Title: Merge Riot! I'm planning to revise my novel. It may take some time but I would like to ask feedback on the following: Title - Is it confusing?Does it grab attention? Is it suitable for my novel? Synopsis - Is it interesting? Does it make sense? First Chapter - Does it make you want to continue reading the novel? Are there issues or things that irks you? Main Character - Any thoughts about her? Is she even likeable? I know it's often boring to read a lot so those are my main concerns. If you have the time to read all of the 12 released chapters, please give feedback on the following: Narration - Is it clear? Are there things that you want to recommended? Characters - Are they distinguishable from one another? Pacing - Is it too fast? Too slow? Just right? Concept - What are your comments on the presented content so far? If there are additional comments on other areas, I will really appreciate it. Thank you!