Spoiler Nurturing the Hero to Avoid Death

@scriptor plleeaaase my fluffy unicorn overlord...have you read the next chapter?

 

OMG I TOTALLY FORGOT



Thank you for the poke, I'll MTL and summarize in like 8 hrs, after I get some sleep. Had a tough week lol.

Please poke again if it's not up in 12 hours.

 

I wonder if this story will ever get a manga?? If so which managka’s Art would you think is appropriate for it??

 

Not one which draws grown ups like lil kids or draws the guys like girls
Sb on Madarames Niveau would be nice- though s not really fitting with the action scenes.... there was one i think fits... gonna need to look up the name though
Edit: Naono Bohra makes good fantasy/action scenes for a yaoi mangaka

 

There are some shoujo mangakas out there that show variety. I mean this is just a hypothetical sense. I personally would looove CLAMP to do this series. It would be one of their more shorter series with an actual ending. Sorry. Sour grapes about the XXHolic series. Also clamp has shown that they can do action on the page really well with a bit of curb stomping for good measure. However, I do like naono bohra. There was another really good yaoi managaka that did a very popular series that I liked but I can’t remember. I read so many it’s hard to keep track of it all.

EDIT: it was Moegi Yuu I remember I loved her ukes - super lovable.

 

Well. I dunno. MC is a bit of a pretty boy borderline girly so...

 

Haji? Has done some amazing fantasy.

 

Many with that kind of mc have crappy art-- for my taste
I prefere realistic ones like Madarame or at least one that show that ppl have muscle like Bohra

 

Ohh. I like madarame too. Some of her works is a bit depressing so - oooh!! I get it! Due to hero-kun I so understand now.

 

Typing it up right now.

 

Right? Some draw characters that look like claydolls wrapped in clothes with stiff movements.... simply horrible n a moodkill for reading

 

Okay, so new chapter is another extra from Alfred's POV. To be precise, it's Alfred's POV of the Church kidnapping event in the form of a flashback. 'Church' for the institution and 'church' for the one in the village lol.

-chapter begins with Alfred and Lian back to cuddles and slow life after the kidnapping. Lian's napping and Alfred's sneaking glances at Lian; Lian's shirt is open and there are signs of hickies from when they slept together.

-Alfred's flashback to kidnapping begins. Alfred hears from villagers that Lian has some kind of 'disease' and that's why the Church took him away. Supposedly it's for treatment. But Alfred already thinks something must be wrong, because Lian's always been perfectly healthy. He looked fine playing with the orphans at the village church the day before, too.
-Alfred is blocked by Church when he tries to see Lian. They say that Lian doesn't want to see anyone.
-Alfred isn't taking this sh*t; he's determined to see Lian because he thinks the Church is lying. Plus, if Lian really doesn't want to see him, he'd rather hear it from Lian directly.
-Alfred gatecrashes and fights everyone lol, while shouting Lian's name
-Lian shows up. Church outfitted him in white -- it's the Goddess' color and Alfred's fear of losing Lian to the goddess is renewed. Lian goes toward him, there's a bright light, situation is resolved just like in last chapter. So Alfred is able to take Lian home.

-End flashback. Lian wakes up and is super sleepy still. Alfred goes for a kiss.
-...kiss becomes something more. Of course. Alfred's feeling possessive lol. He starts feeling up Lian and Lian's only real complaint is about the public area they're doing it in (the study -- but Alfred says he locked the doors and later he has to draw close the curtains too).
-<3<3<3 do I need to say more lol?

 

Thank you so muuuuch. You are a national treasure. I love this story so much.

Also I am pretty sure Scarlet Beriko or Tanaka Ogeretsu could slay this story in a manga.

 

Beriko seems good

 

New chapter out~~~
It's Lian POV on the village festival
Goddess also appears on the end

 

Hey uh, @scriptor i know I just summoned you. And you are a busy lil unicorn. But. When you have the chance

 

Oooh, ty for the poke. As usual, re-poke if I don't post. I should have it up today or tomorrow.

 

Oh fluffy unicorn, did you come from England?

 

Nope. This is a magical unicorn from BL-land. To be precise, Chinese danmei-land~

 

Lol, so not the national animal of England huh. That would have been amusing.

Well, i guess it explains why I keep seeing your post in bl novels

P.S. thanks for your many spoilers