simply disappeared. That disappearance is what created instability. It is the hallmark for everything to just blow up into chaos.

    As for Noblesse. None of the story ideas came from it. It was not intentional if it has a similar feel. I can now see the underlying tone between first master and emperor, but that's all. Never read that far into noblesse so I don't know how it has similar character designs.
     
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    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    Chapter 12 is out!
     
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    J-Mitch ⚖ Tipping the Scales of the World

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    Chapter 13 is out.