Discussion Once again, Gather up Boys, this is my first step! wanna follow me?

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  1. Simple As It

    Simple As It Well-Known Member

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    Once again, I want to gather up all of you boys in this "adult" adventure. If your age still on the clock please get out!
    A bit of heads up, this is probably going to lean a bit into NSFW content but don't worry, I follow by the rules there will be no actual nudity or anything, this is just serve as discussion for my work and my progress so I could get feed back from you ... yes you, people who interested and invested in this venture.

    Anyway, continuing from previous thread, I've an idea about making adult themed comic "parody" of Harry Potter: Hogwarts Mystery (a mobile game) and I've finished my first volume draft page and story and already done making the first uncolored page. So, if you're interested in this venture ... please be my Watchers on my Deviant art or at my Ko-fi oooorrrrr just watch this thread since I'm not yet using twitter or instagram. Yes, I'm self shamelessly promoting my page, cuz I need moni!

    Here the first page ... not yet colored since I'm too hyped up to share it with you!
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    Anyway, I hope the admins don't mind it too much. I'm just self promoting Mediocre artist with barely have any talent other than being perverted artist.
     
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    replay ★Milk and Honey smelling Merchant★

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    why 4 panels?
    you improved abit, but I think I like your style last year? I saw your drawings last time I'm sure, oh and some pacing will do the job. . . like on the 4 the panel, it would have been much better if you draw a mini him imagining his pants on the brink of going out, rather than a close up?
     
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    deanadiktus day-night reversal

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    Wow just like when me and my friends stupidly talking about what if those movies are porn:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
    Like hermione giving BJ for grades... 3 friends doing a potion and then accidentally made a strong viagra like mist when the cauldron explode... Or when they went back to time and got revealed the kinky things they are doing:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:....
     
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    userunfriendly A Wild Userunfriendly Appears!

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    :blobfearful:

    Run for your lives!!!
     
  5. Simple As It

    Simple As It Well-Known Member

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    How could you still remember me when I barely show up in Forum!? Amazing! anyway, my style is still same as ever since I barely improve anything other than anatomy and a bit of proper shading. I wasn't meant to create it in 4 coma type, it just happen I only draw 4 column. That would be good suggestion I'll try to implement it if possible, thanks for the Idea.

    ah also ... Female Rowan only available if your player is also Female ... soooooooo ...

    I know right? I mean there is so much potential in it ... albeit this is not a cannon story ... it's overall a good plot for adult adventure. Actually even the game dev said they will implement with a Date system where they could even have sex (probably only inuendo/implication).

    Pls don't.
     
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    replay ★Milk and Honey smelling Merchant★

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    welp remembered your avi~
    oh yeah, rather than sticking with panels or manhwa like theme. . .
    I think it would be good if you do it like those Japanese manga's like when showi ng a pretty babe, put a full body with effects on right side then a few panels on the right stating the comments or the likes. . .
    and make every pages compact but full to the brim of context? is that what they call it?
    don't be like those CN or KR , for just like picking up a sword takes up 2 pages. . .
    oh in case of ahem* scenes. . .
    I recommend the Hmanga titled Paradise Found. . . hehehe
     
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    Simple As It Well-Known Member

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    I already have few comic reference, but something like out of bound or panel were needed when emphasis something more greater or grander and should be used at the right time ... yes I will use it by all means but not always and to be honest, I'm trying to create a "phase" first, like creating a context why she has a pee pee down there and not just straight to sex scene. Despite being "parody" I still want to create it as proper comic with build up character and progressing relationship and not just shallow sex scene page by page.
    Of course with the build up and progression must be compact but not too rushed and not too long, I'm trying to balancing between the character interaction, the actual plot story, and the sexy time with many other characters.
    I have the draft and simple story board but there always be change at last minute, with hope I won't create a boring interaction or story progress before advancing into sexy times.
    Even I myself hate so much filler that drag too much ... but I don't know people will understand the context when they not even playing the game, this is also a bit difficult part.
     
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    userunfriendly A Wild Userunfriendly Appears!

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    Please stop traumatizing me!:blobfearful:

    I got into HP way, way before it got all popular. I liked it then, and not even the hype turned me off. So :facepalm:.
     
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    oy mate, I'm just giving a bit of update ... eh, actually. I just drawn a single poster like for the female character in the HP:HM Rowan Khana. Visit Here. WARNING! It's NSFW content so proceed with cation!