Request need help to cheat

Discussion in 'Novel General' started by Rak Wraithraiser, Dec 9, 2015.

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Do u really want me to cheat ? will u help like a nice guy ?

Poll closed Dec 11, 2015.
  1. yes for the first

    4 vote(s)
    26.7%
  2. oh freaking yes , its a given , we need to help this dude out right now

    4 vote(s)
    26.7%
  3. i believe that its your assignment and it is to help YOU thats why u need to do it (yes im a cunt)

    7 vote(s)
    46.7%
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  1. Rak Wraithraiser

    Rak Wraithraiser Well-Known Member

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    i would copy paste if i could find a 1500 less words xianxia , guess i can write a bit myself somehow if i have plot in mind
    :) thanks for help , <.< but no i cant use that...more like i dun wanna..
     
  2. tact

    tact the master mind AND The Communicator #1

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    Now Now you dont get to be selective
     
  3. oblueknighto

    oblueknighto Blue Person

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    Wow, rejecting the help someone gave out of the kindness of their heart.
     
  4. taba1212

    taba1212 Unemployed

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    ahhh okey then good luck on writing mate :D
     
  5. BQDJ

    BQDJ Well-Known Member

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    1500 characters are done pretty quick. You could just play the kiss ass type of guy and give him like 20 stories. Teachers are always like "effort" is the main part.
     
  6. Ratatoskr

    Ratatoskr [Aruruu's proud dad] [The False Gentleman]

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    Stern as always. Hahaha
     
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    Ldyrdy Snowfallsdown

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    Go to royal road.. Ctrl c and ctrl v.. Done in less than a minute..
     
  8. canaria23

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    and the dethronement of satan
     
  9. Rak Wraithraiser

    Rak Wraithraiser Well-Known Member

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    how bout something like this ?
    mc is a bit masochist , after getting hit by truck chan he got sent into game he was playing last night "galge online" ( a game where one needs to level up his charm and attractiveness to win hearts of girls who only like super powered warriors)
    he wake up in a black sticky room and reeks of alcohol , then got a pop up message along the lines of "U failed to control ur own urges and showed ur bad side to silfy and now she has dumped u , but due to ur own ad luck u somehow fell into a hole"
    he doesnt understand whats happening and whats with the game like message , then vagely remembers that he read it somewhere before
    for now he thinks he should at least get out of this hell hole like place
    while walking he shows his M chara as he is happy how she threw him asside like a trash
    then suddenly heards a mechanical noise and whoosh something passes by his ear
    his body stiffens and he gets shocked what just happened and think how all this seems familiar and hears a barely heardable growl from his stomach and decides he need to leave here to get food before he die of hunger
    while continuing forward he somehow vagily know which way he needs to go and automatically doesnt step on traps and seems happy that its getting brighter
    then the light increases as it becomes hotter and he stumbles upon into a room of magma which has a dragon sleeping in it
    his memory churns as he remembers the nice feeling of getting burn down by the fire dragon
    he realises he already did this
    shouts "HAA WHEN WILL THIS LOOP END"
    as the dragons slowly wake up

    -story end
    tell me how it was , where i can improve , and other stuff
    edit - >.< i now realise its no where anywhere near a xianxia yet
    also i would need to re write it up and this is only a rough sketch of story
     
  10. Dreizehn

    Dreizehn The ghost that watches over you

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    Write an ending with a flashback. It's easier to right it bit by bit than trying to white out your eyes waiting for someone to help you and rejecting the given story
     
  11. Ryve16

    Ryve16 Working Hard and Hardly Working

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    Make up characters and then the story will flow
     
  12. heartantares

    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    dude... I suggest writing a story about how ur asking for help on writing your 1500 word story.

    its pretty much a narrative so you can ramble off into space all you want. And it is still a story

    you got your plot, your climax (cheating on your hw), and ending (hard work rambling)

    in any case most teachers don't really care what you write as long at it follows the guides to some extent and have the full amount of words needed..... Seriously... It still works in college.... Apparently writing the same sentence over and over in different wording counts as explaining your sentences....
     
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  13. Rak Wraithraiser

    Rak Wraithraiser Well-Known Member

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    haha...i already have a plot in mind which i wrote so if u could please comment on that
     
  14. heartantares

    heartantares One Who Provides Uselessly Detailed Information

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    mmmm I suggest more description of the setting or room then. It'll up your word count if you are short on words. Hahaha describing setting adds to the mood of the story too in my opinion.

    ahhh this is hard typing from phone =/

    ahh this is hard typing from my phone....
     
  15. canaria23

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    watch 300 again, copy the narration style and you'll have an epic story
     
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