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  1. Hasr11

    Hasr11 [Cat] [Fujoshi] [JP TL in Hiding]

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    Basic context: speaker 1 is asking about speaker 2’s gender. Speaker 2 is some kind of a creature that has no gender but can mimic other living things, and in this case it’s a human.


    「今更だけど、お前は男だったんだな」

    「おとこってなあに?」

    「それがついてるやつのこと」

    「んんー、よくわかんない。ご主人さまのマネしただけ」

    「待て、俺のはそんなに小さくない」



    I don’t understand the line in bold. My guess for it is



    “It might be late to ask, but you’re a male, right?”

    “What’s Male?”

    “I’m asking about what’s there.”

    “Hmm, I don’t quite get it. I simply mimicked Master.”

    “Wait, I’m not that small!”
     
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    I think it’s something along the lines of “That’s, it’s about people who have it.
     
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    MianaXenia Well-Known Member

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    I’d say something like

    “The people who have it.
    Or something like that just something similar
     
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    thepope Well-Known Member

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    Have no better translation, but now i want to know the novels name.
     
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    I think
    I think your translation the closest , he's basically saying the stuff down there that a guy is suppose to have.
    So edit your sentence. "I'm asking about the "thing" thats down there" something along that line.
     
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    Galooza The One True Walapalooza

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    You've got the right idea, just needs some tweaking to make the conversation easier to understand:

    "Kinda late in asking, but you are male, right?"
    "What's "male"?
    "Someone with that thing down there."
    "I dunno what that is; I was just mimicking what master had."
    "Hold up, I'm not that small!"
     
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    Like the others said, yours is already ok.
    "Someone with that down there/hanging around/down"
     
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    It’s Yaoi, just so you know:blobpeek:
     
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    Now I wanna know...
     
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    Hasr11 [Cat] [Fujoshi] [JP TL in Hiding]

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    Wait for it...I’m probs gonna post the translation in some time ehehe
     
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    But how do you know it’s a novel I’m currently reading? There’s so many BL, I don’t have time to read them all, and many go under my radar. Unless you’ve seen me comment on your translation?
     
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    Hasr11 [Cat] [Fujoshi] [JP TL in Hiding]

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    It’s a two part short story, so chances are, you haven’t read it
    (No one MTLs JP raws anyway)
     
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    Anra7777 All powerful magic grammar hamster queen pirate.

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    *has mtl’d some JP raws in the past* Well... let me know when you’ve posted then, please! ^_^