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  1. Nam101

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    Hello people, just here to shamelessly promote my own novel. Currently Webnovel Spirity Contest is going on, so I need exposure ToT , more votes and review.
    The title is Starting With The End.
    It is a FMC, Re-life story, and it would have multiple timelines in it, currently it's ongoing, and I am doing regular upoloads.
    Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/starting-with-the-end_19992511006431805
    Synopsis:

    “Let’s make things right now, shall we?”
    An otaku, socially awkward, 20 years old Airi Shin, was peacefully living her university life, without a hitch. Until her life changed overnight, as she faced an accident on Christmas by a white car running over her.
    Soon the light before her eyes started to fade away. But when she woke up, she found herself somewhere she wasn’t supposed to be.
    While she was wondering when and how she landed up there, a man came to her, offering her a chance. To make everything right where it went wrong, and change her fate.
    Getting to know her entire situation, she met new people, some new situations, and some new feelings bloomed.

    ——————

    “That guy is a threat to her, and I will do anything to prevent them from meeting, even if they are fated, to protect her smile,” Ryo swore to himself, while seeing a bright smile on Airi’s face.

    ——————

    “I know it might be rude of me now, but can I be your acquaintance once again?” Carter expectantly asked Airi, when the bright moonlight poured over her, making her the most beautiful in the world.

    ——————

    “Get the hell out of my sight! Get out! You should’ve been dead all along!” Airi was never bothered by any harsh words, and Shiro was no one to her. Yet somehow, him saying all of this while looking at her with hatred, pierced her heart so badly that she couldn’t stop the tears rolling down her eyes.

    ——————

    “I won’t let your lifetimes be filled in despair ever again, I will help you to resolve your regrets in every lifetime, so can it be me?” eyes filled with emotions, Ryo said it to her.

    And there is this voice, which keeps ringing in her head. A voice so deep, pleading to her every time on her deathbed. “Don’t go! Don’t die on me again!”

    “I don’t deserve to be by his side, but I want to… and it hurts…” Airi broke into tears, while nature was also harmonizing with her, pouring rain.

    So many loose ends to tie, so many regrets to resolve. Amidst all of this, will Airi be able to make her life better? Will she be able to deal with the unknown yet oddly familiar events unfolding before her?
    In between all of this, will their love really bloom? Or it will dry out before that, and fade away in the pages of their lives?

    So, basically, this is it.
    And I will be more than happy if you drop by there and put your honest opinion about it >< I can take up any advices, or criticisms! trust me, me friendly ;-;
    This is my very first time writing so I am nervous ><
     
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