I'm a Kitsune?

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by TUSF, Dec 19, 2015.

  1. TUSF

    TUSF Well-Known Member

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    Hello. I've actually written a number of stories, though nothing professional; just amateur web fictions, and a couple I've posted on RoyalRoadL.
    This particular story I wrote as a joke, as a result of a comment I made on an /a/ thread a few months ago.

    Synopsis: Waking up as a starving infant was terrible, but finding out I'm a fuzzball was probably the highlight of my day.
    Fox ears and a tail—this is crazy, but at least I get to do nothing but relax in a crib for days and weeks at a time!
    There are just a few problems...

    Genre: Action , Comedy , Fantasy, Crossdressing


    I'm pretty open to ideas, considering my complete lack of ideas. I have a direction in mind, but it's not solid.
    Hope everyone enjoys my poor attempt at a story!
     
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    Cloud9000Arrogance Active Member

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    i skimmed through it ,but I'm just going to say this , writing a story while your english while obviously being influenced by Japanese novels 97 percent of the time will not work , you will never see an english story with tskommis or whatever in an english story when its translated it works but other wise nada
     
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    TUSF Well-Known Member

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    You're not wrong. I find that I've been pretty heavily influenced by what I've read in the last year or two, which is mostly composed of Japanese light/web novels.
    I use to write mostly in prose, but I've fallen into the habit of having this "thought oriented" style (does it even have a name?), where the majority of the text is inner-monologue, while having the setting and surroundings be implied, rather than described in detail.
     
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    TUSF Well-Known Member

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    So since making this thread, I actually made 28 more chapters, and posted them all up on RoyalRoadL.
    I'm not sure about the sort of improvements I've made thus far, but hope people enjoy.
     
  5. sinyueliang

    sinyueliang 『World Traveller』『Demon Slayer』『Hinokami』

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    I drew Toyaru, because everyone needs a cute shota kitsune in their lives - link here.
     
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    TUSF Well-Known Member

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    Just posted Chapter 33.

    Wow! It's adorable, really!
     
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