Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    The poems! They fill me with strength!
     
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  2. HotnCold

    HotnCold [Hail Hydrate][BlacknWhite][TrojanWorm]

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    This is a haiku

    Blossoming Flowers
    So attracting to the eyes
    Its fragrance so sweet
     
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  3. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    <<continueing>>

    <3 <3 <3

    I stay behind
    Bound by guilt and regret
    Holding your fragile heart
    With scars and marks from me

    I am here
    Chained by your sorrow
    Holding your gaze of longing
    At the me of the past long gone

    I'll remain here
    Tied down to my responsibility
    Holding you together
    For it is my consequence

    *applause*
    You're really good!!

    <<to be continued>>
     
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  4. Einy

    Einy Well-Known Member

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    thanks lol, I use to write poems a lot but stopped after awhile. When I was reading your poems they kinda got me interested in writing them again.
     
  5. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    <<continueing>>
    You love deeply
    Yet he doesn't come
    You wait patiently
    Yet he's nowhere to be found

    Grasping at nothing
    Hope is slowly lost
    Your reason for living
    Hope you haven't been tossed

    P.s. sorry, I turned the mood of the poem bad, did I?

    A companion
    A confidant of my life's decision
    A company through the consequences
    A complement to mine self

    alternatively,

    A companion
    Accompany my decisions
    A company through the consequences
    Accomplice in life

    A blooming color
    To represent my deep love
    For my source of joy
     
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  6. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Yays~ The more people poem-ing the better~
     
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  7. Einy

    Einy Well-Known Member

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    no such thing

    Losing hope I wallow in sorrow

    The pain tears at me cutting deep within my heart wanting to rip the memories of you apart

    I hear the larks cry in the sky but compared to my raging heart the difference of the sounds are stark
    Drowning deeper and deeper the despair builds and the road to the light becomes steeper

    Is this how it feels to be broken

    I've lost the light I cant see the beauty in the flowers no more, the skys have long since dimmed, the sounds of laughter are now sounds that burn my ears they are so singed

    Anger has seep deep into my core but still i struggle, this can't be the end but why can't I find the door?
     
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  8. Raneday

    Raneday Ara Arara

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    There's no such thing as bitter
    because I'm sure I'll get better
    All I just need is to erase this sorrow
    And have a wonderful smile tomorrow
     
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  9. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    The darkness shadows your eyes
    The anger burns your soul
    scalded and scorched
    A black heart

    A victim to love
    You want to hurt them back
    Revenge will be sweet
    But you'll still be broken

    Hope held
    Sorrow quelled
    I hold on to the smile
    And aspire to stay senile
     
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  10. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    Like limit still reached......... :( going back to sleep
     
  11. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Ha Ha
    #reachingforthelimits #hasreachedthelimits
    Good night my pope
    Hope you get better soon~
     
  12. Raneday

    Raneday Ara Arara

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    Reach the like limit
    waiting for Tony's Permit
    to increase it again
    But it is all in vain
     
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  13. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    @Tony see that beautiful poem!

    Nothing's in vain
    Even if it becomes mundane
    An increase we've gained
    Even if everyday it's drained

    Oh, also, I've updated my poem pool in second post
     
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  14. Panda-emic

    Panda-emic • ♡ • Notaborax's Eternally Gone Waifu • ♡ •

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    Thoust the lord over my heart;
    All be naught to me save for thou art;
    Let me with thee be, day or night...
    In the darkness, thy presence my light.

    Edit: Shakespearean fan.
     
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  15. Raneday

    Raneday Ara Arara

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    but it is the mods ultimatum
    So nuffers do their own to blossom
    For some people do it for their own gain
    Which will definitely result into disdain
     
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  16. Nargol

    Nargol Evangelist. Candy-san. Pope of the Cult of Pyoo

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    Out of likes again. Back to my cave I go.... :(
     
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  17. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    You shine over my heart
    Lighting my way
    Brightening my life
    I'd wish you shine upon me whenever

    Our leaders rule with a fist
    Thankfully their ears still hear our pleas
    We can't change those we disdain
    We can only try to inflict them pain
     
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  18. Panda-emic

    Panda-emic • ♡ • Notaborax's Eternally Gone Waifu • ♡ •

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    Yes, that would be my poem in modern english.
     
  19. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Yes. I'm sorry I didn't have enough brain processing power to create an inspired poem at the time :3
     
  20. Panda-emic

    Panda-emic • ♡ • Notaborax's Eternally Gone Waifu • ♡ •

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    Lol no its cool. I'm actually flattered by this