Novel Phantasmic Legends: Heretical Dogma

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  1. Ignite

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    Hello! Ignite's here!
    I will start my own webfiction and this time not a prank. Also I apologize if I can't make a cover yet.T_T
    This series will be titled: Phantasmic Legends: Heretical Dogma

    Lore:
    On a distant universe of time and space, there exist a plane akin to the place we know since birth. Same atmosphere, same geography, the only difference was the size of the place whose enough to house thousand stars and existance of supernatural beings with enormous power. On that place exist a continent built by countless war.

    Ancient Greece, Thessaly.
    Land of allegorical narratives, home to mythical beings known as Titans. Titans have massive builts, massive frames. Titans was powerful, Titans was strong. Titans have reigned the Galaxy for thousands of aeons, until one such moment when a titan gave birth to it's 3 new sons.

    Chronos, Titan of time
    Created 3 little beings for unknown reason. He let them grew on his place where he and his deceased spouse supposed to reside. The place was named in honor of her, it was called "Lumina."

    Zeus, Hades and Poseidon
    Brothers at arms, sons of chronos.
    They're treated by chronos with utmost care, but he favored Zeus more. In return, Hades, the second child, grew hating both his father and his brother Zeus. Hatred filled his heart, Envy grew deeper through his roots. While his hatred for the two continues, his love for his brother Poseidon remains. He's the only one he can talk as well as the only ally he can get. Zeus on the other hand, just wants Hades's attention and love. He only wants to be acknowledged by his brother. While Zeus and Hades continues their dispute againts each other, Poseidon remains neutral and didn't side on any faction his two brothers made.
    But not so long before they reconsider their conflict, choosing tranquility over war.

    Thousands of aeons have passed since the previous events took place, human civilization arroused from nothingness to greatness. All thanks to their patron deities guiding the fate of humankind. As thanks for their blessings, humans built temples made from chiseled quarts and rocks. They've built the structure with tall pillars made from marble, ceilings made with rocks and foudation walls made with clay bricks and lime plaster. That served as the official place for handing the offerings. Statues dedicated for Zeus, Hades and Poseidon was placed on the altar. Zeus, now being the cheif deity was placed at the center. Hades on his right side and Poseidon on his left. Zeus rules over Lightning and Power, Hades for Fire and death Death and Poseidon for Water and life. As the brothers can't respond quickly if someone calls them when their far away, they choose to relocate their place on the center of the land. They built a sturdy castle atop of a mountain large enough for all of them to fit in. Now they live near the humans, but they warn them not to climb near the mount. For the place was dangerous for humans to wander by, for insolence will cause them to die.

    Sypnosis: A mysterious girl being pursued was cornered on a forest somewhere near Mount Olympus. Wounded and out of possible options, the girl tries to climb the mount. But on her way up she trips on a cliff, supposedly ending her life. That's what she anticipate, but as soon as she opens her eyes...

    Demographic:Seinen

    Genre: Adventure, Rom-Com, Fantasy, Supernatural

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    Table of Contents:
    Prologus

    0.5: Superfluous Info
    1.0: Safe at last?
     
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  2. Ignite

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    Prologus:
    Untold Tales of Ragnarok
    In a desolate land of wilderness, a large city built across it's oasis, situated near a tall mountain, a figure covered by redcloak have been wandering with a cane and a large straw sack. It was accompanied by a puppy with golden brown fur and silver-pinked eyes. The pup was wearing a colar along it's neck, symbolizing that it was domesticated and not a feral beast. Along the colar, an emblem with markings akin to a sundial was embbeded. The pup was joyfully following the hooded figure as it surveys the apple he had picked from a stall inside the market area. After carefully observing it, the man then proceeds to pay for the merchandise. Along with his newly aquired item, he exits the place and fed the apple to the pup, which was blissfully eaten by it. The duo continues their journey across the town, jumping from store to store. They soon entered a blacksmith's workshop and hands their the bag to the clerk. After a few moments of examining the contents of the bag, the clerk handed out 5 shinning round coins to the man on which the man had placed ontu his side pocket. The clerk gave out a pleasing smile and bid farewell to the two, as they finished the transaction that sealed the ownership of the items. The duo, once again, sets out of the store and head towards an abandoned building. Besides the entrance was a dark tiny passage that can only fit 1 person per entry. They entered the said path and continues to walk leisurely as the man cassually talks to his companion. They soon reached the end of the road, on which the entrance to a slum was located. The entrance has tall wooden gates, along with guard clad in leather tunic and weilds spear and a sheild. The guards heads towards the duo as they approached the gates, inspecting the belongings of the man in the process. After confirming that they are safe, they opened the gate and escorted the duo to a room near the gates.The room was dimly litted, illuminated only by a little lamp. The room was made from wooden planks piled between concrete floorings and ceiling made from seashells. Inside the room a stool and a desk was situated at the center. From there a woman with long red curly hair and chestnut eyes were sitting, wearing a thin collared blouse tops. She gives an aura of a mature woman with high political position and resembles that of a noble's prime advisor in terms of her getup. In her desk was a glass full of water and a plate with a full course meal on it. Alongside of the plate was a ledger, seemingly records of something valueble. The woman spoke, and the room started to be filled by her lovely voice akin to an angel. She gave her thanks to the guards for assisting the man to her quarters, and as a courtesy gave a warm, pleasant smile. The guards bowed their heads down and exits the room, closing the gates the man had entered before. The woman lifts her right hand and reached out for the hooded figure. She gently removes the hood and gave a kiss on it's cheeks. The hooded figure from before was gone, all that is left the woman on her desk and an androgynous long purpled-haired person with dark-brown eyes.

    "How's your first adventure sweetie?"

    ...




    ...

    Blood,

    Blood as red as dye.

    Blood,

    Covering my eye.

    ..A great war have started because of my insolence, have I remained obedient those innocent ones will remain alive..

    Running across a dense forest from a place I don't even know, hoping my pursuers wouldn't catch by my tracks as I passby.
    I'm beat, too exausted. Don't know how and when will my willpower giveway.
    My head was cloudy, my conciousness was already fading. But, have I fainted, will I remain safe from harm? I don't know, but I need to keep moving forward. I just need to find a place I can rest on.
    ..Not good, I can already hear their mounts for this distance. But I'm already at my limit... I don't know, someone help me....
     
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  3. Ignite

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    Zeus, Ruler of Gods
    Hades, Lord of the damned

    Both blood-brothers but never for a moment balance strikes this two.

    Two opposing leaders bound by never ending conflict, each wanting supremacy

    The world becomes the stage for their turbulent qualms, neither gaining peace nor contentment.

    Remnants of war can't be healed

    Yet the war never stops, an uproar even time can't intervene.
    ...

    However, for some reason they hath change their views. The brothers reconcile, promising armistice for good. The end of dark ages marked the start of liberal days, giving way for mankind to flourish itself.

    Aeons passesby, the brothers chose to settledown. Zeus married Hera, overseer of the worlds, while Hades remained as a lone wolf. Setting their differences aside, Zeus let Hades stay at his place as an apology. Hades gladly comply, but just on a course of months left the residence without saying goodbye. At that time the household was in celebration, for Hera was a month old pregnant with a child. Zeus then held a great feast, only noticing the sudden disappearance of his bro. On his chambers he left a note with a "sorry" written on it along with a parting gift he had procured during his stay, a deformed insignia of Hades's <coat of arms>.

    Came the day Hera's labor started, Zeus's feelings was mixed. He was happy yet sad, excited yet scared. Zeus merrily said he wanted a baby boy, for he will inherit his endless strenght. But Hera wished for a daughter, for it will carry the unparalled beauty she possesed. In the end they made a bet, waging housekeeping as punishment.
    ...

    A day have passed and the goodnews came.
    The delivery was successful and both mother and child was safe. But now, at last for the moment of truth. The helpers, slowly walking outside carrying an infant covered in thick-comfy blanket. The whole household was in deep tension, as the gender reveal can took place anytime soon. Zeus was shaking, for his manhood was at stake. His complexion turns pale, yet he still gives an intimidating aura. His pokerface raised, he gently held the child on it's forehead, then proceed to carry it on his arms. His calm composure was crushed when he saw something that will eventualy sealed his fate, he himself can't believe it.

    "How do you clean the toilet dear servants?"
    With that words from Zeus he accepts his cruel fate. From then on his role change, from a mighty ruler to a submissive househusband. It became a tale so grand, it even got a theater adaptation. His shame piling he cried with pleas, just not the lavatory he said with a please.
    ...
    It's a little princess,
    Hera gave birth to a baby girl.
    News have reached Hades's ears, whom was hiding in his lair. Later revealed that he was in despair, for a grand crime he commited to the family he dear. It remains unknown yet one thing was clear, the harmony that the brothers have built will be ruined by a smear.
    ...

    1|1|01

    Rise of the summer sun, the day after winter season, boys at the age of 18 summers has to undergone a ritual for adulthood. At this period they are tasked to hunt a wildboar, bring it to the village as a proof of success. At the same day a feast will be held, welcoming the kid to adult's life. After the feast their might will be tested again, for they are to be vetted by the final hurdle. They will be assessed if they possessed something adults must equip at all times, [Self Control]. The test needs for them to sleep with a nude maiden whom have also undergone the ritual, but if they succumb to temptation there would be punishment. [Death]
    They must control their desire and limit their lust, for the maiden were tasked to seduce them as hard as they can.
    If the tasked was fulfilled, rewards await them. For the boys it will be the accompaniment of the local prostitute, for girls will be the day they can choose their marriage partner. If the maiden chose her ritual partner, then immediate wedding will be conducted. With the blessing of the (Village chief) the two will be wed, with the seal of their kiss they shall share the same bed.

    For some the ritual was a bliss, for some it's annonying. With how they treat the woman like sex object, many voiced out their disagreement. While this was a custom passed down long before their ancestor, all they could do was endure this short hellish night while swallowing their pride. But since the ritual value free will, they wholeheartedly accepted it as the part of their life.
    ...

    "Tony!"

    Day of the adulthood ceremony, everyone prepares their share of work. Kids doing mock battles can be shown on the sidelines, warming up for their upcoming hunt. While the adults layed down firewoods that will be used on the feast.

    Somewhere near the forest, not so far from the foot of hills, lives a boy named Tony. At the age of 12, orphaned due to a large scale war, both his parents died in the hands of north barbarians. He lives alone despite the harsh environment around him, from the dangerous beast to endless criticism. Because he was born as a love-child and was an illegitimate son of a noble bloodline, he was despised by the villagers. And because of his good looks that boys his age envies, he was the constant target for bullying. Although he was treated like a plague, one family welcomes him wholeheartedly. And it's not just an ordinary family, a noble one at that. The family that opens it's welcoming doors to him was the noble gorverning their region, a high ranking household with tons of military achievement over the course of years. It's his childhood friend's household, Prometheus family. His friendship with it's princess, Diva, gave way to the growing relationship of the two families. Diva's father was againts the idea of her daughter being friends with a peasant, but the arguement was muted because of Diva's wish. At first, Diva's father was on constant dispute with Tony. Yet after he helped him fixed their lover's quarrel with his significant-other, changed his view to the child. He also see's great respect for the kid with his knowledge of combat, for even he who was heralded as the tempest of the east struggled defeating him. But one thing that Tony possessed which Diva's father have noticed was his pure love for his one and only daughter, not knowing that this will lead him to develop more attachments to the child. With the knowledge of that, he consulted his wife the madam. Asking for what course of action would be the best for the two, they both suggested a solution. The madam states her opinion first, marriage she rose. With a great shock for that turn of events, the father was almost at his knees. He only wanted to adopt the child, but at the back of his mind the crafty devil inside him grins. For marriage will seal him ties with his family and with his power, victory to every war was certain he thought. So without little Ton-Ton's knowledge his life have changed, from a normal peasant to a noble one. Bethrotted as they be, Diva's feeling was supposed to grow. Yet her feelings remained of that friends, that quickly changes with an event both she and her region didn't expect.
    Flooded with hordes of wild beast and feral creatures, many fought bravely on the frontlines. But with overwhelming numbers they lose to, Many lives were lost as they were killed by the monsters. That's what supposed to happened, not until Tony arrived. Clad in his father's gear, He slashed through hundreds and thousands of it until no one ever stands. Witnessing the boy they loathe and tormented turn the tides of battle, the villagers cried in despair. Wishing forgiveness for their hero's endless damnation, they offer their life as a slave for the boy who hath wiped the feild with blood. But of course with his kind-nature he quickly smiles and just laugh, for what they were doing at that time was unneeded. He just want them to treat him as a human, that, the villagers have devoid him for, he wished to be known as a man not a pest. Well, as the matter was disclosed then they just celebrated for their safety, all thanks to the boy hated by humans. With a great feast he was heralded as a hero, a gallant figure he was once on the feild slaughtering beast to save the place. Tales of him were retold by bards along their way to capital, villagers offering various gifts for the boy eventually to talks of marriage. That was when Diva, panting as she dashed through the village, exclaimed her disagreement. For she declared their engagement that Tony not know of, with the boy on shock she grabs his arms quickly. Stating that the boy will be their next lord, for the marriage will be held on that day have the calamity didn't arise. Now at peace, the hero sets forth ontu his new adventure. A new page opens in his life, now together with his partner they will challenged married life. Well, that would be a tale for another time.
     
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    uhm, ok . . .
     
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    I suppose she wakes up to see Zeus on top of her trying to get some of that punany, as he would with any other woman.
     
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    so his or her?
     
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    "T'is mine now, the beautiful maiden of Olympus."
    "What shall we do to that thing sir?"
    "Oh, you mean her chastity? Well well well, let us feast for tonight, tell the lord that subject was captured alive!"
    "As you wish commander, Squad! proceed to the stable!"
    "Now now, we're all alone here, let me serve you young miss with [Pleasure]. I'm sure you will, and will feel good cause I mastered the art of bedplay. Just lay down little princess, spread your legs like a bitch would do. hehehehuahahahahahaha!!!"
    ...
    "Tony, I know that you resent women from the bottom of your heart, but do know that statutory rape was a grave crime."
    "Hold your horses dear, it's not like that. I shall entrust you this girl's well being for now, for I still have something to do."
    "Wait a freaking minute, where on hell did you picked up this beautiful girl? And of top on that she was covered in blood, starked naked without an inch of cloth on her delicate skin."
    "Well, that's a long story. For now just tend her wounds and nurse her back to health."
    "Do Diva know this?"
    "I hope not, for she will kill me if she did. My time was up, better get moving for now."
    "See ya later sucker!"
    "You too old fart!!!"
    ...
    Darkness, so dark... Dimlitted or Light was absent? Neverthless I shall find my way out, out of this creepy place that I don't know off. I opened my eyes and was startled, for beyond me was endless pit of mutilated corpse. Some still decaying and others rotten to core, yet I witness this I didn't even barfed nor vomit, for the greater horror was still enclosed on the door in front of me. The one and only thing where light was not devoided, behind that was the exit it seems. Just to my surprise when I fling the door open, I saw myself getting tortured with horrendous methods and acts of indecency, men sorrounds me with great vigour, ramming their genitals across my body. Such foolish swines dare to defy thy body of mine, suffer for I will cursed even after I die. I curse you to die a horrible death, I wish for your disgusting things to be cut off. How could I end up with such a scene, have I done something that deserves my death? Something horrible to amount with this suffering? Answer me!

    "Ohoho, thou shall rest for now as lots of blood you have lost little princess, close your eyes and ignore the reminisces. Nightmares has it? then let it be by gone. Just rest quietly and enjoy the peace, for I know something scary you experience at least."

    I woken up in response to the voice I have heard, anger fills me as I saw the owner of the speech. An old baldie dressed on ragged shorts and tattered shirt, surely was from a common birth. His face was full of scars, truly what a farce. Was this oldie was one of those vagrants? those vile swine who hath done something unpleasant.

    "Little candy shall sleep, for the soup was still on steep. You shall rest for now, my benefactor will arrive anyhow. Though exact time I don't know, surely he's on his way within now. Or if you woken up because ye'r hungry, shall we share my humble meal of fish and drinks from barly?"

    "You vile swine what hath you do to my body, in my sleep did you defile my defenseless self? Shame on thee for an oldie like you only preys on us fays?"

    "What have I done to you little missy, was I to rude or too crude? Why so certain that I have caused mischief? Perhaps you were just traumatized with your past experiences, if you won't mind my shoulders here I can lend for your greivances."

    "Such foolishness you human have, and you think I will believed the nonsense you have sprout? An old baldie perverted looking ape like you? And a molester at that? Do you find pleasure abusing young un's and brat? Such sadist indeed you filthy swine was, ramming your genitals ontu my pure soul. Have I remained asleep, my chastity was at stake, for molesters like you thirst for youngling's wake. I curse thee who hath done vile deeds, die horribly and bodies to pigs shall be feed."

    "SHUT YE'R TRAP KID!"
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    Oriental Region of Tidus Abysm, oceanic region of the east. Situated upon the eastern side of the continent, it shares borders with Southern Hadean Plains and Northern Barbarian Tribes. It also has a vast blue ocean with abundance of sea life, perfect for the the region's inhabitants consisting mainly of fishermonks. And despite the shortage of land mass, the blessing of their deity was enough for them to live a blissful life.
    Pacific Paradise, Port City of Diva, formerly known as Fizz. The City was renamed after their great ruler and hero of the past, with the reason still passed down as tales by the bards. The city was once a normal one, built on the coast along the timberland of Thessalonia. But after the calamity of wolfen pack, they all decided to relocate the space. At that time they discovered the land of Fizzian Tribe, a native fishing village living their life fishing and enjoying it while swimming. But the land was completely occupied, so they hath lost their hopes. Just as they're leaving the leader spoke, they will provide them a place and in turn will yeild yearly tax consisting of fish. They all closed the deal and started the construction, but the adjustment of a farming village to a sudden change was no easy feat. At first, the struggle to even catch crabs was great, what's more to the nimble fishes? But just for the course of months they have grown to a fine fishing ville, with their leader guiding them as they will. Soon the village gro and was now cramped, deciding not to bother the residents all set a plan. They plan to build a floating city, posted on the heart of the sea. Not so long they realized the dangers of the abyss, they seek help from the wise. Suggesting to serve poseidon their life will be bliss. Have they faithfully reside on worshipping him, hope for abundance was not just a gleam. Sealing the pact between them marks the birth of the city, entrusting the governing to Madam Apokrypos the former Lord's spouse. The reason simply was the former lord getting promoted as the King's advisor for his feats at the feral invasion, not knowing Tony was the one who had wiped half of the entire force singlehandedly. He now serves directly under the king and can only visit monthly unless urgent matter was at hand. Without a proper leader the village would turn anarchaic, with the villagers agreeing on terms with a vote they entrusted leadership to her family. All was faring smoothly until a day madam falls ill, losing strenght from the mysterious illness she passed down the seat. She entrusted it to her daughter Diva, which gladly comply to her wish. Diva with kindheart lead the village to success, and with her powers bring them eminence. She decicated her life tending the weak, helping the poor. And in honor to her heroic deeds, the village cast a silver statue of the Noble lady. The now symbol of hope was placed in the heart of the ville, memoirs of the eternal love and charity they hath recieved. Soon the ville grown to a huge port city, and it's improving rather quickly. Love governs and Peace guards them, A Pacific paradise indeed.

    "I wouldn't mind to excuse myself out of your pleas, for I know I am not guilty! But thou hath offended mine pride as a human, what's more than a broken heart was a broken man! I dare inform you that we have saved your life, we know you experience great troubles but do not cross thy line. Little kids was out of my strike zone, fret not for indecent things I wouldn't done. I am but a humble man of this house, so forgive me if I snapped, for my anger did arroused."

    Same pacific paradise we're talking about, beyond the forest of Thessalonia was the house owned by Ralph. Friend with the local lord and: a former fishermonk. Entrusted with safe keeping the girl, he have tended her carefully. Thou confusion breaks in, misunderstanding was low-lying. After a brief talk they all calmed downed, meals hath been shared as they settle down. A long discussion have surfaced, for the girl narrated what happened.

    She was with her trusted servants merrily walking on the garden feilds, picking flowers for her mother she will yeild. With her basket she weilds, beautiful flowers the basket was filled. Although they were ask not to wander outside the place, the little princess to the gates she raced. Her servants, afraid of getting scolded by the madamme, followed the princess hurriedly. The princess running wild and free, to the guards she got pass and dash to flee. At last, outside she came, within her playful side she cundected a petty game. She hides behind the trees, her servants pursuing her was on their knees. For her father was strong vigor she inherited, her fervor also heightened. Watching every servants scatter as they searched, on the tallest tree she carefully perched. But to her dismay they can't find her trace, So she decided to go back to their place. On the tree she have docked jump out to the ground, with her strenght she land safe and sound. Walking again on the path she had take, she traced the markers she had make. But a shout she heard beyond the grass, crumbled the heart of this little lass. She witnessed a crime, swift as sound, as her servant was slashed by a hound. But it's not a feral beast as sime claim, for the owner was there beside that stays. Ordered to kill she had thought, reason to kill? Was it for naught? What terror her heart arrised, for law-breaker she greatly despised. Watching carefully as for the killer may notice, she backed away slowly so his attention won't be enticed. But a twig hath betrayed her and tell her location, the man on high alert chased in retalliation. The pursuit was long and tedious, the man was tired as he is. On anger he had shouted this.
    <[Damned brat you shall face my wrath, don't get captured all you'll be tortured with no halt]>

    "So what happened next?!"
    Ralph had asked, with his fist clenched on the table he clasped.

    "I ran as fast as I can, never realising that it will cost my sevant's life..."
    On a sad voice she replied, tears have filled her eyes. At the verge of crying the little princess is, Ralph comforted the little girl to ease.

    "There there, little lad. I know the pain of seeing that, what's more to a girl like you and a kid at that?"
    With a pat Ralph have given, the girl's sorrow was lessen.

    "Oh and how about the wound on your head, were you caught by the bastard's filthy hand?"
    Ralph inquired again with a soft, calm voice. Yet anger overflow his tone of speech, for a curse word on his mouth he screeched.

    "I stumbled upon a rock which caused my trip, hitting my head on the edge of the cliff..."
    The talk was interrupted when a familliar voice resonates beyond the place.

    "Heyo Ralphy geezer! How's the kid?"
    A man on a hunting cloak, carrying a bow enters the house like it's his own home.

    "Ralphy! The soup?! Where on earth did you hid my soup?!"
    A furious yet friendly voiced he let at the house, a tone common when you're with your buddy.

    "Wait for your share you ugly boy! I'm a bit busy here, you can get yours at the pot on the rear. How was the mission by the way?"
    With a laugh Ralph replied, he snickered as he tease the boy's envy.

    "Oh, little girl she was the one who had sent you here, do have questions ask them as he hear. Worry not for he was kind yet boast, you shall go now for inquiries will be reposte."
    With a pretty straightforward advice Ralph takes his leave, with the tablewares he hath retrieved.

    The little girl exhausted as she is, decided to sleep for tommorow she can't miss. But as soon as she lied down on the bed, her face and eyes turned crimson red. A nude man entered her line of sight, an erect elephant with ferocious might. With such embarassment she screamed and squeal, hiding under the blanket hysterically. With such denseness the man had wonder, why does the little maiden scream with such blunder. Just as Ralph came back he heard the sudden shriek, rushing towards the place thinking a bandit maybe sneaked. Just to his surprise he saw a funny scene, a fine young girl enraged on the obscene clandestine.