ORIGINAL NOVEL: I need some serious opinion

Discussion in 'Author Discussions' started by Jinnai.l, Dec 3, 2018.

  1. GDLiZy

    GDLiZy Wise Deepsea Mermaid

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    Omg, the multi-posts are getting out of hand. Use edit next time you want to add something to your post.
     
  2. Jinnai.l

    Jinnai.l The Jerkaiser, Ruler of 108th dimension,Jinny

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    Roger that maybe I should merge the two post after all...should I rework Chapter 3...it a pretty important chapter so I want to here as may opinion on the work as much as possible before revising it