Discussion If you could make any major change in your favorite novel... What would it be? ;~;

Discussion in 'Novel General' started by Linley, Nov 12, 2015.

  1. Mrgameandwatch77

    Mrgameandwatch77 Chrit, the God of Squirrels, Moe, and Cookies

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    Really? I can think of somethings I would change about One-Punch man...
    Like, I wish that they didn't spend so much time on the Gerou arc (human monster guy if I've spelled his name right). Cool for awhile, but I missed Saitama. Also, his hero name has to change.
     
  2. Saitama

    Saitama Hmph

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    Whats wrong with cape baldy? ;)
     
  3. Ogami-kun

    Ogami-kun 『Blue Shadow ensnaring demons』『FA sect disciple』

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    I know, but Juggernaut Drive would be the skill he uses in berserk mode, and with Linley is really too OP
     
  4. canaria23

    canaria23 『  』

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    Familiar of zero... change the male mc to cool one
     
  5. Jaded

    Jaded Majoring in Erology

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    Is that so? I feel that there are too many holes in that idea. No offence. The priest who kicked him had been flying and probably would never have even met our MC if it hadn't been for yelling out some weird stuff. I think it was, don't fly so fast or your pants will fall of or something? After the the priest fell on the ground, the MC continued saying weird stuff, like asking the priest to marry him to the priests daughter/granddaughter and so the priest ended kicking him...and he somehow got kicked to a another dimension.

    I feel that there's no deeper meaning to how the MC changed dimensions. The author probably meant it as a joke and a way to showcase our MCs perverted and shameless nature.
     
  6. drealicious

    drealicious Macho man's wifey

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    The Imperial Princess Accidentally Seduced Her Husband. It's not my favorite but I would love to kill the male lead and replace him
     
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  7. Greedyspree

    Greedyspree 『Exile within the back room』

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    Atleast gives me some mental reasoning that makes some sense -chuckles- Though i love the story the translation can only be done so quick after all, so ive been waiting to hear the answer lol
     
  8. Raphael

    Raphael Well-Known Member

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    That wasn't a theory but what actually was written by the author a bit later on. So all of it is certain, just bit confusing since the translations of it that I read where a bit garbled.
     
  9. Ai chan

    Ai chan Queen of Yuri, Devourer of Traps, Abused Witch

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    Make magic common knowledge in Harry Potter. That way, both science and magic can merge. We can have spaceships the size of a house with inner space the size of a mountain while being powered by gibberish incantations and propelled by dragon fart. It should also be armed with magic wands made by Olivander.
     
  10. Rreelentless

    Rreelentless Captain Sheriff Admiral Colonel Major General

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    It's not my favourite novel by a long shot but close combat mage sorely needed just a few time-skips here and there of a few years to make it so that the MC isn't 10 years old. this would fix close combat mage for me
     
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  11. Shio

    Shio Moderator Staff Member

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    I wanted to change the ending and pairing of utsuro no hako zeroth no maria.
    Kokone and daiya (+maria & hoshino)should have found their own happiness instead of getting together. I prefer Kasumi Mogi x Kazuki Hoshino, Haruaki x Kokone, and Daiya x Maria.
     
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  12. Lachiel

    Lachiel Paradise Lost

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    The one thing I would like to change in any novel I've read It would be the fact that a step into the past, is the first real "waifu" of the novel makes a read feel so much about her, but in the end you still sorry... :( I want her to have a happy end..?
     
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  13. Ldyrdy

    Ldyrdy Snowfallsdown

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    The end of mushoku tensei..
     
  14. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Devouring The Heavens: *burps*

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    Linley and alice ... I really liked their pairing. IMO she wasn't that bad at first but and and if only talked to linley about her problems it wouldn't have turned out that way.
     
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    never really liked her like Delia more
     
  16. Sheir

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    I am totally agree with you
     
  17. Linley

    Linley 【Linlin】【The Love Doctor】【NUF Nicknamer】

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    Osu, an ex of mine named Alice cheated on me o.o So I'd rather not go back out with her XD
     
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  18. Daike1234

    Daike1234 THE GUY WHO TRANSLATE WITH THE HELP OF MACHINES

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    Alice is actually an Overgod of fate with amnesia. and its just that the follower of her Sovereign Delia don't want her to fall in love with some petty mortal. so she makes linley saw an Illusion of Alice and that guy walking together.

    Delia is Bad after all
    Delia Killed Linley cause Alice's memory returns and looking for Linley
    Linley is dead.
    Delia is Innocent
    Overgot of fate, Alice, Did not pursue the matters anymore
    Good Ending.
     
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