Role Playing Novel Writing Game: The Dethrone of Satan

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  1. Das

    Das Lazing around Devil's Luck

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    Option 4 we choose option 4
     
  2. Das

    Das Lazing around Devil's Luck

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    And Satan wins!!!
     
  3. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    I tried that .. didn't work..

    ....
    at this point im tempted to just end the novel by having FS battle Saten to a stalemate while Catacus deals with HDE since catacus sides with FS while HDE sides with Saten then there's the squirrel and Lily battling each other. On FS and Saten's battle, before they would both end up killing each other Das and JJ would come and stop FS and by pressuring her since she's heavily wounded, though Saten is heavily wounded as well he still has Das and JJ. Then "that guy" appears. "That guy" who is Rank #2 in the whole Novelupdates is of course a being who can put a stop to this with just a few words. That guy will not side with anyone and only wants to bring someone home and because he felt that the whole situation is now unfair he decides to step in and bring her home otherwise have Saten and FS battle it out and have JJ and Das watch from the sidelines as their overlord dies with FS. Knowing that the latter choice wouldn't be at all a happy ending for anyone they decide to just let it be and that Saten and FS enmity would end there and FS (it has not really been revealed yet but the whole FS vs Saten only started because Saten teased FS, so basically going to war just for that is pretty much 1000x OVERDOING it and thus dying just because she got teased isn't really an ideal death) would go home with that guy. FS would refuse since she really wants to finish this but even she is silenced once that guy stared at her forcing her to clam up.

    He tells her that she has already proven herself and that had it been a proper one on one, the ultimate ruler of hell would die by her hands at the cost of her own life, and this was something he would never accept as he values her. He also points out that even if she defeats Saten the whole thing would be meaningless since he would just get revived due to humanities constant strife with life. And lastly he points out the truth as to why FS doesn't want to let this go is because she really like battles, yep, that's right. The whole war thing was for her own amusement ( much like how her brother Das messes with everyone just to kill boredom) and her enmity with Saten isn't really that deep however through out her constant travels she gains a lot of experience and realizes she is still pretty far away from the top. In the end she continued to battle because she wanted to prove that she is strong and capable and Saten was just about the right opponent to test her skills and improve herself. Now that she had proven herself and she had her fun it was time to go home.


    so yea saten doesn't die and fs goes home happily with that guy.

    anyway that's me and it's not really fun if the whole thing would be decided by me.
     
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  4. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    no.
     
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  5. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Since it's progressing nowhere I'l use my zombie brain to come up with something...............*ting*

    While our heroine playing with some unknown dog...
    Meanwhile......

    "Underworld Army Central Command, Month X Day XX Year 666"

    "Alright gentlemen... this story is progressing nowhere...It is time for us to act" Field Marshall LC.
    "But, dude... we know @Satan is too OP for us..." anon zombie officer.
    "I know that... and stop calling your superior dude, dude..." LC
    "Then what are we going to do sir?" Random skeleton.
    "We will fight the @Satan while this story Heroine find some way to kill him... have you sent the map to our Heroine?" LC
    "Yeah... I already sent it using F*dEx..." anon zombie officer
    "Alright then... we march to eat...ehem... war! Death or glory...!" LC
    ...
    "We already dead though..." anon zombie officer

    And then a war between The Underworld and Hell have started... without our Heroine knowing...
    Since it's hard to describe a war... here some picture instead...

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    Ugh... my zombie brain fried just by coming up with this...
     
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  6. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    LOL. I just read this part today and I'd like to point, Do you know how they got rid of Sal? The moment he appeared 2 devils ganged up on him and KOS'ed him. xD no one is safe in this thread really. unless you're there to stop them from killing you right of the bat.
     
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  7. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    I like you! have my like. okay

    Our heroine and her friends discovered a dog which FS named 'BreadSticks' when the ground beneath FS shook and she stepped aside as it seems only that particular spot was moving. She could tell something was down there and she also knew that that thing didn't mean any harm. @Catacus noticed as well so he looked to where FS was looking at and a few moments later a hand with the F*dEx band appeared with what seemed to be a letter. @Catacus and Fs scanned the hand and the letter with their divine sense and they found that the letter was just a letter so FS accepted and shook the hand then the hand burrowed into the ground once again.

    While Pinku and @Mrgameandwatch77 were playing with breadsticks, @Catacus was examining the map that was given to them. It was telling them the location to ZaTein place.

    "...."
    "....."
    "......."
    ".........."
    "Should we?" FS finally stopped the periods and from going any further.
    "Well you did say it wasn't in the east so apparently it should be somewhere on the North, South and Western areas of hell." He looked at FS and asked her, "It tells us the place we need to go to is in the north..What do you want to do?"
    Upon laying eyes on her @Catacus saw her smiling.
    "Whether or not this is true, we have no destination anyway other than the three directions we're left with so..." FS answered.
    "Very well. Though ... is this really how you spell er .. Saten?" @Catacus by now somewhat understands FS' temperament, however he was indeed bewildered by the way the letter's on the map were written:


    "..."
    "...."
    "They probably hate him so much they changed his name."
    "And I thought my changing one of the letters of his name was awful already, but this, this is practically a totally different person."

    So our heroes head towards the direction the map pointed to.

    Upon arriving a scene like never before appeared infront of them. A huge battle of Undead were trading gunfires with @Satan's forces of hellbeings. And not just gunfires, but wide scale gunfires and magic! millions of undead were everywhere and millions of @Satan's forces were battling it out with them! @Satan's team can be identified by their red-like-auras while underworld team has this purple-bluish-like-auras.

    FS need not decide wether to fight or be on guard or to observe. She fights!
     
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  8. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    okaayyyyy the compilation has finally caught up to the game. You guys go do your stuff and let's end this.

    Btw, Just a suggestion, if you guys want to stop this already please don't add anymore characters and make the heroes go around again ... adding characters is okay as long as you don't leave them hanging and make them actually interact with the original characters be they pro-Saten or pro-FS.
     
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  9. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    I don't actually know about it.
    Oi, I do!
    ...New avatar? Btw, never do option 3 after a good story (Doraemon TxT)
    Who is Narrator - Ego?
     
  10. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    Umm... just orientally read page 28. Still don't get how it's going to end.
     
  11. Catacus

    Catacus The God of Cat's & Potato's

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    he might be a banana.....
     
  12. Asakura Ouryuu

    Asakura Ouryuu 【Eternal Lurker】【Lily's】【Shady Merchant】

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    Narrator-san was not an ego of mine, he is another person. He just need my body to speak in here...
     
  13. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『The Gas Mask』『Monochrome Plebeian』

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    Okay?
     
  14. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Will we continue this?
     
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  15. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    well i don't plan on ending it without having my bout with saten!
     
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  16. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Alright, should I come up with something?
     
  17. FlowingSong

    FlowingSong Otome Isekai Reader and Trash ML Hater

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    sure just make it connect with my previous story telling!
     
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  18. LivingCorpse

    LivingCorpse Half-dead Neighborhood's Undead

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    Getting back a little bit to the past...
    ...
    Northern Hell Plain, 4 hours before FS join the carnage...

    "Underworld Expeditionary Forces, 101st Nazi Zombie Squad, Inside an ancient derelict spaceship"

    "What are we doing here Commander?" Nazi Zombie soldier 1
    "We're looking for some relic" LC
    "A relic?" Nazi Zombie soldier 2
    "That's right It's an ancient device left by some guy" LC
    "I hope it's a cookie..." Anon zombie Officer
    ".........." LC
    "Sir! Look!" Nazi Zombie soldier 1
    "!! This is!" LC
    "It's look like some kind of inscription..." Anon Zombie Officer

    "What lies in here exactly commander?" Nazi Zombie soldier 2
    "......"
    "Have you heard of this story before soldier...?" LC

    Long time ago... long before @Satan awaken, this world was created by the Overgod @Tony . In the process of creating the world he also created an item to destroy his creation, it name was < Delete Button >. Just as the name suggest, this thing can erase any existence in this world. It's said that item lies in here. But this item is uncontrollable, it could erase every existence but there also a posibility to erase the existence of this world in the process.

    "Sounds dangerous..." Anon Zombie Officer
    "*rummaging* It's our chance to defeat @Satan ... ah here it is" LC

    (LivingCorpse obtained < Big Red Suspicious Button > x1)

    "What this...? Look suspicious *pressing the button*" Anon Zombie Officer
    "Ah..." x3

    Suddenly the inscription changed...
    "This is bad isn't it?" Anon zombie officer
    "Yeah... also, you are in serious trouble when we got back..." LC
    ...
    "Sir! We have a report coming! They said, million of Hellbeing just emerged from the Plain!" Nazi zombie soldier 3
    "Is that the trial? Damnit! Request reinforcement! We will overcome this trial! Follow me!" LC
    "Yes sir!" x3
    "This will not gonna end well... for me that is..." Anon Zombie Officer

    And we back to the scene of carnage...
     
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  19. Potato

    Potato its doomed

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    im a rebel.
    Satan won.
     
  20. tocos10

    tocos10 Even more then the greatest Poster

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    I stand with Satan
    The battle may have been lost but the war is yet to end.