My poem, but i cant translate is to english ._.

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  1. Nope34

    Nope34 {Nope Garden's Master~}{Flower and Water Guardian}

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    Rasakan​

    lihat sekitar
    Berapa banyak?
    ada berapa yang terlihat
    berapa yang tidak
    Apa itu arah?
    bagaimana cermin?
    Pastikah?
    Hitamkah gelap?
    siangkah terang, lalu
    coba jelaskan
    Siapakah kata?
    sebuah arti yang bermakna
    atau dibalik
    Ombang ambing
    Atas ..
    Belakang ....
    Jalan??
    hampa?
    Hidup!
    komtemplasi,
    yaa
    Awan benderang
    memancar simpul
    melihat semua
    sedikit demi sedikit
    panik cemas gelisah
    Beratkah?
    Atau dunia?
    semuanya
    Melepas tanpa puas
    Kesadaran
    tak lagi terlihat

    Tangerang, 16/08/03
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    Nope34 {Nope Garden's Master~}{Flower and Water Guardian}

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    For who want to understand it, just try to think about this feeling:
    "How many color in the world, put it more simple how much red/green/blue, make it more simple how much colour that between sky blue and light blue, tortuise and light green etc"
    Well it ridiculus for some people, but that are my foundation of thinking
     
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    Crimshine x399 %993

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    What language is this?
     
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    Nope34 {Nope Garden's Master~}{Flower and Water Guardian}

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    Indonesian :3
     
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    Nope34 {Nope Garden's Master~}{Flower and Water Guardian}

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    uselessno4 Not so useless human

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    Cool!!!
     
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    Nope34 {Nope Garden's Master~}{Flower and Water Guardian}

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    U can read it? ._.
     
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    Savor it

    look around
    How many?
    how many can be seen?
    some can't
    What is the direction?
    How is the miror?
    Is it truth?
    Is it blackness dark?
    Is it light noon?
    Elaborate it
    Who is word?
    A mean with meaning
    Or turned
    round around
    Up...
    back....
    Path?
    Void?
    Live!
    Contentplation,
    yes
    Glowing cloud
    shine a knot
    Seen it all
    Grain by grain
    panic worried anxiety
    is it heavy?
    or the world?
    Everything
    Freed without satisfied
    Concienes
    Never be seen

    Tangerang, 16/08/03
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    ElTorroLoco [Christmas spiritbun][Left Hand of Sordahon]

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    Nobody can its penguin language!
     
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    Takumi168 『Forever Alone Guild』『Boredom sect』『Merchant』

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    When you get that specific I start geeking out with frequency specifically light waves. Color is just one small part of the spectrum. The question is how many differences can there be in between the denomination.
     
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    I dont know it really right or not, but use same amount of poin (.), Comma, etc, they has their own meaning

    How if u post meatbun language too :3
     
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    Well... my waifu angry with me now..
     
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    Takumi168 『Forever Alone Guild』『Boredom sect』『Merchant』

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    Is the date august 16 2003 or March 8th 2016? Lol
     
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    Huh?
     
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    Nope34 {Nope Garden's Master~}{Flower and Water Guardian}

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    My own format is y/m/d
     
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    Nice translation you got there, it kinda lost its charm tho. Well yea bhs indo doesnt really make much sense if translated to english.
     
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    Well if i translate it too much... i can be said write a completely different poem
     
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    Its not really your own format in China they write their days with year first like you do. It's just too many different format it gets confusing. Unlike when it's year 2000 and before you can figure it out what the format is since you can't get months or days in the '90s or anything above 31.
     
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    Takumi168 『Forever Alone Guild』『Boredom sect』『Merchant』

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    Actually you can translate it as long as you stay true to the meaning of the text rather than using your own words or the original words. Whats required is the confirmation from the author whether the translation is right.
    Art is mainly an expression and that deals with emotions.
     
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