Hello. I've actually written a number of stories, though nothing professional; just amateur web fictions, and a couple I've posted on RoyalRoadL. This particular story I wrote as a joke, as a result of a comment I made on an /a/ thread a few months ago. Synopsis: Waking up as a starving infant was terrible, but finding out I'm a fuzzball was probably the highlight of my day. Fox ears and a tail—this is crazy, but at least I get to do nothing but relax in a crib for days and weeks at a time! There are just a few problems... Genre: Action , Comedy , Fantasy, Crossdressing Act 1 Chapter 001 Chapter 002 Chapter 003 Chapter 004 Chapter 005 Chapter 006 Chapter 007 Chapter 008 Chapter 009 Chapter 010 Chapter 011 Chapter 012 Chapter 013 Chapter 014 Chapter 015 Chapter 016 Chapter 017 Chapter 018 Chapter 019 Chapter 020 Chapter 021 Chapter 022 Chapter 023 Chapter 024 Chapter 025 Act 2 Chapter 026 Chapter 027 Chapter 028 Chapter 029 Chapter 030 Chapter 031 Chapter 032 Chapter 033Chapter 035 Chapter 035 I'm pretty open to ideas, considering my complete lack of ideas. I have a direction in mind, but it's not solid. Hope everyone enjoys my poor attempt at a story!
i skimmed through it ,but I'm just going to say this , writing a story while your english while obviously being influenced by Japanese novels 97 percent of the time will not work , you will never see an english story with tskommis or whatever in an english story when its translated it works but other wise nada
You're not wrong. I find that I've been pretty heavily influenced by what I've read in the last year or two, which is mostly composed of Japanese light/web novels. I use to write mostly in prose, but I've fallen into the habit of having this "thought oriented" style (does it even have a name?), where the majority of the text is inner-monologue, while having the setting and surroundings be implied, rather than described in detail.
So since making this thread, I actually made 28 more chapters, and posted them all up on RoyalRoadL. I'm not sure about the sort of improvements I've made thus far, but hope people enjoy.