Art I tried drawing once...

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  1. Ryuubii

    Ryuubii Well-Known Member

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    The hair makes her head looks too big...
     
  2. Jaded

    Jaded Majoring in Erology

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    Hey. Don't insult M's. We M's don't accept getting beaten up by everyone.

    That pic...is terrifying.
     
  3. Lao

    Lao Languid

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    How is it terrifying, I'd understand if you said you got turned on cuz of that pic *cough*
     
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    I love it. If those eyes(IRIS) were placed properly(now both are near the edge, but should been placed in middle) , it could make the face look normal,at least for me.
     
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    Jaded Majoring in Erology

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    HEY!! That's rude.

    I prefer sexy older girls with big breasts and long legs. The type that look like they can't wait to trample me and beat the hell out of me.

    The picture girl doesn't look like that. She seems like someone who's just stab me....
     
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    Lao Languid

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    The M within thou is strong
     
  7. Ababil

    Ababil Non Well-Known Member

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    verdict: -fix head proportion
    -fix eyes
    -fix fingers
    -nope, boobs stay
    -finer detail
    I'm doodling this in merchandise book, hence the stamp...

    and thank you for your thoughts, guys.
     
  8. Theo Thanasia

    Theo Thanasia Medicine Master

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    mrprince241 Cyborg Dinosaur

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    I'm not gonna lie i pissed on my self a little like 3-5 drops when i saw your drawing. But your drawing is tight although i suggest for you to watch some disney fun stuff movies.
     
  10. Ababil

    Ababil Non Well-Known Member

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    yes I am, I've this acute insomniac symptom for the last 2 years...(oot answer)
     
  11. Gunji Murgi

    Gunji Murgi Overlord of all Things Feathered

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    I think the head is a problem. The proportions are a little messed up and if u fix that, is amazing
     
  12. SiriamDeNith

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    The proportion of the head are fine IMO, though the hair... It has to much volume? and the Hair Crest, I think that's how the shit is called in english, looks wrong from the front.
     
  13. Rumanshi

    Rumanshi 『Demon Lord』『ルマンし』

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    I'd use your art for my novels. :)
     
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    0x22b Active Member

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    I see some people are saying it's scary but... I think it's pretty cute, honestly. I really like your style.
     
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    mangaling Less than average

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    thumbs up from me. good shading and style.
     
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    Ababil Non Well-Known Member

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    It's been months and I still cannot draw line or proportion properly...
    Skull.jpg

    there's hidden pumpkin somewhere..., it is halloween after all...
     
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    Ababil Non Well-Known Member

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    New Darah...
    Circle.jpg
     
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