Request R18 Help me make a light sex scene

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  1. Nakakure

    Nakakure Zadiris Empress Faction. NNN member Nr.1.

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    As tittle said i want to make light sex scene, the settings are :
    1.woman comforting man who losing his mother.
    2.Succubus leading a man in sex
     
  2. Maid Chan

    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    And how do we help you.....? By typing our own version of the scene?

    Pfft make her appear so similar like his mother.....
     
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  3. Cupcake Ninja

    Cupcake Ninja [Kind Sage][Lord Benevolence][ The Great Paragon]

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    Boi you dont wanna ask me to do this cuz ill make his mom a hot milf and have him fuck her frail body inside the hospital. Sure it would just be a delusion cooked up by the succubus but still.
     
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  4. Nakakure

    Nakakure Zadiris Empress Faction. NNN member Nr.1.

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    Yes or maybe some novel with same settings
     
  5. Nakakure

    Nakakure Zadiris Empress Faction. NNN member Nr.1.

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    It's 2 different scene.
     
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    How about Ane Naru Mono?
     
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    xluferx [The writer who writes for fun][Meme lord]

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    Comfort sex/pity sex/taking advantage sex?
    Now set the mood, with light talks, teasing and seduction.
    Kisses are important!!
    Daring touches!
    Massages and groping!
    And since she is leading then she must be on top!
    If you want to spice things up you can use a few light fetish play!
    :blobnosebleed::blobnosebleed:
    And please nothing of dirty talk while fucking
     
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    Read a few DJ is all I can say.
     
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    ahh yes, chinese novel readers. a group know for it's sexual knowledge
     
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    SageRozenburg [Not a pervert][Not Suspicious]

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    Add a beautiful girl, farting on the man's face, this doesn't fail to give me hard-ons, No matter how many times i read this.
     
  11. elengee

    elengee Daoist Ninefaps

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    *looks at gender on profile, thinks about making joke about teaching by example but is too afraid to talk to women*:blobsleepless:
     
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    Stick it in her pooper
     
  13. Nakakure

    Nakakure Zadiris Empress Faction. NNN member Nr.1.

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    Pftt that some hardcore fettish
     
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  14. Rivenn

    Rivenn 【I eat fruit】【commonhouseman】【RV_n/Rivelle】

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    query:
    how erotic?
    what is the focus? the sex or the dialogue?

    *not that I'd write it but this is important, what you want to convey~
     
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  15. BigBadBoi

    BigBadBoi Well-Known Member

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    Futa Dicks
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    Lots of it
    I was gonna make a short story about setting one but I can't be assed to make it
     
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    Try reading Love Me Again by Yuan Yuan, specifically, Chapter 8 to get in the mood
     
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    Nakakure Zadiris Empress Faction. NNN member Nr.1.

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    For 1st setting it's dialog for 2nd scene it's sex
     
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    Exactly. Why are you writing this? What purpose does it serve to the larger theme of your story? Why are the characters doing it? How would such characters go about doing it? A sex scene for the sake of a sex scene is porn. Different site. Try Reddit.
     
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    elengee Daoist Ninefaps

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    You can name the novel 'Pull my finger' , although the reviews would say your novel stinks.
     
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  20. Airisu

    Airisu Where is my daily GL

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    Mhh, if you want to make a light sweet scene, abouth soothing, either you make it really gentle or desperate. I dunno what is the settings you have in mind, but for the first, I would say it should be something not forced (I mean, it should be somehow a sweet-sour scene, since you are depicting a sad moment). So, no dirty talk, nothing that feels like a mere porn. I say, even if you want a desperate feeling scene, you should put kindness in it. Gentle touching, maybe the woman that kisses away his tears, stuff like that.
     
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