Poem [PARTNERS IN RHYME] Pyoo Poem Pool

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How should I structure or order this?

Poll closed Aug 10, 2016.
  1. Chronological

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  2. Thematic

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  1. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『Undying Plebeian』『Monochromatic』

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    Well, this is embarassing.
    "I will never fall."
    "I fall down and stop the play."
     
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  2. Pyoo

    Pyoo <Shopabirdy> <The Melody of Summer>

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    hehe >w<
    *hugs*
    \o/ i'm happy >w<
    this is fun to do, haven't had poem battles in soo long~~
    *laughs*
    the "I will never fall" is where?
     
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  3. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    *Smile and hug*
    *Giggles*

    Seeing you happy is nice~
    And having poem battles with you is great~

    I too had lots of fun~
    *Hug*
     
  4. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『Undying Plebeian』『Monochromatic』

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    Poem Battle #12: The Writers.
     
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  5. Risus

    Risus ✵ Enigmatic Poet ✵ Tiger ✵ Deadpanman ✵ Reese's ✵

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  6. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『Undying Plebeian』『Monochromatic』

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    By the way @Pyoo, [Kid] from #12 should be the third one as there are two more in #9.
     
  7. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Sharing your happiness
    Sharing your dreams
    Filling up with hope
    Shaking at the knees

    Those you call will come
    Slowly as the tide
    Rises high above the sand
    With inspiration galloping by

    Never too late
    Never too soon
    To join in the merry
    Taste of blue moons

    Congrats on the ever expanding list of people who like poeming \o/
     
  8. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『Undying Plebeian』『Monochromatic』

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    Taste of blue moons?
     
  9. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    You want me to deconstruct the poem or do you want to give your interpretation first? ^-^
     
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  10. Zone Q11

    Zone Q11 『Undying Plebeian』『Monochromatic』

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    Well, from what I understand...
    The first quatrain is about the happy feeling of giving hopes and dreams.
    The second quatrain is about her friends who will slowly join in masses.
    The last quatrain is saying that we are never too soon nor to late to join the fun.

    ...I just don't get how the blue moon would taste like.
     
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  11. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Aw good work~ that's pretty much the feeling I wanted to express.

    Blue moons happen rarely so even if you don't write poems often you can still write them. Those who appear rarely are still welcome ^-^

    But I would think blue moons taste like fine old cheese. XD
     
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  12. Carm

    Carm Sincerely, Yours Truly, and Forever More.

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    Do you even know what a blue moon is little sis?
     
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  13. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    A moon that's blue!

    Nah I know...I was going to write about it being blue cheese then I said it was a moon that happens rarely :/ Too early...it's still something rare though! Only appearing once a year \o/
     
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  14. Carm

    Carm Sincerely, Yours Truly, and Forever More.

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    That's not a blue moon.
    A blue moon is when there is two full moons in a month.
     
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  15. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    I know >.< It happens once a year though!
     
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  16. Fabulist Ed

    Fabulist Ed 〖He Who Must Not Be Tamed〗〖Workaholic〗

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    Blue Moon, you saw me standing alone
    Without a dream in my heart
    Without a love of my own

    Blue Moon, you knew just what I was there for
    You heard me saying a prayer for
    Someone I really could care for

    And then there suddenly appeared before me
    The only one my arms will ever hold
    I heard somebody whisper, 'Please adore me'
    And when I looked, the moon had turned to gold

    Blue Moon, now I'm no longer alone
    Without a dream in my heart
    Without a love of my own
     
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  17. Carm

    Carm Sincerely, Yours Truly, and Forever More.

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    More like 2-3 years little sis.
     
  18. BlancFrost

    BlancFrost ❄Middle child: Carm & Dev + Sio's FSIL ❄

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    Close enough.
     
  19. Carm

    Carm Sincerely, Yours Truly, and Forever More.

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    I guess.
     
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  20. Mindless-Genius

    Mindless-Genius Well-Known Member

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    *hug*
    I am feeling quite poetic these days

    Thanks cute little birdie for posting this
    It made me really happy you should know this
    I am getting poetic day by day
    I am getting better everyday
    It's the influence of NUF, I am sure of it
    But I don't regret it, I enjoy it
    May the number of creators always grow
    More than yesterday more than today in tomorrow .
     
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