Oneshot Otherworld Suicide Bomber

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by Arcadia Blade, Oct 27, 2016.

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Which would be a good concept for this?

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  1. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    This is just a one-shot. If you like the plot, i would try to make it a series but after all, i'm lazy. So don't get your hopes up.

    P.S: I need a better title for this if i'm making it a series.


    Once upon a ti-screw it.

    I'm just a normal guy who died because i was once used as a suicide bombing in a certain country. But i've now been summoned at a medieval-like world where magic and fantasy-like monsters are common.

    I've been summoned as a hero by a certain king and task to defeat a powerful being known as the demon king.

    But knowing that i can't cast magic or even have the strength to even swing a sword properly, i was now label as a failed hero and was excecuted on the spot.

    When i was going to heaven or something, i was then brought back to life, without even a single scratch on me. But...

    "Urgh..."

    The excecutor began to bleed from his armor and died on the spot. The people were shocked about my revival and death of a person but i knew that it was somehow related to me.

    I decided to test out that theory and got these results.

    I can die but not truly die. It means i can feel the pain, burn sensation and even the cut from a wound on my flesh but i'll come back to life once more, in perfect health. But when the person who attacks me, kills me, he will recieve what he inflicted on me.

    Its like i'm a double edge sword. But this also has its downside.

    He can harm me but nothing would happen to him. So, restraining me would be the best. But after knowing my body's constitution, i'm even weaker than an insect! That a good thing for me as well.

    Since they need to restrain me like how to hold a glass of water with two chopsticks.

    Because i'm like a certain suicide bomber, the king decided, no, more appropriately plead to me and let myself be killed by the demon king and save the world.

    After some dealings with the king, i decided to head out and let myself be killed by the demon lord.

    This is my start as a suicide bomber in the other world...



    Sorry that this was short since i'm not kinda used to writing long ones. But i hope that you'll enjoy reading this story!
     
  2. craBebe

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    'i' should always be capitalized. Even when used in contractions like 'I'm' and 'I'll'. The one thing that jumps out to me in this story.
    Haha otherwise it's an interesting concept. I like the title. Keep it :p
     
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    Wizjim Well-Known Member

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    It's just my suggestion for title:
    If it's a Japanese style: I got summoned as a hero but all I can do is kamikaze.
    If it's Chinese style: your title seems awesome :) (or suicide emperor or something like that :D)
     
  4. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Ah, my bad.
    I'm once focus my writing in JP style but maybe i'll try to make it a CN. I kinda want it to be CN since i never try it.

    Screw it, CN style...
     
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    die4jingshi Well-Known Member

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    "Saint of Resurrection" could also work, for a Chinese style title, or "Saint of Sacrifice"
     
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  6. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Heaven's Ultimate Return Specialist?
     
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    Awesome...
     
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    Noice
     
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    Stick to either past or present tense, I would recommend the latter.

    The plot is fun tho.
     
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    Gifting my enemies Death by Kamikaze
    XD
    Nice starting concept. Considering the fact that you're lazy and all, I won't be expecting much on plot and setting....just wondering how you will take this.
     
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    Actually, I just realised that the power itself seems more suitable for JP style rather than CN style. Unless that skill is a lost godly skill or a devil skill. Otherwise, it's more towards a VMMO with a bug like skill.
     
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    Black Heart A Perfectly Normal Individual

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    Looks good, I would like to see it being a series,From this info i can say that He's an M or on the way being an M, will He be a fucked up psychopatch MC??
     
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  14. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    If heading into JP concept, it would be the same while i try to make it into a joke at first then start the plot from there...
    If CN concept, i'll make it like he was reincarnated into a person who cultivates the return skill but can't use it properly due to the fact that he has a very weak body. but then unlikely found a very rare pill that consumes once's cultivation into a revival technique. This will have more plot and with comedy as well.
     
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    If it's a CN style , you have to make the MC very good at scheming or he has a profound knowledge in Dao of face-slapping which make people lose themselves in anger and attack the MC.

    Edit: or Dao of trolling:D
     
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    hmm, if im not wrong,
    a mindset of a suicide bomber is
    1. never uncertain, you cant be forced or be used, you chose that way of life yourself (or should a say, way of death bah-dum-tss)
    2. have an objective or a goal, that you beleive is worth or greater than your own measly life (hence the sacrifice duh)
    3. a belief, either a religion or a philosophy or a circumstance, because you will need a guarantor what would happen to you after death to carry on (for example, afterdeath you will go to heaven or something, or for another example, after your death, you would be able to send a meaningful message, or for another another example, a lifetime support for your family or your kidnapped family be set free)

    so you can't be "normal" per se
    maybe poor, maybe extremist, maybe brainwashed, maybe too religious, or whatever.

    and the protagonist here is very mediocre, very common. in short boring, or rather, there were not even a minute of detail of what the main character attitude and personality is.
    and he is narrating his whole life(and after life) in a very monotonous way.
     
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  17. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    In JP concept, this MC would be like your regular NPC that would blend in a Crowd or like just your regular Mob which would unlikely get carried away like he's like your bigshot. Which would get interesting because he would be like your regular yet more interesting guy.

    In CN concept, he would be that arrogant noble which tries to be like more powerful than the MC but is actuallly weaker than him and gets beaten everytime.

    In short, a loser.
     
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    Honestly, if we're going for stereotypes, KR would be the best for this type of novel.

    We can't really have a pussy, but we can't have someone who's a complete motherfuckingasshole to be the MC, thus listing out the generic JP and CN novels.
    Seeing how the main character dies every time, it's definitely not a lighthearted JP novel.
    And seeing how he can never get stronger... not CN either.

    (This bias is made after I've read about... 2(?) KR novels)
     
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  19. die4jingshi

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    A bunch of "yo momma" jokes might be a nice addition. Could even work as plot material in getting bad guys pissed off enough to kill mc.
     
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