Request Looking for feedback on a story

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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    Hey, guys! I'm looking for someone who's willing to read my story and provide feedback on it. Normally, I have the wonderful, amazing NaraMori aka LillyoftheValley read my stuff for me (she's saved my authorial behind more times than I can count), but since this fic is for her, well...

    Some brief details on the story below:
    Kingdom Hearts fanfiction
    Rated G! There isn't even any kissing in it.
    Pairing is M/M/F Axel/Roxas/Xion
    Length is 2314 words, or about 7 pages
    Some KH3 spoilers
    Genre: Introspective, angst, HE
    *impressed that there were several Kingdom Hearts tags*

    If you're willing to help, I'll PM you with the story! ^_^
     
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    iampsyx Have some rest, and let's do better tomorrow

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    You finished it, Mama? :aww::aww: You worked hard! :blob_pompom::blob_pompom::bloblove::bloblove:

    *waves arms enthusiastically* Me, me~ Psyxy wants to be one of Mama's betas! ♡♡♡ :blobphone::bloblove:
     
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    Sure! :bloblove::bloblove::bloblove:
     
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    I would like to help but I am afraid M/M/F is not my cup of tea so I probably won't be of much help giving you feedback :blobsweat_2:
     
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    That's fine! That's why I say upfront that it's that, even though it's very mild.
     
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    I'd like to read it, please~! :cookie:
     
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    Love (of all kinds) is something that I would rather evade reading in novels that is why I might not be of much help :blobsweat:
     
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    Sure! I'll add you! ^_^
     
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