So I was bored by the absence of internet connection in my place and tried something... something I'd probably regret (  ̄ω ̄)☕ Spoiler {} {} if you're going to criticize, please break it to me gently, my poor heart can only handle so much... ☕(ˋಥωಥ´ )
hey ever seen a horse kick a guy in the balls desu ka? no desu? then here desu ~ now you should as bad as the kid desu~
Picture #1: if your making a light add shadows on your artwork 1. Make the hair tiny bit lighter 2. His tail(?) add light on it to make it look better, next I would say is add a background or a bed (something) to get rid of the white in the background. =6.5/10 Picture #2: can add colors, better outline of the snake, maybe some jewels in the crown, (and I'm not 100% sure but don't those face masks have the string go around the ear not the top ear to jawline). Could add some slits to the snakes eyes like you did the person. =5/10 Side note: I do like your pictures so make some more!!! EDIT: I had to fix my spelling errors so reread again.
Face mask (check), used more room via snake body (check), snake eyes for a more realistic snake (check), color (not needed cause it'll take some time), made the crown look more (crown like?) (check). =7.5/10 Side note I only did a 7.5 because my own opinion is that artwork needs colors, but yours doesn't need it but it would be appreciated, but w/o my own opinion it would be a good 9/10 piece of art work. Ps you should do more in the future, have a good night!