Novel Last hope destroyer

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    Sourceofchaos Well-Known Member

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    Synopsis: he was supposed to be our last hope, our shining star, but he betray us and kill us all. Now l'm back and shall destroy you.
     
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    Cosmic_ [Novel Addict] [Lazy Writer] [Meh Editor]

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    Underload <I need someone to scratch my back!>

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    Shouldn't the 'he' of 'he was the last hope', be 'I was the last hope'? If your character is talking in first person....
     
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    Shio Moderator Staff Member

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    Locked. No trolling please
     
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