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((Sorry for the late reply. I'll go over the things that need revision.
Well, just a few things, actually.
What powers magic is magic energy. Magic energy can come in all sort of forms, like fire attributed magic energy and the like.
What produces magic energy is mana. Mana is attribute-less, it's just a fuel. Imagine magic as a electric machine, magic energy is the electricity to power it, mana is only a fuel used to generate that energy.
Mana alone is unable to produce magic.
So... nature mana, mana manipulation; Both need correcting.

Aside from that, it's all okay~))

 

OOC: So let me get this on potato level terms, gathers attributeless mana > converts the mana to elemental type of energy > molds the energy to magic?

If so places doesn't count as an advantage now? Like you could in hindsight perform better fire-type magic in a volcanic area?

 

OOC: I think that's correct but I think it's more like Normal Mana > Normal Magical Energy > Begins Spell Casting > Magical Energy turns into an element > Finish Spell Casting > Pew pew.

 

Name: Hako
Race: Human
Sex: Female
Age: 18 (I’m assuming magic academy is basically high school)
Position: Member
Rank: E

Appearance:
Leather Boots, Tights, Generic White Long-Sleeved Dress, Leather Corset Belt, Belt with pouches, gray scarf

Equipment:
Leather Gauntlets with magical amplification runes
Collar embedded with a mana storage crystal
Ankle cuffs with more mana storage

Inventory:
A Simple Wand, Some Empty Vials, A Magic-Powered Pocket Watch


Specialty:
Barriers and Hard Light Magic (Creation Magic focusing on solid mana)

Spells:
Cubic Barrier - Barrier Magic - Creates a small, cubic barrier.

Mana Bullet - Offensive/Creation Magic - Condenses a small shard of mana which can be propelled at high speeds towards a distant target. It’s accuracy and range can be affected by extending cast time and using more mana/better equipment.

Hardlight Shields - Misc/Barrier Magic - Condenses a small, elliptical shield out of mana. Literally just a small shield.

Propel - Misc. Type Magic - Creates a directional propulsion force. Power, and duration can be changed.

This shouldn’t break any rules right...? @.@

 

The receptionist puts down her book.
"Hmm...Barrier Magic. Interesting...Everything seems to be in order. Welcome to the Magic Association, Miss Hako. Requests are that way. Hope to see you soon."
Gesturing to a nearby board, Nadia continues reading her book.

((Welcome o/))

 

((A good point.
How about this: Since the body needs to refine raw mana in the mana heart, this raw mana can be actually attributed. The mana heart turns into unattributed refined mana, that is later on used for spells.
The attributed mana in the outside world reacts to certain magics, like in resonance.))

((It's all good \o/))

((Thanks for welcoming her... I was asleep...))

 

Name: Nana
Race: Demihuman (Foxkin)(2 tails)(Half spirit)
Sex: Female
Age: 18
Position: Member
Rank: E

Equipment: rags, Slave Armlet (Broken)
Inventory:

Specialty: Illusory Magic (Misc)

Spoiler: Spells

Spell Name: Muscle Overdrive
Spell Type: Support
Spell Description: Boosts muscle strenght by channeling magic energy through them, this skill uses little mana but in exchange places a severe strain in the user's body, Not recomended to use it without recovery means, burns a lot of body energy and might cause severe hunger
Spell Name: Illusory Sword
Spell Type: Creation/Misc
Spell Description: Creates a fake sword by using mana to trick the world itself, unlike a certain archer, this sword can't be fired nor leave contact with the weilder

Special conditions:

Spoiler

Magic bones of the fox - Physical Condition
Description: Strenghtens the bones of the user by storing mana within them, the mana contained can be later used to cast magic, Unique to foxkin related to spirits
Will of the Fox Type: Barrier/Blessing
Description: A spell cast over Nana by her father at birth, it uses Nana's mana power as a power source, it makes it impossible for the protected person to be affected by weak curses by tricking the world on believing the one this spell is casted on is resistant to curses and making it turn dissipate the weak curses

Backstory:

Spoiler: Unknown otherworlder

Portals to "otherworld" happen to appear once in a while, it is believed that those portals lead to an unknown world where spirits dwell, however as those portals are most of the time way too small to pass through, and they dissapear really fast so nobody has been able to study them yet, it was through one of such portals her father appeared, falling from a relatively high place and getting knocked out he was rescued by Nana's mom, he apparently wasn't all that different appearance wise from the fox kin, a fox spirit, the only variation was that he had multiple tails, other than that he seemed to be proficient in illusory magic, that aside, the portal through which he had passed to this world, although with an uncommon large size, dissapeared fairly quick, it seemed like he was standing when suddenly the hole appeared bellow his feet, hole that was in fact around 10M above ground on the other side
Because his similarity to the fox kin race he was accepted in the fox kin village, he fell in love with Nana's mother and they married, it wasn't untill a year later that it was discovered that the atmosphere in this world wasn't adequate for a spirit to live in, he died a year later after witnessing Nana's birth
After this she lived with her mother up to the age of 13, a relatively happy life with her grand parents and mother, but that changed three days before her birthday, a faction of a human supremacist group attacked the village, killing the old and capturing the young to sell them as slaves, her mother tried to scape with her but they were spotted and her mother killed, unlike in many novels the people of the human supremacist groups did not rape her mother or her, just because they thought that the very act of having intercouse with a lowly beast kin as disgusting
She fell into despair once the slavery armlet was placed on her, a slavery armlet is an item that forces the wearer to do the bidding of the one that owns it's counterpart slaver ring, it is designed so that when it is forcefully removed it releases a deadly curse on the wearer, it functions with a slavery crest engraved within, the crest does not steal the free will of the wearer, however if an order is given the crest takes control of the body untill that order is completed
3 weeks later, the sllaver's wagon in which she was carried was attacked by bandits She thought of this as an oportunity to escape, up to this moment she had not received an order through the armlet, so when the slaver gave the order to protect him, somehow she noticed that she wasn't affected by it, once she checked her armlet she noticed that there was a crack on it, by seeing this she figured she was free so she took one of the swords the slaver had and chopped his head off
She unlike most fox kin had a high affinity with magic, this trait came from her father's side as spirits have high affinity for controlling and weaving mana, her father's speciallity was illusions, and she had inherited some of his nature, she seemed to have a much higher than average strenght than other fox kin but it was due to her subconciously applying muscle overdrive to a small scale, explanations aside, she proceeded to kill the bandits, unfortunatelly the other slaves that had been facing them lreviously were severely wounded and she was unable to do anything to save them
Looking at her right hand she noticed the sword she had, and the blood dripping from it, it was at that point that she noticed that she had killed, the image of that sword in her hand was imprinted in her head, fear, power, disgust, many feelings were imprinted in that image, this would later become one of her sources of power

She then walked through the road, it was unfortunate but the slave trader had no clothes that would fit her so she was forced to keep wearing the rags that slaves commonly wear, however she took the money the slave trader had at hand

When reaching the town the guards didn't stop her, it wasn't uncommon for slaves to escape after the master had died in a monster attack, and she had drooped the sword before reaching the town, and so they believed that that had happened, m had they know that she killed the slave trader they would have reacted in another way but they didn't know and she would not tell them either, she then headed to an inn in order to rest as it was already getting dark, after all she had been resting in the open, the only reason she hadn't been eaten by a monster was that she subconciously used illusory magic to make it seem like she was not there, she decided to buy clothes the next day and went to rest, oddly enough she, the daughter of a spirit who was transported to this world by a space time hole, got sucked into one in her sleep, the fall wasn't that great when compared to her father's so it didn't hurt her, but it woke her up, at that time she was in front of one of the branches of the Magic Association, and confused but curious she decided to enter
(Note lets say she got taken in by the asociation and sent to a magic academy due to being an odd otherwolder of an odd race)

Appearance: Your typical Kitsunemimi blonde girl, her two tails were hidden subconciously with illusory magic so she only showed 1 untill she learned to control her magic, afterwards she still hides her second tail, because she got accostumed to seeing only one
Personality: Innocent in a few areas, a ruthless killer if angry, somehow keeps a calm and compossed image most of the time but deep inside is a scaredy cat, a violent scaredy cat
Magic Origin: Illusion

 

Hm... The "Magic bones of the fox" is okay, but rather a physical condition than a spell~ You can add a part describing that condition.
The "Will of the Fox" is too a condition, since it isn't a spell that belongs to her, but rather something that her father casted over her. And about it:

Well, this rule isn't as strict, though. As long as the effect isn't so drastic, like the Illusory Sword. Basically, I'd like you to change the immunity to resistance. Of course, considering the current situation of magic, it would render her immune to most currently developed curses. The only problem with "tricking the world on believing the one this spell is casted on is invulnerable to curses" is that, for being so extreme, it would trigger the world's response...
That's the only change that I'd like to suggest.

Anyway, I liked the character concept~

 

Okay, then Magic bones of the fox would be a physical condition, but the Will of the fox spell is more of a barrier or a Blessing

Good thing that in her world the slavery system used a relatively weak curse to forcefully turn the person into a subordinate and then used strong control magic to rule over the subordinate's body, however as beastkin tend to have really low mana pools, she got one of the low tier ones so Will of the fox can be weakened without having to rewrite some parts of the backstory...

 

*nod nod*
Yeah, more like a blessing, I guess~

That's good to hear~

Anyway, welcome to the Magic Association~ \o/

 

Wait...forgot to switch the rags with something else!
Attending to a magic academy was a last minute decision... ah... is there a magic academy student official uniform?... kuh... thinking about the clothes is hard...
The armlet should be kept, it is like a memento of her old world, the place where she lived with her mother... the rags too, but should she wear them after she returns from the magic academy?! she is a girl... Ah I'll just draw it and add it later

 

There is~
The association also has, but doesn't enforce the members to use.

 

(Well I managed to somehow make my card on my phone. Backstory which I already wrote here is awaiting transfer. What ya think? @The Everdistant Utopia )

 

Hm... If anything, I'd ask you three things...
Well, the age is kind of too much, so please take out a zero, I guess... Reduce the SS to A... and, well, I'd like you to list the spells...

Aside from that, it's mostly all fine considering she's from the old era~ Just needed a bit (quite some) of nerfing...

 

(How about now?)

 

(Don't worry about nerfing. Bela will almost always stay in the tower. So, can I now be a Picture staff member? Pretty please? )

 

Good~
It's quite good~
I'd like a bit more of description, but typing at the phone is really hard...

Picture staff, as in... finding pictures for the things...?
Hm...
@Way, @Naraku, @Haxagen, @Ddraig any say on this?

 

(Finding pics and posting quests/bounties. I guarantee a full fantasy experience!)

 

Hmmm... It's fine as long as you consult with the rest of the staff first...

 

( @The Everdistant Utopia Here is a Goblin quest as an example:

Quest: Goblin Extermanation
Time: unrestricted
Description: Goblins are a regular threat and have been set as a permanent extermination target. Please bring five ears.
Reward: 10 copper per ear.
Provider bonus: Arachne silk)