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  1. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    I want to make an original story and I already have some idea:
    1. Immortal Hunter (it's a story about a group of adventurer in the first world born from Void)
    2. Narrator's Tale: First World (same as idea no. 1, but was narrated by Narrator-san who are also appear in the story)
    3. [Kami Association] (a story about several peoples forming an association, in a fantasy world. Some character from 'Immortal Hunter' also appear)
    Which one of them should I use? Can you guys give me suggestion? Also, a suggestion about how should the story become would be nice~
     
  2. Potato

    Potato its doomed

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    I think 2 sounds cool
     
  3. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    Yeah~ I think so too~ think about it, in the middle of the story we will see Narrator-san commenting~
     
  4. Potato

    Potato its doomed

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    totally fine to be hijacked
    hmmm.......
     
  5. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Number 3...
     
  6. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    And why is that? can you tell me a reason?
     
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    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    From the name... it's something about gods right? Or is it about paper... or hair...
     
  8. CDLevit

    CDLevit Aspiring water; spark of cynicism; Em&es explorer.

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    I want something more... Soloish, not centered on group adventures. Adventures are ok, but..i'd want something like LMS action, multiple type of view tires me. Your story, you decide. Good luck!
     
  9. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    It's about some people who have a fragment of God's power~
     
  10. Potato

    Potato its doomed

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    its about staples
    right?
     
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    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Eh... Then that's doesn't sound fun... well then I guess number 2 would be good
     
  12. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    Well, all of them are in one person view (only from one perspective), it just that the MC has companion and they play an active role in the story
     
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    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    Who know? I'm still in the process of making the story...
     
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    Sproutling We are the Sproutlings

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    3 is good, I like people forming an organization(maybe guild) then battle together.
    As for no 1, the reason is no 1 is too mainstream.
    As for no 2, I didn't get it.
     
  15. Gadget

    Gadget Demi-god of magic and science

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    My first choice would be number 1 and second choice would be number 3
    I like it when there is romance. Have 2 girls (not mere decorations) fight for the mc's love. I'm not asking for harem, but if you want it I wouldn't mind.
    Do not make it too much like chinese novels where everyone aside for the people close to the mc are greedy sneaky arrogants spoiled bad guys. Sure, there are a shitload of them, but not that much!
     
  16. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    Ahaha~ Yeah, I don't plan to make my story like those chinese novels
     
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    3...and u can add animester in your story.....
     
  19. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    Mmm~ look like fun, let me think about it...
     
  20. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Don't forget to add Loli in the story comrade...
     
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