Oneshot Is This Love?

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by AliceShiki, Jul 11, 2019 at 7:35 AM.

  1. AliceShiki

    AliceShiki 『Ms. Tree』『Ophi-kun's Survival Teacher』

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    Well, I didn't have any particular inspiration for it, just made things as they came to head! xD

    Most stuff I read nowadays are Japanese novels though, so it might have some influence though...
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    You should go for some novels with more... eh difficult words? It would help you to have more word choice, maybe?
     
  3. AliceShiki

    AliceShiki 『Ms. Tree』『Ophi-kun's Survival Teacher』

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    Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazy, I don't read much nowadays, might as well make sure the stuff I'm reading is fun~
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    it's not like I want you to read non funny and uninteresting stories!
     
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    "You left me alone, love..." Alone my ass! I carried you all the way here! Give me a break!
    Hahaha ! Really give off a "real" feeling or a "comedy novel" feeling.

    Somehow it felt a little weird that kinda make me hesitate but ... hmmmmm... now that i write that i again want to vote no...
    It's really good and all that but somehow i can't help but dislike your story a little. Sorry you won't get my vote. Really sorry.