Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Blanc Poem Pool

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  1. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Theme: Happiness and Time
    Title: Once


    Cherishing this moment
    Remembering this scene
    Freezing this thought
    So it's framed

    Missing that time
    Which was once a dream
    Craving that time
    Where food was always seen

    Just a touch
    Is all we need
    To share the warmth
    With those so dear

    Unbound and wild
    Running around
    Chasing each other
    Towards the clouds

    Words need not to be spoken
    With a glance all is known
    Thank you for the memories
    Stretching across the globe

    This day of joy, of laughter, of cheer
    Brings us together
    Once a year
     
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    *clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap*
     
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  3. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    \o\ Nice. Well done.
     
  4. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    :blobpeek: I'm glad you liked it! :sushi_hide::sushi_peak::sushi_hide:
    :sushi_singing: Tis the season to be jolly~ fa la la la la la la la la~
     
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    It is a really good short poem ~
    I hope you can make more~
     
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  6. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    ahahaha it is fairly short and not that complex \o/

    Mm well I'll try but I haven't been writing poems for a while now. I got all poemed out after so writing so many this year >~< Perhaps there will be a New Year one ^-^

    Have you tried writing poems?
     
  7. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    ^__^ haha, I'd been wondering why you were not writing as many. Its good to rest and let the creative juices recharge.
     
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    Me ?
    I truly like classic poems but unfortunately I'm not gifted with words .
    Last time I wrote something , people made fun of me for a week so I stopped .
     
  9. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Writing too much is just not good >~<
    Oh classics are nice \o/

    Aw, if you like it then do it! Don't stop because of teasing.
     
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    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    *nod nod* That's true. Though I miss Blanc's poems as well.
     
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    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    ... wut?! that is considered short?!
    mine are usually 1-3 paragraphs only @-@
    ooh what are classics like!
     
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    Theme: Evil intentions and secrets
    Title: I'll do anything for you, senpai~

    When I walk by, Senpai arrives.
    Shaking her ass like its nothing

    Wind blew up, opening the white world
    Better hide the gates with a black veil

    Lookers-gazers hauler on by
    Watch it, knock it off
    Better yet, how about I clip those eyes?

    Tick Tock, Tick Tock
    Clock tower strikes midnight
    Gotta part ways to another life.

    Alone in the dark, my smile comes off.
    A cheap farce for her heart.

    Keeping your drug alive in me
    Hyperventilation come up easy
    Squeezing the very life that displeases me.

    Nothing can be said, another one is dead.
    There are no survivors, my will wins alone.
     
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    Valera [Clueless][Kurasa][Alea & Mikki's sister]

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    I agreed...
     
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