So, I had a whole book randomly come rushing into my mind out of nowhere, had a headache for like a minute. Its a good idea, and I really like it. But I'm to lazy to write the story Hopefully one of you can write it or start off your own idea from this. Tessa's Journal - idk, this title randomly popped up in my mind to What the story is about: The main lead will be a boy. He's from the fantasy world, he meets a girl who is transported from this world to the fantasy one. The girl is an Otaku, the girl is 15, the boy is 17. The girl is saved by the boy, and learns about the world. She is a coward at the start but becomes his shield later on. In the girl's hand holds a journal. She had just finished it before coming to the fantasy world. The journal is written in our language, so the boy can't read it. That's the beginning, then my memory threw me like 8 years in the future, the boy had learned how to read in the girls language, and they had both grown powerful, at that time, a demon lord came forward, and the girls eyes sparkled for adventure. They fought the demon lord. The demon lord was to strong, they had thought that with their strength, they could kill him. Sadness filled their eyes, as they regretted not being stronger. The demon charged towards the boy and was about to kill him but the girl rushed in front of him taking in the blow, a sword piercing her stomach. The demon lord laughing. The girl tosses the boy her journal and tells him to run. He doesn't and says he'll die with her. She tells him, if we both die, then how will you avenge me? Tears come down his eyes and he runs, with the journal in his right arm. As he gets away, a bright light shines from the demons castle, everything turns to dust, and his screams can be heard from day until night. He suffers, becomes an alcoholic and years go by without him noticing. The book is stored away in a chest. One day, he gets so drunk he looks at the book and starts reading it, the writing reminds him of her, and tears start running down his eyes. The book has a whole bunch of bs The other world Journey If you are reading this, then it means I've died, in this book is a list of things that might be useful, if it were to ever happen, which it probably won't... Page 1 What to tell me if you have gone back into the past. Your favorite color is Pink What to tell me to believe you. My personality The boy closes the book and starts laughing. She really did prepare for everything he thinks. He reads the rest of the books, the book is filled with places they've been and was pretty much her diary. He becomes sober again as people start helping him. After his 5th year apart from her, he finally dies. He was killed adventuring into a dragons lair. Thus, the story begins, his reunion with her. The beginning of a love story. Anyway, someone please write out my story
Your page 1 is too cryptic. A novel is all about its execution, but from the story you outlined it pays to the reader's feelings. This means it must be down-to-earth, yet still keep the readers interested. Nobody's coming to read a stranger's diary. Keeping this balance between the mundane and fantastical is the key to emotionally moving the readers, which again goes back to execution..
??? That's page 1 of the journal.... Lol, bro what are you talking about? If anything, that would be the synopsis XD Edit: Just for fun, lol. Synopsis: What to tell me if you have gone back into the past. Your favorite color is Pink What to tell me to believe you. My personality The boy closes the book and starts laughing. She really did prepare for everything, he thinks.
It would be a fun idea to let different people trying to build a world based of this lore :v. I'll maybe try to write chapter 2 after reading your chapter 1.
Lol, dude. It's completely different, I just read all the reviews. Here's one right here: About a salesman who, during a certain earthquake, was summoned to the other world together with some other people. Maybe because he was a salesman, he knew very well how to interpret other people behavior and make conclusion from their action. Spoiler And after he started to learn magic, he will be able to even read his future wife's mind. [collapse] There aren't any demon king or world invader setting, because it is a world without discrimination.. As far the chapter i read so far, it lean more toward political and comedy? Rather enjoyable if I had to say so. Edit: after reading the latest chapter (currently c28) the story is all nice and well, a bit boring if u may say, but... Spoiler There's one thing bothering me, what happened to all other people who was summoned with him??? After he got himself in comfortable situation, the story proceed as if those people didnt even existed. The novel doesn't even have a handbook, only similar are pretty much the titles and the fantasy setting, lol.
I see, a it was just me. Though I think it's better that you're the one who will make it instead of others..
Tbh, I just didn't want to make it because of the huge headache that came with it for some reason Also, not that good at writing, and I'm really lazy. You should expect a 2 year haitus every chapter...