Poem Nuf poetry club?

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  1. chillo

    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    Has there been any? Just curious.
    Also whats the rule in writing poetry in English? (Not a native English speaker)
    Also since this in poem thread
    Fog and cold before first ray came
    Glowing dread from blanket of comfort
    Stomping giant step where we from
    Tides of regret that we can't abort
    Wake up son or you gonna be late
    Shut up mom I don't wanna go
    Get up now or I'll smack you this plate
    And so I ran to bath and loo
    Good enough for lazy and stupid guy like me:blobpopcorn_cool::sushi_sleeping:
     
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    AhoDesuGa Well-Known Member

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    https://jerz.setonhill.edu/writing/creative1/poetry-writing-tips-how-to-write-a-poem/comment-page-4/
    There is a blog thingy for poetry, if that helps?


    Nice poem sir. :blobpeek::blobokhand:
     
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    elengee Daoist Ninefaps

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    Savor this comment that i drop,
    One-handed i type this as i fap.
    Keys are getting kind of sticky,
    Aiming where to cum is kind of tricky. :blobdizzy:
     
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  4. chillo

    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    ewww, I hope you're not faping because of my poem. there's nothing sensual nor perverse thing there.
     
  5. AhoDesuGa

    AhoDesuGa Well-Known Member

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    You... never fail to establish your image as a pervert whenever I come across a comment of yours...
     
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    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    Humu Humu, sorry for being useless then~:blobmelt:
     
  8. GDLiZy

    GDLiZy Last of the Seeker

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    Rose are red,
    Violet are blue,
    You just make this?
    I guess you do.
     
  9. Lordnightowl

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    Here i sit,
    I'm at a loss,
    Trying to shit Tobassco sauce,
    Here i sit,
    I hope and pray,
    I don't blow my damned asshole away.
     
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    elengee Daoist Ninefaps

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    I can feel your pain, you've captured the essence of art. :blobsalute:
     
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    What about using kirito nitoryu ( dual-handed)?
     
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    elengee Daoist Ninefaps

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    It'd be more like a 'Zweihander'. :blobwhistle:
    p.s. you've just ruined Zoro for me. :blobshh:
     
  13. chillo

    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    more like a "bastard sword"
     
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    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    there was rose that white,
    and violet is violet,
    I bait and none bites,
    a question remain set.
     
  15. Miku

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    My body is made out of swords.
    My blood is of iron and my heart of glass.
    I have overcome countless battlefields.
    Not even once retreating,
    Not even once being victorious.
    The orphan is alone again, striking diamond dust on a hill of swords.
    But this life is not yet over.
    This false body was still made of swords​
     
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    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    here I lie,
    stunned at most,
    Tabasco never give me pause,
    here I lie,
    crushing hope and answering prayer,
    your asshole will suffer the burn.
     
  17. Silver Snake

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    I once tried to write poetry. People fucking hated it. It still hurts. *sigh*
     
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    Donutmindme [dounut][Zodiac:Golden snake][PROcracinator]

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    My book,
    the page, empty.
    A blank mind,
    a page still empty.
    I sit and sit
    and time passes.
    The struggle of writers and
    Artists’ block happens.
    Give up? No, yes? If empty, make it a mess.
    Give up? No. That’s right knock down that block!
    Fill that blank page, fill it whole!
    That’s right knock down that block!
    My book,
    the page, filled.
    A blooming mind,
    a page now filled.
    I sit and sit doing my work
    And time passed.
    The struggle of writers and
    Artists’ block passed.​
    ~Donut tried her best.​
     
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  19. grunt

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    On a white beach of bones a lone fisherman lays out his net

    Yearning for a hook aligned which haven't happened yet

    Black and sweet is the ocean, a whisper of the deep

    Calling out to the fisherman, “please, my love, your lust is bound to me”


    A creature with a fish's tail, beautiful and crowned in scales

    A beastly figure, with a shapely woman's breasts,

    Laid upon the rocky shores, in lustrous abound, in rest

    Her face quite like a warning, as if no approach is to be had,

    A queen, a vision, a dream, with a gaze turned back upon the past


    As the fisherman shouts, roused from her sirens song

    She answers his solemn voice, “man, come and get me, I have been here all along.”

    Such is the toil of a beast and a man

    The greatest challenge of all; come and get me if you can.
     
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