Art My attempt at creativity

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  1. Axiel

    Axiel ❖ Beyond Salavation ❖

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    So I was bored by the absence of internet connection in my place and tried something...
    something I'd probably regret (  ̄ω ̄)☕

    20170717_19470123123134.jpg Ao.no.Exorcist.600.526618.jpg

    if you're going to criticize, please break it to me gently, my poor heart can only handle so much... ☕(ˋಥωಥ´ )
     
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  2. SpiralGust

    SpiralGust Well-Known Member

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    Better then everything I've ever drawn
     
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  3. Lucresia

    Lucresia Well-Known Member

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    It's nice and I like the top one more.
     
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    What program did you use to draw this?
     
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  5. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally had harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    hey ever seen a horse kick a guy in the balls desu ka?

    no desu?

    then here desu ~

    [​IMG]

    now you should as bad as the kid desu~
     
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  6. Axiel

    Axiel ❖ Beyond Salavation ❖

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    paint tool sai, tho I just drew on paper and traced the outline on the program.
     
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    The top ones cute, but the bottom one looks off putting somehow... I'm not sure why though...
     
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  8. R0adRunner206

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    Picture #1: if your making a light add shadows on your artwork 1. Make the hair tiny bit lighter 2. His tail(?) add light on it to make it look better, next I would say is add a background or a bed (something) to get rid of the white in the background. =6.5/10

    Picture #2: can add colors, better outline of the snake, maybe some jewels in the crown, (and I'm not 100% sure but don't those face masks have the string go around the ear not the top ear to jawline). Could add some slits to the snakes eyes like you did the person. =5/10

    Side note: I do like your pictures so make some more!!!

    EDIT: I had to fix my spelling errors so reread again.
     
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  9. TheMrAzn

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    Nicu! A proficient chibi maker
     
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  10. Axiel

    Axiel ❖ Beyond Salavation ❖

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    thanks for the tips mate, tried fixing some on the second image

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    Great job =3= I like it
     
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  12. R0adRunner206

    R0adRunner206 Well-Known Member

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    Face mask (check), used more room via snake body (check), snake eyes for a more realistic snake (check), color (not needed cause it'll take some time), made the crown look more (crown like?) (check). =7.5/10

    Side note I only did a 7.5 because my own opinion is that artwork needs colors, but yours doesn't need it but it would be appreciated, but w/o my own opinion it would be a good 9/10 piece of art work.

    Ps you should do more in the future, have a good night!
     
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  13. alexfilia

    alexfilia Bromance & Fluff <3

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    Kyyaaa really cute chibis!...well done <3
     
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  14. Axiel

    Axiel ❖ Beyond Salavation ❖

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    thank you everyone for the kind words and compliment (シ_ _)シ
     
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    Reincarnation Of Dragon Well-Known Member

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    I love them all! So cute♪( ´▽`)
     
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  16. Arch

    Arch [Popcorn Sect Leader]

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    All are original and looked so real that they blended so perfectly. You did a great job there.