Help with my story tittle

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  1. Rogue Will

    Rogue Will [A Passing Devil]

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    If you long for the MC to become a badass, something like Ascension of the Last Boss might work too
     
  2. Wiger98

    Wiger98 Custom title

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    not enough info to make a title since we barely know the story
     
  3. oblueknighto

    oblueknighto Blue Person

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    A tittle!
     
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    Harfang Well-Known Member

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    I am interested too.
    +1 for The NPC's Revolt.
    Or something more abstract like Virtuality vs Reality.
    Good writting!
     
  5. MidnightHaze45

    MidnightHaze45 Well-Known Member

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    You must be really fun
     
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    FalseGod Well-Known Member

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    'Highest NPC'
    Need more chaps thor
     
  7. deepon

    deepon One who inevitably awakens

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    If the story is going in the direction that i think it is, then I would suggest "Immortal slayer" or something similar like 'Slaying/Harvesting Immortals', 'Vengeance of an NPC/citizen/bystander', 'Killing Strangers',
     
  8. Simple As It

    Simple As It Well-Known Member

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    wow, wow, easy there, I'm sorry I fell a sleep as soon as I'm done creating this thread, so I literally surprised with so many comment.

    I haven't read all of your comment but thank you in advance once more, and I already add Chapter 2 so it you might be able to understand more. I edit my thread so read it there.
     
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  9. Simple As It

    Simple As It Well-Known Member

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    hey hey hey
    it was something like came from Detroit Became Human
    I'm getting wuxia vibe here.
    I have a bit difficulties trying to convey my imagination into a word, so the simpliest way is First person view, I might want to try in third person but for now, I will practice my grammar and vocab in first person.
    you were right, I tend to use repetitive word ... perhaps because my vocab are limited, even though I read various novel with complicated word and vocab, it's not easy to implement it to myself or my writing. thank you for your suggestion, I'll try to proofread it once again.
     
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  10. Simple As It

    Simple As It Well-Known Member

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    I actually wanted to release it at Royal Road but judging by my current situation, I might put it aside my thought about it and more focusing on proofread and also I need to finish the story first before I'm able to proudly put it on display.

    Well, I hope all of you help me to improve myself ... so, I'll be in your care and thank you in advance!
     
  11. juniorjawz

    juniorjawz Well-Known Member

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    no need to worry about Titles till you're ready to release it "officially".

    In the meantime, it's still a good opportunity to think on.
     
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  12. Cutter Masterson

    Cutter Masterson Well-Known Super-Soldier

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    I have to admit I was not expecting chapter 2 to turn out like that. While I can see where your going with this and it’s quite logical to go this route. I have to say I’m not really a big fan of gender benders novels. That aside you story still grabs and holds my attention. So good job. Prologue is good. Chapter 1 had me especially at the clif hanger. Chapter 2 was a welcome shock. It’s official I want more and I believe it’s worth publishing it, especially at RRL. I have been seeing a lot of authors being recognized by Amazon. So it might be worth it.
    As for advice. I recommend a longer word count per chapters, but it’s not a set in stone thought. I am happy with just getting what I can have. The second thing I would advice you is the story would be the possible direction. I hope the MC body will retain its previous abilities as a choose one. Maybe a system status and his powers. By the sound of it. The original owner may have tried to rape his sisters or maybe cost a lot of money for the family. I don’t know. Maybe take as an example towards his family -
    https://www.novelupdates.com/series/neet-receives-a-dating-sim-game-leveling-system/
    There are two ways I like you to consider going. One is a slice of life route. Or two the apocalypse route. With these I can see a lot of interesting things happening.
    Whichever route you take I can’t wait to continue reading.
    As for titles...
    I’ll stick to my previous suggestions.
    Good luck.
     
  13. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    SnowdropLily 100% Procrastinator

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    Title: Status Growth Evolution
    Hope it helps
     
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