Simple and straight ... I have no idea suitable name for my story, I'm pretty much like Grid from Overgeard, someone with terrible naming sense ... so, I seek for YOUR HELP! ... I will give you a my story, a prologue and ch 1 ... I know I might be asking much about reading my story, but I think it was much more interesting rather than I gave you outline of story plot and maybe after read it, you might have some idea or good name for it? alright without further ado Prologue Spoiler What have we done to deserve this? We were nothing but one of many farming villages from the Kingdom. We have done nothing but tending our daily lives. Everyone have done nothing at all. My village, my home, my field … everything was razed on fire. “PLEASE NO! I BEG YOU!” as I shout desperately to him. However, ‘he’ cannot hear it; my voice was drown by scream and cry as ‘he’ slaughter everyone. Why ‘he’ had done something like this? When the first time they came to this world. They were weak and normal just like us, and they’ve done a normal job, running errand, harvest some herbs, hunt nearby wildlife and [monster] just like us … but their growth far beyond from us. With only few months, they could grow strong enough to be par with an Elite Adventurer, and some people even surpassing veteran warfare who had fought for many years. ‘He’ was one of the [chosen one]. They were people from the [other side]. Possessed power bestowed by [god]. Their existence is [Transcendence]. And not only that They were [Immortal] Chapter 1 Spoiler It was supposed to be just like any other day of villager life. We tend our fields, harvest it, reseed it, and trading each other. You might call it a boorish life, but for some people, it was better than living in poverty or living as criminal in the city. Well … ‘It was supposed to be’ When, I was on the way to my home sweet home after I’m done tending my fields I saw three [Adventurers], they seem to be discussing something serious judging from their expression and judging from their equipment, they’re pretty much a high leveled adventurer. To be honest, it’s bit rare to see high level [Adventurer] especially [The Chosen One], since most of them probably at Borderland or at Frontier. They were either looking for fame and honor, or seeking treasure and new power. I thought nothing about it; I thought they might be in their break from adventuring and visit this village. So, without thinking much about, and I could see the dark clouds in the distance, seems about to be rain. I made my way back home once again. However, that night I was wrong … When at the night of hard rain and thunder. One of the [Adventurer] have gone berserk … He destroy everything … with single sweep of his sword, many houses and building are destroyed in instant, and people inside the building were buried in the debris. He unleash his magic … with single cast, a whole family who trying to flee were burn to death. Without shred of mercy, without shred of humanity … he rampaged. It was hopeless … No one in this village is stronger than him … the only one who can match with him was another high level [Chosen One] but none of them were here, there is few another [Chosen One] but they were far weaker than him, some of them already died protecting villagers, some of them already fled away. There is no one could stop him. At the time, since I was still a bit far away from him, I might try to flee away just like many others … but then I hear a familiar voice screaming … I looked back, and saw Lucia’ blown by shockwave from magic that was unleashed to nearby building. Her leg was bleeding from wood shrapnel, and then I saw her sister run toward her. “Come on, Lucia, we need to run!” said Lidia, her younger sister. “I can’t, just leave me alone … RUN! GO NOW! Shout her, while she push away her sister. Nevertheless, she didn’t budge; Lidia didn’t want to leave her sister alone. When I was about to run and help them, I saw ‘he’ is coming toward her. My heart skip a beat … there is no way I could fight him … they were doomed … but … I can’t run away. Not because I’m a brave person or have chivalric heart … because it’s useless to run away anyway. If I fled, there is nothing I could do when everything is over… my field and home already razed on fire; I have nothing but my clothes that cling in my body. I don’t have any other family except my village and my neighbor. So … knowing that … I might just die together with them … As rain continue raining hard with thunderstruck here and there … I keep running toward them. Then, I realize something … THUNDERS! While running, I pick lightning rod from nearby house debris. With a long lightning rod on my left arm and mud on my right hand, I rush toward him … I came from his left side, he didn’t notice me yet, the rain and thunders mask my movement and he’s wearing knight armor and helmet, so his vision is narrow … I’m confident that I could reach him, but I’m not confident about thunders would strike the lightning rod. Nevertheless, it was better than doing nothing! “HEY! YOU SONOFBITCH!” as I shout to him As soon as he turn his head. I threw the mud at his face. He seems got staggered a bit or surprised that he got an attack. With that chance, I move to his back and jump toward him, I hug him as tightly as I can and point my lightning rod toward the sky. As we struggle, the sisters have their chance to run away, even though Lucia has to crawling in the mud, she tried as best as she can to move away from us. As we continue our struggle, he use his sword to slash at me … event though my hands, shoulders, and feet were wounded and bleeding, I can’t let it go, not until my last breath. I pray to god, for her judgment … I pray for her mercy … and at last As if she heard my prayer … The lightning struck us … At the time, I can’t no longer felt my body … everything felt numb … and my consciousness began to waver. However, I kept my grip, I kept hug him tightly until my soul fade away! Soon after, the second … the third … the fourth … and so on … lightning kept strike both of us … Knew that not all my effort are wasted … I embrace my death … Or … … I thought so … Chapter 2 Spoiler I woke up at unfamiliar place … I hear some weird *beep – beep* kind of sound … I don’t what is it. My eyes are heavy; my body feels so sluggish … soon as I open my eyes, I saw white ceiling … where am I? There is various tubes connecting to my body and I don’t know what it is … I was lying at very soft bed and pillow; at my right and left bed, are some unknown tools and machines’ … I think it shows about something and apparently, one of these machines’ made that weird sound. When I was losing at my own thought, groups of people rush at me and snap me back. “Mr. Sam, how’s your feeling? You’ve been unconscious for three days, let me check your condition” as the old man with square glasses said kindly. Mr. Sam? Who’s Mr. Sam? Is he talking to me? As soon as he had done talking, he point his hand at the various machines’ to the light blue dressed girl and also said to another girl to bring some light meal. “Yes sir!” replied by both girls. When he’s done gave command to both girl, his hand reaching my face and a very bright light shone to my eyes. I couldn’t help but to close my eyes but he not allow me to do so; so he use his other hand to force my eyes open … I want to resist and move my hands but I’m too weak and didn’t have a slightest energy within my body, so I was hopelessly lying in bed. After some time passed by, he had done his examination. He smile at me and said that my condition was okay, but I was a bit malnourished. Therefore, he told me not miss my meal and ate everything clean. He’s will contact my family tomorrow and someone who ‘responsible’ since I was too weak and still needed rest. Because I can’t move my body yet, the ‘Nurse’ apparently, this is how they were called, to help fed myself. It was delicious meal, even though it look plain and simple. After I’m done ate my meal, I felt my eyes are heavy and without noticing, I already lost in my dream. … The second day I woke up, I thought I was in place called “Heaven”; However, it was not the case. When my energy already restored enough, I began to find out what’s going on to me. I was not in my original body, but someone named Sam Johansson. The place that I’m currently in is Hospital, it has similar function like The Temple House, where sick or wounded people are treated, but that place was not for everyone, only for high class noble, rich merchant or war hero are allowed to use it. The Doctor act like the priest, while the Nurse are his assistant. So many things that piqued my interest, like the object that I saw in the distant sky, it was like dragon but it didn’t flap its wing. Then there’s a tall building that able to reach the sky and also the language we talk, even though I’m able to communicate with the nurse and doctor but they have much vocabulary and different way to talk, they said the way I talk was like a Shakespeare. There also magical tool called TV is very interesting. There is so many question inside my head … However, all of those are trivial things. The most shocking information that I got was … This World. Apparently, the Chosen One came from this world … This world is The Other Side … When the third day come. My ‘family’ or I should say Sam’ family finally paid a visit. When they come inside, I saw Sam father, mother and his two siblings, both of them are girls about 15 to 17 years old. However … there is something wrong about their … attitude. Then I could see easily from their eyes … they felt disgust toward me, looking at me as if I’m better off dead. To be honest, I don’t know what’s going on but I could tell that it seems Sam and his family are not in a good terms or Sam must’ve done something terrible to them … it’s an unfortunate situation, in the place where everything is unknown and so alien, I need someone to rely on. Yesterday I thought about to rely on Sam family. At very least to help me understand about this world, even though I ready myself to pretend be Sam … well, actually I didn’t know much about my own body identity other than his name so I might say it might not going to well. When I was losing at own thought, a female voice brought me back to reality. “How’s your body?” said Sam mother’. I was a bit surprised considering she’s the one who had the most hateful and disgust feeling compared to others. “Y-yes, I’m alright” I awkwardly said … to be honest … it might be much better if they were gone and never visit me again. Because I couldn’t bear those hateful and disgust stare, I never ever once in my life to be loathed this much! My heart began to tremble at their terrifying gaze. Thankfully, the Doctor began to quick notice about these sour feeling and situation. “Mr. and Ms. Johansson, your son still need more rest and let’s have him some quite place to rest” said doctor while he lead Sam family member to outside room. The nurse’s still inside my room and when she saw my situation she sympathies to me, even though she also didn’t understand why they loath me so much. “If you need me, just press the button like always or use that device to communicate when you hungry or thirsty … I will go to doctor now” she said as she gave me a kind smile. “Yes, miss Emma, thank you” as I tried to reply her with my awkward smile. “How many times I told you just call me Emma or Nurse Emma, no need such ‘miss’ in my name” She chuckle a bit because of my respond and way of talking. She check my status from the screen near my bad and then she goes back outside with the doctor and the rest. I let out a long sigh and close my eyes … I want to forget those terrifying gaze. Therefore, I began to drift into my slumber once more. … “So, how’s my son condition actually?” said Sam Father. “He’s fine and his body began to improving, he’s can be discharged within a week or so … but …” said doctor, but when he’s about to continue, Sam Mother interrupt him. “Is that so? How about the medical bill? Are we the one going to settle it?” “No need to, the game company already paid all the medical bill and will paid any further medical payment until Mr. Sam healthy again” the doctor knit his brow as he answer her question. “Then it was good an well, and please … if possible don’t contact us again, he might be our son but for us, he’s no longer be part of our family, we don’t care what might happen to him or even his future … so, good bye sir” said by Sam Father and then he lead his family away. At the same time, the nurse Emma came outside from the ward. “How is it going doc?” ask Emma. “Not good … *sigh* I don’t know why they hate him so much but without their help, it will be hard to diagnosis his mental health or any change with his psychology … though, in my honest opinion, I think there is some drastic change happen to him but I have no prove for it” All of this conversation was happen without me knowing it until later on. and if you have some suggestion, critics, or even correct my terrible grammar, please don't feel reserved, I might felt thankful for it. so ... thank you in advance!