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  1. Sawanara murasaki

    Sawanara murasaki Sawa the HEro-sensei

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    So, I don't know when I drew them, either in 2016 or earlier 2017...I wish people to love this comic but I never post it anywhere and just draw it but wishes to renew it since the female characters are way too short!! That's annoying and the paneling are kinda sucks too...and the English has too many grammatical error (forgive me) but I feel so lazy to correct it since I'd already inked them the past years TToTT...And forgive me if the lined on the pages annoyed you cause I drew them on my exercise notebook that's why cause this comic is a trial for inking pages..
    I wasn't experienced at drawing manga at that time but now I'm 85% experienced (except for panelling)..

    So here, I let you read some pieces of it(16 pages) and tell me if I could proceed the story when I renew it...
    but it's a bit hard to renew it since somebody had stole Hoshira'S and Shira'S (urai) original character preference paper 2 years ago but I'll try my best..(sorry for the long talk, I'm just so excited)

    Edit: I stopped drawing this manga after my ex-best friend break our friendship cause I drew this manga for her:cry:

    2nd edit: Just found the original character preference of Hohira and Urai in my phone's hidden file system(yokata):blobsob:..After this, I won't lost this pic again cause like i'd mentioned, their photo had been stolen.
    Title: Mafia's and Gangster's Son and Lovely Senpai
    Summary: N/A
    Genre: School life, Shoujo, Parody (since I've a lot of manga, so this comic will reveal most of them but not in the first chapter), Comedy
    Rating: G

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    Note: Tsubasa in this page is not how she should act(that's why I wish to renew it) but the next page is acceptable..she's cool and charming and everyone loves her and admire her..
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    Note: Urai and Hoshira(the guy with glasses) are the new transferred students..The point here is that all the characters are separated so the story goes on after Tsubasa and the other started to gather again.

    Document_12.jpg Document_13.jpg Document_14.jpg Document_15.jpg Document_16.jpg Note: Kenji and Reiji are just extra characters, not part of them..

    https://forum.novelupdates.com/posts/5393546/

    https://forum.novelupdates.com/posts/5394968/
     
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  2. Xieljhane

    Xieljhane Lost

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    The drawing's are cute, :blobpopcorn:
    ... That's all I can say.. :aww: I'm not good at explaining things eh.. :facepalm::blobpats::blobpats::blobpats:..
     
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    Kuchi66 Well-Known Member

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    This is what I would imagine an otaku drawing.

    It's very awkward.
     
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    0000000 I B SMILING!

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    ....wut did you do... have you make your amendments to her then?

    Also, nice skills you have for a rookie mangaka, not so nice that the society needs more accountants...
     
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    lichdeath undead meatbun ^^

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    honestly said my first opinion is those glasses look like mustaches on the nose
     
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    Your paneling skill is really godlike, your hand writing is beautifully written that always makes me read it back to make sure that i have understand it. The comedy is truly hilarious that makes me wonder why a blind person would be studying in normal school, and the last but not least, your ex-best friend is truly a fool who doesn't know how to cherish someone hard work that's being done for her.

    I'm sorry if you mad at me, i want to do this so you have the motivation to remake the manga and let me read it :notlikeblob:
    Wuahahahah
     
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  7. Sawanara murasaki

    Sawanara murasaki Sawa the HEro-sensei

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    The one who was foolish was me:notlikeblob::notlikeblob:
    Nah, it was an old story and it doesn't hurt me anymore, I don't really take things serious nowadays
     
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  8. Sawanara murasaki

    Sawanara murasaki Sawa the HEro-sensei

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    Yes I did, and I'd tried again last year but still fail..but it's alright, I take things positively thanks to my new bestfriend:blobpats:
     
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    Sawanara murasaki Sawa the HEro-sensei

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    @Maid Chan , I know that the drawing looks a bit awful cause I haven't touch my pencils and papers for days:blobdizzy: but your request enough to make me happy, thank you...that's Ashura and I really like your idea and I'm always and always wish to draw Ashura in maid's dress:blobokhand:

    Sorry for posting it here and even though you ask for one but I'm really excited to show you my Konomi in maid dress..:blobReach:
    Sorry too if both maids aren't what you really wish to see:blobsalt:
    I'll try my best..and I really love to see girls showing off their shoulders and wear miniskirt:aww: Sorry again...:blobok: Screenshot_2020-02-07-22-12-56_1.jpg
     
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    Sawanara murasaki Sawa the HEro-sensei

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    Note: Desperate + Embarass
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