Title: Library Magic Synopsis: Isaiah a world of magic. The current state of world is a battle of the races, which the demons and humans that co-exist are winning. There, a human who is gifted by God with a strange power. A human that can do the what was known as the impossible and is changing the world within. But what is his goal? To become a God? Or is it more deeper than that? Find out as this is the story of that human. Table of Content: 1) God - First Meeting 2) Library Magic 3) Rebirth 4) Growing up - Part 1 5) Growing up - Part 2 6) Rena and The War God Sinoh 7) Growing up - Part 3 8) Disturbance 9) Rage Flame Queen 10) Foreboding 11) Arrival 12) Childhood and Library Magic 13) Childhood and Library Magic - 2 14) Childhood and Library Magic - 3 15) Precognition 16) Unknown Enemies Glosarry link Genres: Action Adventure Harem Fantasy Mature Romance Seinen Tragedy Chapter 1 : God - First meeting "Welcome to heaven!" This is what I heard within my faint consciousness. Although I could hear it as clear as a day and think about its implications clearly, I cannot see who is talking nor pinpoint where the sound is coming from. As I contemplate about it, I am experiencing an unimaginable pain throughout my whole body, like I've been crushed into a pulp. "Ara? Did I forget to take away your sense of pain? Sorry about that, nufufufu. Though, I didn't take your memories, so you should remember what happened to you before you got here?" Said he/she, while the pain mysteriously goes away. As I was recalling what happened, his/her voice interrupted my thoughts. "A truck crushed you." Yes, as cliché as it might sound, it was indeed what happened that morning. An hour earlier… "You can never visit the same place twice. Each time, it’s a different story. By the very act of coming back, you wipe out what came before." The Last Little Blue Envelope by Maureen Johnson "Hmmmmm. So if I go back to studying in school again the same thing that happened will not happen again? Ridiculous, it will happen again and again, even if I go back there hundred times." I mused to myself, while reading a book in one of the many bookstores I frequented since my childhood. It was an open air book store, and the old man that owns the store always let me read books for free, in exchange for guarding the store for an hour, while he gets his daughter from middle school. The old man is such a good parent, even if his daughter said it's ok not to pick her up every day, because of his work, he always does anyway. A stupid but respectable father. I mean, what would he do if I take some books from the store and run away? As I was thinking that a sound came from in front of the store. *HONK!!!!* "What the -" I started to exclaim, but was cut short because of what was happening was too fast to react to. *CRASHHH* Back to the present time… I died huh? I wonder what will the old man do when he gets back. I hope my body is burned fully in the explosion. It will be a hassle for my father and my stepmom and stepsister will probably have faces of disgust, if they saw my squashed body. Therefore, I hope not trace of me could be seen. "Nufufufu. You really are interesting. You just died and what you care about is your corpse and what they will think of it." I don't really care what they think of it. I just don't feel comfortable having those trash looking at my dead body. Such is my train of thoughts. "Oh! Is that so? Nufufufu. To call your family trash is harsh, you know? And aren't you surprised that I can read your mind?" He/She said. Whatever I call those trash is none of your business. And aren't you late on asking that question? Anyway, I am not surprised, because I knew from what you said at the beginning that you are … God End of Chapter One Chapter two: Library Magic
Seems interesting, his character is a fitting for a reverse-hero or maybe a tsundere hero, and library magic sounds quite interesting, can't wait for next chapter Edit: 'I don't really care what they think of it. I just don't feel comfortable from those trash looking at my dead body. Is what I was thinking.'
You need more writing (about two chapters) before I can make a basic judgement and critique (and that's only basic mind you) Also the story needs editing @TheGirlWhoWearsGlasses
Ofcourse ! What's the point of my fore shadowing if I don't use it ? So how do I do this ? Should I create chapter two in a new thread ? But how will I link them ?
Actually, there should be guide for this, and based on the guide, you were supposed to place the synopsis, the ToC, and uhhh, the rest(?) In the first post... let me get the link Edit: http://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/original-composition-rules.61/ and do you know how to apply the link? Say it if you don't know, quite complicated when i first made it...
Its good but apparently just to short to make judgements... Grammar wise its readable ...change thrash to trash ... Thrash I think is for verb usage...thrashing people etc... Continue on mate
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