LCD One Man Army

Discussion in 'Latest Chapter Discussion' started by Arca, Sep 27, 2017.

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  1. iBakax3

    iBakax3 [Baka Ranger]

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    Meh, cheesy is fine. Enjoyable novels don't necessary have to be 10/10 materials
     
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    userunfriendly A Wild Userunfriendly Appears!

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    But the enemies ramp up...a lot.

    we're coming up to the point soon where a hidden organization is founded with the express purpose of hindering the one guild, who has taken too many first kills and titles...

    After the heroic lands, and whale hunting is the very cool voyage arc, where he has to fight off flying whales, and pirates...

    eventually, pretty much the entire professional EL gaming community turns on him...and he stomps them into the ground...all by himself.

    The big worry for me is hoping we can do justice (me and trans) to the epic scene mentioned in the third part of this spoiler...:eek:
     
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    RizYun #Kaffee4Laifu

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    as a lowly leech i'd say, then please TL more, quality doesnt matter so long readable. w/o payed ofc. a leech is a broke NEET, so we've no money to pay. but we will pray for your health when you doing the task. :)
     
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    tyes77 Well-Known Member

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    he uses a bugged skill to create a black hole and kills them easily. There was no threat at all and he ends up continuing to monopolizing the first title. Like it would have been a good place to get a defeat or show someone who can fight on even ground but no they continue to let him ride along.
    A novel needs conflict not easy wins. Not to mention the mc has little to no personality at all.

    Edit: that said thank you for translating. Even though I dropped it after said scene, other people might still continue on and like it.
     
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    userunfriendly A Wild Userunfriendly Appears!

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    I'm the editor.

    Yep the final battle had a lot of bug powers. But he was facing multiple armies...

    Plus, if you've read the chapters leading up to the final battle, he does struggle a lot.

    And the chapters with (deleted) was very cute and fun...and he does have personality, imho. There's a scene where he
    collapses
    and that was...well written.

    Now the author's writing style is not that great...so in the tradition of Chamber-nim, I've tried to choose synonyms that better explain the action, and makes it slightly more...dramatic to read. I know that's against my job description, however I'm following Chamber's precedent.

    I'm not only editor, but fan. :D

    Edit: all right, I'll admit it. I'm pretty sure Chamber, and I certainly do, supplement the original with a few strategic words to make the author sound better and explain stuff he left obscure. It's wrong of me...but I don't feel guilty. As little as possible, a word here and there...should I feel guilty?
     
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    TheHoblit Peak Dual-Cultivator

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    I look forward to the personality IRL stuff, really makes me feel like it was worth my time to read about good character development.
     
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    TiggerBane Always asleep yep yep yep| Canidae lover

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    Should you feel bad for translating another language into English and making it sound better in English compared to it's direct translation hell no.
     
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    Yeah, those lazy bums who post Mtls are despised by the community. Translator and I got a great teamwork going, and we try to put out good reads. ;)
     
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    Wujigege *Christian*SIMP*Comedian

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    There will be one more chapter this month. I will get more done but for a rainy day.
    Cheers!
     
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    Wujigege *Christian*SIMP*Comedian

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    Last chapter of the month for OMA, I have really come along way with all the crappy MTL I started with.
     
  11. Katherine

    Katherine EvangelineSatanaAnastasiaDewiMiyabiMelatiNefertari

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    :aww:UOHH!!! Thx for the chapter:blobparty:
     
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    waiting for a new chapter:blobdrool: i hope it will come out this week or next week:blobpats:
     
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    any news on a chapter release?
     
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    Wujigege *Christian*SIMP*Comedian

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    I was unable to get the 5th and 6th chapter ready in time. So both will be released next week instead

    Cheers!
     
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    :aww:Wow So Much Chapter!! Thx a Lot Wujigege:blobparty:
    Cheers!
     
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    Praise the sun!
    But, if he has been getting all items from the bosses he beats, doesn't that mean he's been getting armor as well?
    I wish author put more emphasis on the armor and accessories, especially since with the first clear bonus, they should all be of great quality.
     
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    Still two chapters short of six
     
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    HappyHavak The Laughing Sage

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    Does MC get a GF or any kind of romance? Or does MC stay a lonely person the whole time? I dont need details, just a yes or no thing.
     
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    Yes he gets gf, or so I read.
     
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