Short Story Random Practice Stuff

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Ruyue, May 26, 2021.

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  1. Ruyue

    Ruyue Well-Known Member

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    Im just going to be posting whatever I worked on.
    None of this should be licensed.
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    **If your wondering why the art-style or some of the scenes are like this, its cuz author is a "questionable" artists/author. The author of this cigarette head draws h****i lol**
     
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    10/10. He got the grades and the girl. And she got the first rank(er). A win-win situation. :blobmelt:

    Thank you! I really enjoyed it.
     
  3. Blitz

    Blitz ⛈️ awakened from the reverie❄️

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    Cute~:blobneet:
    They obviously get tied for first place:blobhero:
     
  4. Bobasis

    Bobasis Weeeeee

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    That was really cute :blobcatblush:
     
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    Plan failed successfully
     
  6. Munimuyi

    Munimuyi Chili <33

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    That was nice
     
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    Bad Storm no thought, head empty

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    Lmao, I think I just saw someone ride a train without looking at the signs and got herself swept off into dreamland.

    That was a nice read.
     
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    Somewhat reminds me of this oneshot:

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    AMissingLinguist [Not Here][Blank Sect][Nuffian #N]

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    This is some sweet romance. blobmelt_thumbs
     
  10. Halcyon Observer

    Halcyon Observer Full stop

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    If a person can retain their grades even after slacking off extensively, you might as well accept defeat.

    Not to say that you should give up, but, to be perfectly honest, you probably won't overtake them.
     
  11. Lurking

    Lurking Do the dead suffer, or is it a sweet release?

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    i can't see the whole panel ...incomplete story? Certainly not what others are discussing

    @Ruyue really good art! Nice flex with those hands
     
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    Ruyue Well-Known Member

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    Wait no. There seems to be a misunderstanding, this art isn't mine. I only translated it and touched up on some of the areas that I thought could use a little work.

    All of the panels should be there.
     
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    Lurking Do the dead suffer, or is it a sweet release?

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    I dont see a complete story

    i see a snippet. Hands over papers, one sneaking closer, then grabbing handhold grope. Then girl eyes widen and it ends.

    And here i thought Nyann had an art cabal with you
     
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    Ruyue Well-Known Member

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    I can send you a google drive link version if you want.
    https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=1PcoMttH7L6lYz_YlOrw0GHXojAq9NYA2

    Yeah no, my skills are not quite good enough yet. I need to practice more.

    I should have specified that I was just translating it lol. Im just using this place as an area to store all the things I will be translating/drawing/coloring/etc.
     
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    I can read the complete story though. Clearly, Something Has Gone Wrong on your side.
     
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    Take my like and leave. Lol:blob_catflip::blob_catflip:
     
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    Reflection: The art was nice, the dialogue was kind of sht.
    Author: Unknown.