Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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  2. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    *was forgotten about*
     
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  3. Arexio

    Arexio Blob Fanatic | AG Player

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    @Pyoo

    It's very different in tone from most of these. Well, since you asked...

    [Solitude]​

    Sinking

    Into a depth, with no end
    Searching
    If it's not found, must pretend

    No one can see the real pain
    No one knows I am not sane
    No one
    No one
    No one cares, what can they gain?

    Nothing
    At least from me, look not here
    Nearing
    The light ahead, endless fear
     
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  4. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    I actually think it's quite good~
    Sure the form is different~
    But what is important on poetry is the meaning~ not the form~
     
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    Arexio Blob Fanatic | AG Player

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    True.

    Here's a more traditional kind of poem. Both in form and in meaning.

    [A Parallel World]
     
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  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    <The Monster Within>
    Today was a good day
    There has never been any good day
    Everyone smiled in the end
    Courtesy smiles, forced laughs
    They told me I did well
    While laughing behind my back
    I wonder if it's all true
    Trust your heart, it's never real
    Reassure me I'm good enough
    There's never an enough
    Please tell me it'll be okay
    You know you doubt it yourself
    Chase away these dark thoughts
    But they're part of the real you
    Don't let me drown in darkness
    The only thing that's true
    The shadow, my only friend

    @SummerForest @Bielt @Osamaru

    For SumFo (lol): "Pride v Arrogance"
    I wanted to pick a theme with Summer Forest related themes but I figure Pride would be more fun :v
     
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    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    I like how you put it in words~
    Tough theme, but I'll try my best.
     
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  8. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    Great!
    I like it~
     
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  9. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    OwO)!?
    Summer?...
    Wasn't it twilight?
    ..
     
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    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    Name change!
     
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  11. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Hence why I wanted a Summer Forest theme XD
    thanks and good luck <3


    Best experienced in light theme
     
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  12. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    QAQ Gasp! *hugs*
    Its a nice twist, well done.
     
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  13. SummerForest

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    <Pride v Arrogance>

    My heart skipped a beat, blood raced.
    I wished I could melt in air.
    Lowered my gaze, stifled my pride,
    My temples throbbed in anger.
    No harm in saying sorry, chanted my soul,
    Though my ego cringed, vanity's scar.
    Pride knelt, before my love
    Arrogance stood, unyielding bar.

    @Pyoo , @Bielt, @Osamaru

    For @Bielt: "Dreams"

    Inviting my curious tiger to read it @Tilgarial
    And the doggo~ @Bad Storm
     
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  14. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    XD lol, I like how you took the same approch of Opposites as Pyoo did. Adds another layer to it.
     
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    As I said, it was a tough theme for me. XD
     
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  16. Tilgarial

    Tilgarial [Chaos Tiger] [Paradox] [Life]

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    Its good~

    May i join? :'p
    Though, i only read that single post, for now~
    Are the themes given by others, or how?
     
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    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    I can only refer you to @Pyoo
     
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    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    So sudden!
    I totally didn't expected it! XD
    :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

    Loved it~♪
    Short but full of meaning~
    Ayee!
    It's okay to join~♪
    I will write a poem with the theme forest sent me and then send a theme for you~

    The order will go like:
    Forest > Bielt > Tilgarial > Osa > Pyoo > Forest?
     
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  19. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Wait my theme was from you not osa lol
    We have our own chain so theres no purpose with me getting themes from him here as well
    Ill switch with forest then
    So itll be
    Bielt tilgarial osa forest pyoo
     
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    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Hmm should I join?
     
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