Question Help with this novel title?

Discussion in 'Novel General' started by Donutmindme, Dec 29, 2018.

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Pick a title! But read the summary first.

  1. (Current one) This Party has me Changed! >:(

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  2. I unknowingly took Pandora’s Pil.

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  3. My life changed as I accepted a drink.

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  4. @#$&, why did I get this effect?

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  1. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    I was thinking changing the tile of this Novel.
    The titles each have a a different summary
    This party has me changed.
    Kota, a normal guy, got dragged to a party. That party had made some changes to his life. Of course, he himself didn’t notice the changes untill it was a week away from the party. What do those changes entail? Well, Kota was pretty shocked. Then he became enraged but after awhile, he gave up. He still wanted his body to go back to normal. However, that wasn’t achievable by any means.
    I unknowingly took Pandora’s Pill.
    My friends brought me to a party. I meet a woman with long ivy like hair. She gave me a drink. She put Pandora’s pill it. Like the name suggests, you wouldn’t know what it give you. It gave me gifts. The last one I didn’t appreciate it much.
    My life changed as I excepted a drink.
    One night my life changed. It changed because I stupid to except a drink from a stranger at party. It did give cool stuff, but.... I want change my body back. Please tell me, is there a backspace to life?
    @#$&, why did I get this effect?
    The person of all problems stood infort of me. Of course, I didn’t know that she would be the cause of all my problems. I blame this person for give me that drink! Now, I have to stick with this body forever. Maybe I should blame myself for being stupid to except that drink?
     
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  2. Raneday

    Raneday Not Rane

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    sounds better
     
  3. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    ^ like
    I’ve run out of likes.
     
  4. TrollingTrolls

    TrollingTrolls [Trash Talker]

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    Why don't you try something else ? Like - Life changing party. Bleh I'm no good for this. Your titles are … hmm, something is missing, I don't know really what, so I cant choose any. Don't look at my suggested title either, its no good ! :D
     
  5. Jigoku Shounen

    Jigoku Shounen An Envoy From Hell

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    @Tony
    Ehhh....this site is already up and running? I thought the bot said the Original Novel Site was gonna be linked to NU when it was ready?....I was waiting for it, since I will be planning to post my novel in there when it's ready.
     
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    Raneday Not Rane

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    it's up and running but 'twas still not officially opened since there's still a lot of bugs here and there
     
  7. Tony

    Tony Moderator Staff Member

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    It's not official yet but the site is up and you can post on it. I'll make an announcement + link on NU in about a week. There's not many bugs left so I would like to finish fixing the bugs first before I officially release it.

    There's around 200 members already even though it's not official and I haven't advertise it like crazy yet! You should check it out if you have time.

    (I'm really thankful for everyone signing up already)
     
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  8. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    It will be once the site officially lunches.
     
  9. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    It life changing, but I’m trying to convey the MC’s emotion into the title?
     
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    Jigoku Shounen An Envoy From Hell

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    I will just be waiting for the official release then....since I will be registered not with my name, but a different random name anyway....:blobneutral:
    It's embarrassing for other people to read my "masterpieces":blobsweat:
     
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    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    Will find you regardless~:blobhero:
     
  12. Tony

    Tony Moderator Staff Member

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    No problem! The users & authors there are already helping other authors from what I've seen. No one starts at the top so keep working hard and don't be embarrassed. I think feedback is a great way to keep improving yourself.

    Anyways, sorry for hijacking your thread @Dountmindme. I'll leave this thread.
     
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    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    No it’s okay.
     
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    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    *whistles*
     
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    Junweizhu Well-Known Member

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    I think "This party changed me" sounds more natural?
    Not that I'm choosing this or anything, just saying it.
     
  16. LysUltima

    LysUltima Riichi! Tsumo! Toitoi! Suuankou!?

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    These titles honestly all sound like Japanese titles...
    このパーチには僕が変わった
    思わず僕がパンドラの錠剤を食べた
    知らない人からの飲料を受けたら僕の人生が変わった
    クソ、なぜこの効果!?
    How about:
    A Fucked-Up Party
    Pandora's Pill
    Life-Changing Drink
    Side Effects
     
  17. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    Okay. Thanks forgot the suggestion though~
     
  18. Donutmindme

    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcrastinator]

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    Lol.
    JP titles~
    For kanji i only I know 食べた、僕、思い、人、生、飲み、that’s all can recognize.
     
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  19. LysUltima

    LysUltima Riichi! Tsumo! Toitoi! Suuankou!?

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    They're translations of your four titles.
     
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